(FF)Kaise Mujhe Tum...| Ch 2, Pg 5|Apr 4 - Page 3

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-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Uhem, so I can reserve this spot? ๐Ÿ˜ณ If I can't...you can delete my post! ๐Ÿ˜Š

*unreserved*

11....๐Ÿ˜† Oohhh so you did the sister story here? I love it!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Yes...I did the sister story here!๐Ÿ˜†

Ahhh Zahra's getting married to Prem!๐Ÿ˜ƒ how sweet is that? Oooh and Shabo as his sister?? totally cute!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ She's going to be fun to read about!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Shabo is Prem's sis...who will help Premeer re-unite..and will try to get Z in her plan to re-unite Premeer๐Ÿ˜†

Okay so that was a perfect introductory chapter! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ We got to see both the girls characters totally clear! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I'm sooooo glad Zahra's not some evil step cousin type person, although I do feel bad for her being DJ's daughter, but shes better than ash!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thankoo. Z is not evil. Infact, she will help Premeer come closer.

I love what Heer's wearing you described it beautifully, and awww I loved where she was thinking about all the "made for each other" type stuff!๐Ÿ˜ณ Very realistic!
Yea. Exactly...like any girl that would see marriage happening in her own house, is bound to think about it...

Awww Poor Zahra, didn't know what to wear? And seriously...bedsheets?๐Ÿ˜† I love that!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ Heer's just totally awesome in all that!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ha, Ms. Fashion Designer, Heer is!๐Ÿ˜†

Can't wait to see what happens when Mr. Prem Juneja comes to see Zahroo! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ
PJ will rock...๐Ÿ˜‰

Love you loads shifu,

Meera๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thanks for the comment Meeru!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Shoot Meera beat me to it. Well at least I get to post my comment before her๐Ÿ˜†

Good girl Ravs!๐Ÿ˜†
Zahra's Heer's cousin? Cool! Wait...if Prem is supposed to fall in love with Heer while Zahra loves Prem, this is gonna be an awkward love triangle isn't it? I love it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Yea...No...Z doesn't exactly love Prem..you will find out later!๐Ÿ˜†

Aww Heer doesn't have an parents? Hopefully her her chacha and them are there for her =) And she's totally wrong about the made for each other part๐Ÿ˜† I'm guessing she hasn't heard of the saying opposites attract?๐Ÿ˜†

No. They died. Nope. She hasn't heard the saying Opposites Attract, typical Heer๐Ÿ˜†
Zahra doesn't have any Indian clothes?๐Ÿ˜† Lucky for Heer's there to save the day. I find it cool that she could make a sari out of bedsheets. I think I'll go try that =)
Yea...I wanna try the bedsheet thing aswell.๐Ÿ˜†
Loved the update Shifali and congratz with your 11th one๐Ÿ˜† And good luck trying to continuing all of them๐Ÿ˜†

Thanks for the comment Ravs!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
Thanks Happy!

Originally posted by: sugi77

hi shifali 11 ffs....oh god how iam going to give comments to all๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰..๐Ÿค—thnk u sooo much for anothr ff.all ffs r amazing and unique . plzzzzzzzzzzz tell me what r u eating?๐Ÿ˜‰.waiting for nxt pt๐Ÿ˜Š.

Haha, and imagine me writing all of them!๐Ÿ˜† Thanks for liking all the FFs Sugi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: shabo24

omg. I log in, all the way from NJ, just to comment on all your updates and this is what I find. ANOTHER one. ๐Ÿ˜†

Hehe, Oops?๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

I love the concept of the story...how even though Prem and Zahra were supposed to get married, Premeer's love is so strong that it defied even that. Hopefully Zahra won't kill you. I still can't get over the fact that you killed Radz di. ๐Ÿ˜†
Yes. Premeer's love is strong. Z won't kill me, as I have already killed Rads๐Ÿ˜†

I'm a Juneja. โ˜บ๏ธSorry I glazed over for a second, but I loved "Shabo Juneja" (โ˜บ๏ธ) description about that advice. ๐Ÿ˜†
Yes. You are a Juneja๐Ÿ˜† The name actually sounds good Shabo. Shabo Juneja...sooo powerful!

The first part was well written, almost like a Cinderella setting but Zarha isn't evil. ๐Ÿ˜† I love the thoughts you kept putting in! Specially Zahra's opinions on the clothes...and Heer...what a passion. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Yes. Z ain't evil! Yes..Heer...what a passion!

Can't wait to keep reading! Good luck with all 11!

