(FF) Chaha Hai Tujhko| Ch 1, Pg 7| Apr 4 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😃

*unreserved*

record breaking moment, for the first time I've unreserved so quicklY1😉😆😆

Yay Meer!😆

I loved the sketch out!😉 Aradhna, what a nice name....hey! isn't the mere sapno ki rani song from here? or am I losing it?😆 Ravs...me need help with something semi Yug related!😆😆
Haha, Aradhana, I didn't watch the movie😆

Oooo you're starting "kinda" like the movie...I say that, because I do not wanna give ANYTHING away!😆 But I loved the, you'll be her everything line!😉😃😳
😆😆Thanks Meera, for sticking up to your promise and for not giving nothing away!😳

Can't wait for the whole ff! 😃 you know that!😆😆😆 I could go on and on describing my imense love for KKHH, but ppl might get bored...so instead, I'll just go and change my avi to my FAV avi of KKHH!😃😳
Haha, send me an Avi aswell!😆

Love you loads Shifu,

Meera😳

Love you too Meera!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey..

just read the preview..and me lovin already!!!
KKHH is definately anEVERGREEN SRK-Kajol movie.. its one of my favorites..i like how u have started kinda like the movie did. waiting for the FF to offically start!!!
upadte wen u get the chance..and take care..
~nikki😳

Thanks Nikki. I will update today😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Well, it's really nice to read Meer and radz convo but i realized i should probably reply to the FF!!!!!

😆😆😆Guess, you shall?😆
I like how you are using the KKHT concept!!! And Lucky/unlucky Radz!!! Lucky to be with Prem for sometime and not so luckt that they couldn't have their proper happy ending.....
Erm.. Yea..but Rads did have a proper ending...some how😉
But you still have Yug in the other FF Radz!!! 😉 lol, anyways like the concpt of the story and want to see how you make it your own!!!
That is Ravjot😆
You are a very talented writer and i like reading all your FF's!!!!
Thanks Mads😆
Update when you can, we shall all wait eagerly!!!!
Maddy

Thank you soo much for the comments Maddy
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
@ Purplestar: Thank you

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey shif
10th one omg wow
awesoum preview
kkhh whoa
i am liking it already nice

Yea...thanks for your comments Poonam😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Hiya! *wave*

You know what the weird thing is? I was listening to 'Ladki badi anjaani' the other day and I thought of something like this...I am so glad you got to it first though! I already like the starting...Although, seeing Radz dead kinda made me wanna laugh. (*ducks mysterious flying knives*) I cannot wait to read more!
Love,
Bhav (:

Hehe, I love every song from the movie😆 Hehe, Rads won't mind😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: munam_13

Shifuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!😃😃😃 *gives a long whistle* congratulations on your 10th ff.. and this is one is inspired from my fav movie K2H2... awwww.. awesome thinking... hats off!!!!!! but pls update soon😆 ....

cant wait to meet Heer Juneja😳

Thankooo Priyo😆 I will update soon😳 Heer Juneja would be fabulous yaar!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

*edited*

Okay, seeing my name in reference to being burned had me a bit taken aback. I forgot how the movie started. 😆😆 Then I remembered, and I relaxed. (Plus I automatically thought that I was being burnt alive. Don't ask. I watch too much Supernatural.)
Haha, OMG...you are sooo supernatural Rads!😆 I would NEVER Do that to you!😆
And how sad is that. Prem really loved me huh? 😳 And I really loved him. And aw, my little girl will be left without me. *pouts* Here I am, physically eighteen, and a mother in a story, and already loving that (not real!) little girl. I need help. I can even imagine her. *sigh* It sucks sometimes having so many neices. One of them would be perfect for little Heer. 😉 I cannot wait for the real love story to start though! My favourite parts of the movie were always the summer camp bit.
Prem really did love you...or shall I say, cared for you? I like to have neices aswell...they just...they are just angels! I shall do the summer camp soon😉
Though I do want to see the flashbacks, just to read how you write me. 😆 And how Prem and I fall in love. 😳
Prem and you...lemme see!😆
Loving it!
Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
@ Zaibun: Thank you loads for your comments yaar!😳

Originally posted by: sugi77

omg! 10th ff👏.thank u sooooo much.its best to tune to ur ff than the crnt track.

vry excited see thm in the plce of SRK-KAJOL.plzzz continue asap.

