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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello!

This is my 10th FF😆, I know I know...but the good thing is, I updated my FFs before starting this one..see, I can be nice...sometimes.😆

This FF, is truely based on Kuch Kuch Hota Hain and we can't ignore that. So, basically, this idea started in the Chatties Ka Desh where I was like "I want a Tomboy Heer, something like KKHH" and then everyone is like "Ooooo...KKHH, do one" and I like always, couldn't say 'No' so here I am. Writing one.😆

Then, to get the right feel, I watched KKHH 3 times in one day. I know I know. I did. And trust me, I couldn't get down to penning something like KKHH. I found out it was a master piece...brillance which would then get ruined by me. I just couldn't get down to writing something like KKHH, because it is an EVERGREEN SRK-Kajol movie. A movie that made Rani popular. I talked to Meera, Indiandoll89, and I finally gave my weapons away and said, I would make KKHH, as I promised, but mine will be something different, and here I am.

I don't know how much will hate this FF, or how many will like it but I need honest views.😳

BTW, the title had to go through some massive changes aswell.😆

Title # 1 -Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi by Meera

Title # 2 -Koi Mil Gaya by Meera and me

Title # 3 - Dil De Diya Hain by Ravjot

Title # 4 - Bakudha Tum Hi Ho by Me

We had finally finalized Koi Mil Gaya because it was the actualy song in the movie but then, later, it was changed to Chaha Hai Tujhko from Mann, because all of us felt, that lyrics of the song, meant more to this Fic then any other.

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Chaha Hai Tujhko VM # 1
Chaha Hai Tujhko VM # 2

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Chaha Hai Tujhko

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The story is straight forward, just like the movie but it will have some twists and turns to it...my way😆

Character Sketches -

Prem Juneja - Almost the same as Rahul Khanna from the movie. He loves to play basketball, is a ladies man but is still caring towards his family and his daughter, Heer Juneja.

Heer Mann - A tomboy girl who loves to play basketball, Prem's best buddy and friend.

Aradhna (Anhdara13) Kapoor - She is born and raised in London but still has respect for her culture, religion and country.

Heer Juneja - Daughter of Prem Juneja.

Chapters -

Preview - Pg 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/20784217

Chapter 1 - Pg 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/21033130

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I hope you like this FF.

Edited by *Shifali* - 16 years ago

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Preview # 1

Prem stood there, staring at the burning body of Aradhna. Tears rolling down his cheeks. Flashbacks of his conversation with Aradhna on her hospital bed, while she was taking her last breaths come back to him.

Prem is sitting at her hospital bed, as Rads, as he calls her, hands Prem a little baby girl. Tears are rolling down both of their eyes, Prem holds the baby close to his chest, and he looks over at Rads.

"Prem, can you please make me a promise to name this baby Heer?" Rads says.

A teary eyed Prem looks over at Rads. Shocked. Prem nods his head, not be able to say anything or even placing a glance at Rads. Rads cries.

"Aur, will you promise me to never let this child miss her mother? Prem, from now on, you are her mother, her father, her aunt, her uncle, her friend, her brother. Promise me, that she will never miss me. Promise me." Rads asks.

Prem nods his head. Rads smiles and lies down on her hospital bed. Prem gets up and stands beside Rads face and kisses his little Heer on her forehead. Rads smiles seeing Prem and Heer and finally gives up her last breath. Prem cries, holding Heer as close to his chest as possible.

"Heer." Prem says as he keeps staring at Rads burning body. "My daughter."

~End of Preview~

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

mine! 😃

*unreserved*

record breaking moment, for the first time I've unreserved so quicklY1😉😆😆

I loved the sketch out!😉 Aradhna, what a nice name....hey! isn't the mere sapno ki rani song from here? or am I losing it?😆 Ravs...me need help with something semi Yug related!😆😆

Oooo you're starting "kinda" like the movie...I say that, because I do not wanna give ANYTHING away!😆 But I loved the, you'll be her everything line!😉😃😳

Can't wait for the whole ff! 😃 you know that!😆😆😆 I could go on and on describing my imense love for KKHH, but ppl might get bored...so instead, I'll just go and change my avi to my FAV avi of KKHH!😃😳

Love you loads Shifu,

Meera😳

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

I'm here! =)

Wow awesome preview! Totally a touch of KKHH.

Aww Radz died?😭 And his daughter's name is Heer? Can't wait to see how this one will turn out

And congratz on the 10th one😃😆 And like always, I'm gonna ask, do you pinky swear you'll finish this one?😳

And Shabz, hi =)

Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Preview has been posted in my reply before Meera's.

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

oh. my. god.

Ten? No wonder I need time to read your fanfics, there are TEN of them, I still got to sit back and read all the updates from the last 2 days.

Epic movie. E. P. I. C. The only thing that bothered me about is how Anjali read the letter from the age of one to about 5 ish. 😆Whatever...still a great movie...and really interesting concept..can't wait to see what role Radz di plays in it!

--shabz

EDIT!

RADZ DI IS DEAD??? 😲😕wow...didn't expect you to kill her so soon. But really sweet scene. 😛

Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 16 years ago

awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice will be waitingggggggg for da update asap.

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shabo24
oh. my. god.

Oh.My.God, Kya?😆

Ten? No wonder I need time to read your fanfics, there are TEN of them, I still got to sit back and read all the updates from the last 2 days.

I updated all of my FFs😳😆

Epic movie. E. P. I. C. The only thing that bothered me about is how Anjali read the letter from the age of one to about 5 ish. 😆Whatever...still a great movie...and really interesting concept..can't wait to see what role Radz di plays in it!

Exactly. I was like 8 letters, OK, one for each Bday, but how did Anjali read the letter at Age 1?😆
--shabz

EDIT!

RADZ DI IS DEAD??? 😲😕wow...didn't expect you to kill her so soon. But really sweet scene. 😛

Shabs! Flashback's hai na?😆

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

I updated mine as well! 😃

@ravs: I added something for you in my comment! 😉

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#10

@Shifz di: Yea but flashback are....flashbacks....good to know you killed Radz di. Truly shows how much you love her. Can't wait to see her reaction to it.

*pouts* How come no one added something for me in their comments? *sob*

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