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brokenheart61

@brokenheart61

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

you r a talented writer must say dear . very well written .

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Rupeshika Singh

@RupeshikaSingh

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey nice....premeer one shot...

but is sad 1 but loved....

continue so interesting...

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amana

@AmanaR

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

ooooooooooooo ur dimag doing bakwaas again huh??
lol i love it, u tell it that
fab part priyo
how do u come up with such distinct one shots so fast??
ur really a phenomenal writer
keep up the great work!
Amana

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daniya

@d@niy@

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

hey priyo... its so sweet.....amazing....👏👏👏

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: A...
Very nice extract. i think yu r a talented writer..why do'nt yu write a full ff on prem heer.once again it was sweet.

God bless yu

Thanks for commenting😃 I am touched by your compliment....I do have two ff's down the line... do read them😳

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: zaibun
ok dis waz rlly gud dis is sooooooooooo not a one shot u hv to continue it n bring dem together orelse ur going against da law of separating heer n prem

You need another shot??? lemme think...🥱

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: gr8ronny
aww that was sweet please continue i dutn read ff's but i njoy ur one shots.......... and if u do decide to rite an ff please pm me an lemme kno wen u start.......
luv
-iksha

hey Isha your comment was really sweet.. I am glad you enjoy the shots.. well I have 2 ff's down the line.. you can read them if you want😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: bd670816
aww, so good priyo.
loved it very much.
tc.

Thnx for commenting dear😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: pooji123456789
hey priyo
awesum one shots
soo sweet
loved it every bit of ur premeer one shot
toooo gooood amazing

hey poonam thanks for commenting...I am glad you like them...😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~
wow this is amazing!!! really very nice..
tumhare dimaag ka bakwaas kya mindblowing hai!!! loved it!!!

keep it up.!.!.!.!....

~nikki

Hey nikki your omment was really sweet... chalo koi to mere deemag e bakwaas ko mindblowing bolta hai😆...thanks again