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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

Wow!!! fanatastic! i could NOT stop laughing throughout the whole part...poor prem, sitting by himself alone, it made me think of the "I'm Mr. Lonely" song.. *starts to sing..i'm mr. looonnely, i've got nobooodyy...*erhmm, k i'll stop now😳1! Yay, new reader!! Welcome- I am happy that you are liking my FF so far!! Awww- it made you laugh- I am so pleased!! I lovveeee that song, lol, cuz of the funny high pitched voice, ROFL!! *starts singing Mr Lonely* 😆

shockers!! Heer doens't noe where the library is..what kinda pperso..nvm clearly Heer is that person..glad she could take directions though..imagine her go up left and then some other random direction 😆 gosh, i'm so immature at times..what can i say, i'm high on cookies..ohh cookie...goes to get another... back😆😆 It is shocking isn't it? She has never bothered to find out where it is, that's why- no wonder she is failing!! Heer is not that dumb, that she would forget the directions, 😆!! Oooh, cookiesss!!
Love how Prem sees Heer's small problems as almost crisis' <don't noe the plural for that word..hmm *nothing lol. and him calling his mother for an appointment!!! awww adorable! why do i feel that he is going to get a complete make over soon...haha ..k i'll stop now! please update soon...-blahblah Prem is a sweetie!! I don't know the plural for crisis- cannot be bothered to check on dictionary.com LOL!! He will get a makeover, but you will see how and why!! Thank you for the funny and cute comment!! Love Zahra xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

She didn't know where the library was? That would have been the first thing I would learn when going to a new school! (Yes, I am a geek. And proud of it! *cheesy grin*) Hey Radz!! 😃 Exactly- the first place you tend to find out about is the library- just goes to show she never really took an interest in searching for the important things!! Don't worry, I am a total geek too, I even wear glasses (when I take my contacts off, ROFL)

But their conversation, or rather Heer's monologue gave Prem some insight into her character, and he will probably help her. Yep, that was what I was trying to show, a more deep insight into her character, indicating that she can change, and Prem understands this! I can see that her hating statistics is the biggest obstacle for him. *shakes head* Though her comment got him to get his glasses fixed! Meera's been trying to do that for how long and then this madam comes along, and one time she mentions it, he goes to get it fixed. Hopeless. LOL, he just cannot forget the statistics thing, hehe!! Exactly, Meera's advice wasn't listened to by him, yet Heer's comment ignited the fire in him!! Totally hopeless!!

Cannot wait to see how all this pans out! Thank you!! Love Zahra xx

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesum super update
oh prem is getting his glasses fixed yay
very nice
loved it
thankz for pm

Hey Poonam!! Thank you- I am glad you liked it!! Yep, Prem is getting his glasses fixed, LOL!! Did I send you a PM? 😕 I don't even remember 😆!! Love Zahra xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
No problem about unreserving, I totally understand you have exams!! I am happy you read it 😃!! And you already told me that you found it awesome, so I am happy!! 😆 xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
Soooo sorry that this took so long, just been totally bombarded with assignments!! Hope you like it! Have no idea when I will be able to update next, got LOADS of work to do!! xx
PART ELEVEN
This was the first time something like this was happening to him. Incapable of concentrating on the book, he pushed it inside his rucksack and got up to leave the library. As he walked down the corridor, thoughts of Heer seemed to incessantly occupy his mind, which he not only found extremely disturbing but in a strange way also very heartening.

He jumped up at the sound of the bell blaring for the students to get to their classes. Straightening up, he trotted to class, paying little attention to the taunts of some students he happened to pass by. Entering the classroom his eyes involuntarily fell on her. There she was, sitting between Shifali and Asma. She was there but at the same time seemed distant to her surroundings.

Heer looked up simultaneously, and their eyes met. She gazed at him unblinkingly. Feeling uncomfortable, Prem swiftly looked down- his eyes wondered vaguely around the room, trying to avoid contact with hers. Seeing Meera waving at him, he nodded his head and came back to his senses.

Shifting in the seat next to Meera, he gave her one of his small yet sweet smiles, and mechanically took out his books and stationary- carefully carrying out his routine of placing his pens and pencils neatly on the desk and putting the books together, he turned to see Meera giggling.

'Is it really necessary to lay out each pen and pencil carefully, one centimetre apart from each other?' she said through her chuckles.

Prem shrugged in defence of his act. 'Yes it is- I like being organised' he said simply. Meera shook her head and sighed. 'He is never going to change', she thought.

Clearing his throat, Prem made the decision to ask for Meera's opinion. 'Meera- you know me well right?' he started.

'Prem- what kind of question is that? Of course I know you well!' said Meera.

'Well, hypothetically-say I had a problem? Would it be right to listen to my head or to my heart?'