--shabz

*skips off to comment on the rest*

Thanks for the comment Shabz๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
I tried doing the bedsheet thing but my mom came and yelled at me๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
Thanks Pooja

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

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Okay, I am not in my senses at the moment, so I will need to come back, re-read, and then comment, ๐Ÿคฃ!! xxxxxxxxxx
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WOW Z...you seriously DO NOT seem to be in your senses!๐Ÿ˜†
Sorry I am editing this late, just been so busy with uni work!! Anyhow- you don't know how shocked I was to see my name in this- It came as a really big surprise- thank you Shifali!!! ๐Ÿค— You really didn't have to do this, but I am touched nonetheless!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ I'm 25 years old?!! ๐Ÿ˜† Hehe!! And I'm the parallel lead?! So cool!! Don't worry Shifali- I'm not going to kill you ๐Ÿ˜†- although I am kind of sad that Prem will end up leaving me!! But Prem is meant for Heer, so I won't complain!! ๐Ÿ˜› Please don't make me too depressed at the end of it, when he does actually leave me for Heer!!
๐Ÿค—No need to thank me Z. Yea..you are 25๐Ÿ˜†. Yea..parallel lead and NOT mean...or evil. You will actually help re-unite Premeer. I promise NOT to make you depressed.
And Shabz is in here too- As Prem's sister- LOL!! So she is there to give Prem good advice- well I think I will be having a few words with Shabz if she ends up advising Prem to dump me, hehe!! ๐Ÿ˜† Okay I am TOTALLY opposite in your FF to how I am in real life!! ๐Ÿ˜† I soooo do not like business, hehe, and I prefer wearing Indian clothes- yet I do jeans and stuff whenever I go out- I never wear salwar kameezes when I leave the house. And I'm DJ's daughter- LOL- Glad she isn't evil in this- I hope she doesn't get all evil when Prem falls for Heer though!! Heer's my cousin- really interesting, things will get really awkward when Prem chooses her over me, especially since we'll be engaged- I really hope I don't act all spoilt and try to ruin things for them, or get all angry and too emotional!! ๐Ÿ˜›
Shabz is in it aswell. I will try to add as many ZS scenes as possible...fingers crossed. I know...I like normal Indian aswell, but I had to show some diff between you and Heer. You won't do anything bad.
I just love this chapter- already we are getting the idea of what my character is like and how it differs to Heer's character. It was cute how Heer begins to think about her own wedding and dreams when she hears about the ladke wale coming to see me!! So ironic that the guy coming to see me will end up being the guy of her dreams! I know what she means about going to a wedding that is of someone close to you- the atmosphere is just completely different to when you go to a relative's wedding, or a family friends' wedding- nothing can beat the feeling you get when you are a part of your family member's wedding, or your own wedding for that matter!!
Exactly, and as Ravs said "Opposites Attract"...๐Ÿ˜† I have been thorough that. If it is a wedding of someone close, I am like all jumpy, and when I have to go to a long-lost relatives wedding, you don't know how much I dread that day!๐Ÿ˜†
Me and Prem made for each other??!! ๐Ÿ˜† LOL. It's good that she realises that that is an assumption- things don't always work out the way we think they would!! Hehe, I am so funny- I love how I don't see any problem in going down in front of the ladke wale in western clothes!! So unlike me, but really funny to read!! And wow- Heer can design clothes- I guess she loves textiles then- a creative and passionate person to keep Prem Juneja on his toes, hehe. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Hehe, she is indeed creative...but she is limted to only showing her creativeness infront of the people she finds comfortable with!๐Ÿ˜†

I loved it Shifali!! Can't wait to see what happens next!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanks for your comments Z!๐Ÿ˜ณ

Love Zahra xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
11th ff alll ur ff are fantastic
awesum chap 1
tooo gooood
loved it

Thank You Poonam.
@ Maddz: Thanks!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

I tried doing the bedsheet thing but my mom came and yelled at me๐Ÿ˜†

Haha, sneak some in...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: munam_13

* singing* *congratulations!!! and celebrations!!! for 11th FF of your's yaar* LALA๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Thanks Priyo!๐Ÿ˜†

The 1st chap was really cool... Zahra is Daljeet's daughter????๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿคฃ... she's getting married???๐Ÿคฃ ..wait till I ask treat from her...๐Ÿ˜†... aww our Heer's talented...she made a saree out of bedsheets and pillow covers๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ go heer.. i am coming to you to learn this art...๐Ÿ˜ณ Yea, so Z is DJ's NICE daughter and Heer is indeed creative!

Thank you, Premeer928
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

11th FF? 11?? Woah. You are seriously awesome.

And this one has Zahra, and Shabo? Shabz is going to be interesting to read about.
Yea..Shabo will be interesting to read about...and Z is no less!๐Ÿ˜†
Loved the first part, Heer's introduction and Zahra's as well. Loved how Heer thinks she and 'the ladka' will not be 'made-for-each-other' because they are so different. Hasn't she ever heard that opposites attract? And glad that Zahra is not the evil cousin type of character. She seems fun.
Haha,๐Ÿ˜† Z is indeed not evil and her along with S will play cupid for Premeer...just wait and watch!๐Ÿ˜†
@ Shabz: get over it already!
I know...and stop giving me the guilty looks Shabz๐Ÿ˜†
Shifs, cannot wait for you to carry on with this. It seems so awesome!
Love,
Radz

Thanks Rads for the comments!๐Ÿ˜ณ

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