Thanks Sugi and yea, I shall continue soon!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

I'm here! =)

Wow awesome preview! Totally a touch of KKHH.
Aww Radz died?😭 And his daughter's name is Heer? Can't wait to see how this one will turn out
Yea. The daughter's name is Heer😳😆
And congratz on the 10th one😃😆 And like always, I'm gonna ask, do you pinky swear you'll finish this one?😳
And Shabz, hi =)

Thankx for the congratulations Ravs!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50

Recap:

Prem nods his head. Rads smiles and lies down on her hospital bed. Prem gets up and stands beside Rads face and kisses his little Heer on her forehead. Rads smiles seeing Prem and Heer and finally gives up her last breath. Prem cries, holding Heer as close to his chest as possible.
"Heer." Prem says as he keeps staring at Rads burning body. "My daughter."
Chapter 1 -
Prem's Point Of View
9 Years Later
"Heer! Heer! Wake up Heer! School nahin jaana hai kya?" I exclaim, seeing that Heer was still asleep, in her cozy little, fruit coloured room.
"What is it papa? Let me sleep!" she says, sleepily and turns around to face the other way
I sigh. "Heer! Yummy ice-cream!...with a cherry ontop."
She doesn't reply. I bite my lip. "Heer! Mama ka 9th letter!" I exclaim, enthusiastically.
Heer wakes up with a jolt and looks around."Where? Papa! Where is the 9th letter?" she asks, looking around her pillow, under her bedsheets, and after not finding it anywhere, she looks up at me, in a 'I-knew-this-was-a-joke' manner.I giggle.
"Sorry, but that was the only way to wake you up." I say, shrugging my shoulders, and holding my ears.
Heer crosses her arms and turns to look the other way. I stop giggling and place my hand on her chin.
"Aaay Heer, Papa se ghussa ho?" I ask. Heer doesn't reply but just nods her head.
"What do you want me to do?" I ask, hopefull that she will give me some answer, this time.
"Letter." she says, finally breaking her silence.
"Tomorrow. Birthday kal hai na." I say, smiling back at her.
"Toh phir, you go! I am not gonna talk to you." she states.
"Where should I go Heer?" I ask, sarcastically, asking for some pro advice.
"Mama ke paas!" she replies, but suddenly holds her tongue and looks sadly at me. I turn my face to the other side, and get up to walk away, when she holds my hands.
"Dard hua?" she asks, politely, and trying her best to make amends.
"Haan." I reply, quietly.
"Sorry Papa." she says, realising her mistake.
It was always like that between Heer and me. We never talked about Rads. We both missed her so much, that it even hurt even thinking about her. But I knew one thing, as much as Heer tried to hide it, she really did miss having a mom. Dadi is not enough for her. Main uska Papa toh ban gaya, but I could never become her mother. I could never even come close to what Rads would have done if she were alive.
"It's okay Heer." I say, hugging her tightly. "Now let's go. School se chutti okay? We will go to something more fun...akhir, you birthday is tomorrow na?
"Haan papa!" she replies back, enthusiastically.
The rest of the day was spent in entertainment. Movies, games, rides. That was today's life. At last, Heer, ma and I went out for dinner, and when we came home, it was already 12am. April 6th. Heer's birthday. Heer looks at me for permission, and I finally nod my head, smiling. Heer runs up to her room, moving all the presents out of the way, to come up with a pink envelop, with Aradhna's handwriting saying Happy 9th Birthday Heer.
Heer quickly opens the letter to find her mothers note, saying....
~End of Chapter 1~

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