'The logical answer to that would be to listen to your head, as you are so smart, so whatever choice you will make would be right. But you are asking me, Meera- the big softie! So obviously I will tell you to listen to your heart.' Maura furrowed her brows, wondering why Prem felt the need to ask her such a question. 'Why?' she prodded.

'No, it was just a random question!' responded Prem. Meera was not convinced and decided to press the matter. Smiling to herself she leaned forward.

'I know why you asked me that!' she announced. Prem looked up abruptly. 'Are you going to ask her?' Meera asked him.

'Ask her what?' Prem replied, a feeling of uneasiness spreading through his body.

'You know what I am talking about. Are you going to ask her to the ball?!' she whispered.

'What?! Why...why would I ask her to the ball?!!' said Prem, shaking his head and diverting his eyes from Meera. 'Why would I ask Heer to the ball?' he thought, dismissing the idea completely. Meera's touch on his arm brought Prem to his senses.

'Are you even listening to me Prem?' asked Meera, and smiled as he gently nodded in reply. 'So, like I was saying- when are you going to ask Ravz to the ball?' she continued. Prem's head shot up once more.

'Oh yeah- Ravz! That...ummm...I told you that I would think about it Meera' he mumbled. Meera shook her head.

'If you are afraid that Ravz is going to refuse you...'

'No- it's nothing like that' Prem cut in, 'I just need more time to think about it' he said.

'How long does it take to make a simple decision Prem? Like I said, follow your heart!' said Meera, leaving Prem to ponder over her words. A simple decision- that is what he had to make. Yet, the decision he was thinking of had no connection to the ball whatsoever- the only thing on his mind that very moment was Heer Mann. It was the decision regarding Heer that was itching away at his heart the most. He was still unsure about her- either she really was a stuck-up Barbie doll, or she was really good at hiding her true self.

Okay, that was all for today, hope it met your expections, I really had no clue what to write at first, this just kind of came to me randomly!! Can't wait to read comments!!
Love Zahra xx
Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
zaza!!!! =)
oh ho!!! Bat yaha tak pohuch gaye hai!!! Prem can't concentrate on his books!?!?!? *gasp* 😆 Oooooooh, taunts from other students eh!?!?!? *roles up sleeves ready to beat anyone else*😉😆 Wait till Prem gets a makeover and then............. BAM!!!!!!! They will be shellshocked!!!!!! *fingers crossed* By the way, when is the 'makeover' coming!?!?!? 😊
*Giggle* Usually the GIRL would shy away but yaha pei scene thoda alag hai!!! Premu looks away!!!! Sho shweet!!! *pinching cheeks* Awwww, Prem's sweet smile!!! Meeru is out of the lucky few that is graced with them!!!!!! 😊 I'm jealous!!! *pouts* 😉😆
Gosh!!! Pencils kept centi apart!!! That's sounds like over half my Physics IB class whenever we have a unit final!!! One of my best friends always neatly lines everthing, i find it so funny but cute at the same time!!!! 😆 I like Meeru's advice!!!! Very nicely put!!!! *thumbs up*
Oh ho!!! Nosy Meeru!!! I know she's just trying to make sure he does what is best for him!!!! 😃 *Giggle* Prem was thinking about Heer when Meeru was talking about Ducky (Ravz)!!!!!!! 😆 Funny how he wasn't even bothered with the Ravz idea.............. he is so absorbed in Heer that the matchmaking went completely over his head!!!!! 😆
Great update and i can't wait till the next one!!!!! Please update when you find time!!!! *hug*
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
mine! 😛

*unreserved*

*hides face* I really shud know when to shut up! 😆😛

Sheesh but seriously 1cm after? 😆 I love Prem! 😛 *pinches cheeks again*😆😆😆

I did love the way you made Prem all apprehensive to ask me, I see that totally cleary. It's the FIRST time he's ever felt like that about a girl!😆😆😳 Although my whole "softie" thing....so true! 😛😆😆

So yes....all in all, I really should learn to keep my mouth shut!😆 I really can't wait to see what Prem's going to say now...

As for Ravs, I'm seriously wondering how you're going to plan out how this will end with Ravs not being heartbroken! 😔😳😳

Anyways continue soon! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
be right back!!
Backkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!
Awesome Update as usual.. Im really hoping prem will say yes and help heer...I really like it when meera said "follow your heart" I actually do believe in that myself... I usually say update soon but you can update whenever you are free!!!😆
Edited by purplestar22 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
this is my spot.

*edited*

I found this part so cute! With Prem talking about one thing and Meera talking about another. 😆 It sounds like something I'd do with my friends. I'm usually on my own wavelength. Just ask Bhav! 😆

But Prem is really anal no? In a good way. I cannot wait to see the interaction between Heer and Prem after he says yes, and when his new specs come in! 😉

Write more soon!

@ Meera: That's easy, Zahra will bring in Yug for her! 😆

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
very gud part cant w8 to read more

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