*FF: Khuch Khass* part 3 pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugi77

hey today only i read all the parts all r superb👍🏼 and cute😛.can't wait plzzzzzzzzz continue soon



thank u will continue soon
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Originally posted by: zaibun

hey luved it do carry on n thanx for da pm



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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me on in....I am sure this is gonna rock!!!!!
I love these college..hostel young young stories....
Let me read completely and den I can compliment thoroughly
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: livelygal

me on in....I am sure this is gonna rock!!!!!

I love these college..hostel young young stories....
Let me read completely and den I can compliment thoroughly




ok ok 😳
yes it going to rock
keep reading

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hellooo Everyone i know i have not updated my FF in a long time
please forgive me for not updating my FF *holding my ears*

Recap: Heer moved to New York for studies and
after ten years heer has returned to india.

heer gave a stunning surprise to prem by performing on dhoom machle.

Part 3

present
prem and heer are at thepune hostel
heer i will drop you home said prem
ok said heer
let's go said prem
prem (being a gentlemen)opens the car door for heer
heer slightly blush and says in her mind i am glad that i am in india now forever
while prem is driving. prem steal glances at heer(looks at heer.
prem breaks the silence
heer said prem
hmm said heer
heer did you liked new york said prem
yes i did said heer
did you miss me said prem
prem yes i missed you soo much said heer
stop the car prem said heer
prem look cotton candy. let's go and eat heer whinned
prem and heer both got out of the car to get some cotton candy
while they are going back to car it started raining
heer you will get sick said prem
no prem let me enjoy the rain today said heer
it's raining and heer is twirling around and sees prem staring at her
what happened prem said heer
heer will you dance with me said prem
prem forward his hand and heer puts her hand in prem's hand
prem and heer dance
background music

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..

Kuch saaz hai jaage se jo the soye,
Alfaaz hai, chup se nashe mein khoye,
Nazrein hi samjhe yeh guftagu saari,
Koi arzoo ne hai angdayi li pyaari,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Naa inkaar hai, naa iqraar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad…


prem heer end the dance by hugging each other
heer blush and thinks in her mind she should tell her feelings now
prem i have to tell you something said heer
heer i have to tell u something too said prem
ok you first said prem
um heer i love you said prem
prem i love you too said heer
heer hugs prem tightly.
prem heer has confessed their feelings to each other

prem kiss heer on her forehead
heer blushed which was noticed by prem
heer i think we should go now said prem
you are right it's getting late too said heer
so prem have reached at heer house
heer goood night said prem
goood night prem said heer

prem leaves to his house

heer opens her front door

heer said teji
ma said heer
putar tu kaise ha(how are u) said teji
ma mein teek ho(i am fine) said heer
heer how did u got wet said teji
woh ma bas ase he said heer
acha teek hai ja change kar le said teji
heer goes to her room and changes in her white night gown
heer goes to her window and looks at the moon
and says good night prem


i know it is not that good but i hope you all will like it
Please forgive me for any mistakes

please comment/ criticise





Edited by -Pooji- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
updated part 3
please comment😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
hey welcome bck nice update keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
awesome!!!!!!! continue soon!!!! hey i have one question?? Is Prem and Heer parents friends??????
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
hey pooji u didnt tell me u write stories aneways gr8 update and pls add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey welcome bck nice update keep it up




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