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hi guyz me and my cousin made a story a love story which is A PROMISE plz read and comment hopeu all likeit if u dont like my topic then mods can close my topic

A PROMISE

A love story of Sara and Asim Sara a girl live in a city which is not well known

about sara she is very simple gril with a cute smile and very hard working girl her life have two important thing one is her old dad and who cant move from his bed who keep on crying when he see's her lil gudiya(sara's dad call her gudiya)that she work so hard for their living.and the second important thing in her life is her best childhood frined ASIM.When they grown up no one of them felt asim was to close to sara they use to meet everyday all ppl around them know and reapected their relation.Asim always with sara he understand what she feels,whats going in her mind even if she dont say aword.When this friend changed in love both of them didnot felt days runs and asim got a chance to go and study in a city which was far from his own city he couldnt belive his dreams are on the way to be true,days went like seconds and the day of going is on he door sara was happy and upset that how can she live a single say without Asim and hr sound feeling asim was thinking that too.

asim to sara

Asim:sara i know its hard im going its good for me and you.........belive me im going to come back ill be something that u always wished me to be,will get marry and start a new life.

she was listing and a cute smile covered her face she replayed

Sara:asim u r going to call me na?

Asim:sara is that a thing u need to remind me sure my life i will call u and i will mail u everyday i peromise i will comeback and i will become something that u always wished me to be i promise i will keep u like a peromise.I promise in our small world i will give u everything every happy moment,i promise to give u a life i always wished for you.

sara looked at him says

Sara:asim( remove his tears from his checks )that makes me weak ur tears.

he smiles and sara saya

Sara:i trust u so just remember that you can do it

Asim:i want ur trust to stay with me and make me strong

he smiles and oh my god its timeto go

she looks at him and says

Sara:asim my heart is asking me to not let u go but my mind is asking me to ignore it.

Asim hold sara's hand and says

Asim:sara i want to grow old with udont stop me if i wont go so how our dreams are going to come true.

she smiles and says

Sara:god bless u

he says to sara

Asim:sara close my eyes with ur hand so i can keep your picture in it and i will see u everyday GOODBYE

Sara:GOOD BYE

and the hard moment for both

Asim went and sara smiles.Sara was alone and she visit all thous places where she use to visit with asim

after some days sara's dad feeling really bad doctors said he have no more time sara felt that she is dead two hours and her dad is no more he went and left sara alone with asim's memory.Asim called sara

Asim:i know u r going through a hard time your alone im so helpless (but sara made him feel that shes ok her dad is gone be a better life which is end.

after some days asim called sara and said that only two year more he needs
to u days runs but for sara and asim a day was like a year .after 2 years asim called sara
Asim:Sara iv done it im cominmg to you im so happy(and she started to crying)
Sara:oh asim i dont belive that soon ur going to here and i will see u after ages
Asim:dont u remember my promise
Sara:i do thats what made my life live again
Asim:i wont tell u but soon u will find me at ur door.
days runs and sara was looking at the door that might he come anytime,but 2 weeks no call no message sara was waiting at the door some 1 started to knock the door sara opens the door a unknown man
Sara:who r u??
Unknowman:Sara is there any1 with this name live here(she looks at him)
Sara:yes im sara but woh r u??
unknownman:come with me
Sara was not getting who is he and what he want but she went with him at a place she finds ASIM a body with out soul A DEAD BODY OF ASIM
she stoods in her place and stop moving the man tey to call her but she becomes hard as rock
Unknownman:this is Asim's dead body he had a accident when he was going to the airport and doctors tryed hard but he was dead at the spot
She looked at him and shouts
Sara: R U MAD WHAT R U SAYING
she move to asim's body and says
Sara:see this man and listen what he is saying asim wake up let me see u see thous chages which u wished about me asim tell me look im sara asim y ur sleeping asim y u r ignoring me huh?
The man looked at her and says to sara what r u expecting from a dead body "(she looked at him and shouts)
Sara:JUST SHUTUP AND LEAVE US ALONE (to asim's dead body)asim wakeup its time to start a new life
the way u promiseed me AASIM ASIM
Sara was calling him but not a hair of his moved she cryed alot and says u cant leave me alone like this u cant leave me like this what about ur promise i know u will never broke ur promise
the man was watching all this he was crying like he never cryed before he went to sara and hold her and said
unknownman:my daughter its time totake his body
Sara:NO NO i even not sa whim i should his not replying asim wake up (she try hard to wake him but he is sleeping for ever)
they took asim's body and sara was screaming
Sara:wake him up even for a while i just can tell him how mUch i love him and say GOODBYE
but no one can do this asim was left sara alone and she is like dead too she use to say that asim might come at anytime but we all no he wont she had a last mail

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i have to write more wait for 15 minz only
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ASIM'S MAIL
my love my world im coming to u cant wait sara time was hard to us now not a mininte will stay apart ill be with u i will see u again i feel my heart is going to stop sara i promised u all happy moments im coming i dont no y i feel my life is short sara i want u to know how much i love u that im going to be with u now i cant wait to see u BYE
THIS BYE WAS HIS LAST BYE AND EVER
sara was still waiting saying im waitng for u i remember ur promise i know u never broke then i wish for oncei can see u and tell what u meant to me what happen asim u was the only 1 who feel me before i talk and remove my tears before it falls down today faith ave make u so far that even on my crying your not coming
moment may remove u from my side but nothing can remove u from my mind my heart my thoughts u r and ur will stay the only one I LOVE
sorry guyz if u dont like it modz can close this topic :(:(:(
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Posted: 16 years ago
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35 ppl wied but no rplies😭sorry
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😭😭 that was sooo sad
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i am very sad . why such a sad story .i am not getting is that a true story or what .but it is very sad . and moved me
there is one thing here people dont like sad things that why no comments i have try once put did not get a postitve response .
if it is a true story then a pathic one
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaa tht was sooooooooo sad....😭

thnxx 4 posting

ria........






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Posted: 16 years ago
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its tooo emotional😭

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Posted: 16 years ago
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its so sad.... but thanx for posting....

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