hi guyz me and my cousin made a story a love story which is A PROMISE plz read and comment hopeu all likeit if u dont like my topic then mods can close my topic
A PROMISE
A love story of Sara and Asim Sara a girl live in a city which is not well known
about sara she is very simple gril with a cute smile and very hard working girl her life have two important thing one is her old dad and who cant move from his bed who keep on crying when he see's her lil gudiya(sara's dad call her gudiya)that she work so hard for their living.and the second important thing in her life is her best childhood frined ASIM.When they grown up no one of them felt asim was to close to sara they use to meet everyday all ppl around them know and reapected their relation.Asim always with sara he understand what she feels,whats going in her mind even if she dont say aword.When this friend changed in love both of them didnot felt days runs and asim got a chance to go and study in a city which was far from his own city he couldnt belive his dreams are on the way to be true,days went like seconds and the day of going is on he door sara was happy and upset that how can she live a single say without Asim and hr sound feeling asim was thinking that too.
asim to sara
Asim:sara i know its hard im going its good for me and you.........belive me im going to come back ill be something that u always wished me to be,will get marry and start a new life.
she was listing and a cute smile covered her face she replayed
Sara:asim u r going to call me na?
Asim:sara is that a thing u need to remind me sure my life i will call u and i will mail u everyday i peromise i will comeback and i will become something that u always wished me to be i promise i will keep u like a peromise.I promise in our small world i will give u everything every happy moment,i promise to give u a life i always wished for you.
sara looked at him says
Sara:asim( remove his tears from his checks )that makes me weak ur tears.
he smiles and sara saya
Sara:i trust u so just remember that you can do it
Asim:i want ur trust to stay with me and make me strong
he smiles and oh my god its timeto go
she looks at him and says
Sara:asim my heart is asking me to not let u go but my mind is asking me to ignore it.
Asim hold sara's hand and says
Asim:sara i want to grow old with udont stop me if i wont go so how our dreams are going to come true.
she smiles and says
Sara:god bless u
he says to sara
Asim:sara close my eyes with ur hand so i can keep your picture in it and i will see u everyday GOODBYE
Sara:GOOD BYE
and the hard moment for both
Asim went and sara smiles.Sara was alone and she visit all thous places where she use to visit with asim
after some days sara's dad feeling really bad doctors said he have no more time sara felt that she is dead two hours and her dad is no more he went and left sara alone with asim's memory.Asim called sara
Asim:i know u r going through a hard time your alone im so helpless (but sara made him feel that shes ok her dad is gone be a better life which is end.