FF: Bittersweet Allusions [Pt 13 pg.57] - Page 6

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I don't wanna be a wife. Any thing is fine, but I don't wanna be a dood wala's wife.

Part 2

His phone went flying and landed on the ground. He got up and noticed that the person he bumped into also fell. He got up to apologize.

"Oye! Dekh kar nahin chal sakte kya?" Heer looked at him angrily. Meera, Ravz and Shabo shook their head. Once Heer got started, it was hard to calm her down.

"Excuse me? I can say the same to you" who did she think she is? he thought

"What?! What you do mean by that? It's your fault that you're too busy talking on the phone to pay attention to where you're going" Heer retorted.

"Aye ladki. It's your fault too ok. If you weren't too busy socializing than you wouldn't have bumped into me and fell" he was really starting to get annoyed by her.

"Oye!" Heer was about to continue but Ravz and Shabo started pulling her away since things were starting to get out of hand. Meera picked up the phone and gave it to the guy.

"Thank you" he took the phone from her while Meera found herself getting lost in his eyes but quickly snapped out of it when she heard Heer. "I think you should go calm your friend down" he said while Meera smiled sheepishly.

"Excuse me?! Calm me down?!"

"Chup kar Heer!" Ravz and Shabo pulled her away and started walking away.

" Ja ja. Bohut sari ladkiyaan dekhi hain tumhari jaisi" he said before walking off.

They started walking towards Heer's house while Heer fumed in anger and kept calling the guy she had bumped into a gadha and whatever other names she could come up. On the way they saw Shifali. Shifali noticed the expression on Heer's face and figured out what must've happened.

"Who did she argue with now?" she asked while Heer made a face.

"Pata nahin. Some really cute guy." replied Shabo while Heer rolled her eyes

"And he had dreamy eyes" the five turned to face a girl sitting at the tree stump

"Dreamy eyes Kimz?" Shifali raised her eyebrow.

"It's true" Meera sighed, recalling her phone encounter with the stranger. "But how do you know Kimz?"

"I met him earlier today. He was asking me directions to some place. Can't remember where though. That's when I noticed her eyes" Kimz dazed out, remembering the chocolate coloured eyes.

"And how do you know it's the same guy?" asked Ravs

"Because I heard Heer arguing with him from across the road" Kimz smirked

"Hey it wasn't MY fault ok! He should've been watching where he was going" Heer argued

"Sure. Whatever you say" Ravs rolled her eyes.

"I wanna see this guy. He sounds interesting" said Shifali

"He's not interesting at all ok" Heer was starting to get annoyed at how much attention this stranger was getting from her friends. They all ignored her and started talking about him. "You know what. While you guys talk about that gadha, I'll be on my way home." Heer started walking away and looked back to see them all still babbling on about the stranger. "You know what, fine!" she turned around and started walking again when she bumped into something, rather someone.

"Tum!" she yelled. This caught the attention of the 5 and turned to see Heer facing the stranger.

"Yeh kahan se agayi" he muttered.

"That's the guy" Ravz whispered to Shifali while Meera, Kimz and Shabo stared at him

"I think we better go and leave before Heer starts another argument" Shifali whispered back.

"Why are you following me?!" yelled Heer, looking annoyed.

"Me following you? Why on earth would I follow you?" he asked, being more annoyed than before. This was the second time this day he bumped into her and on top of that he had to stay in this village for 2 weeks, which made him even more mad. And plus he had to go to his dadi's house and was completely lost and had been wandering around for a while now.

"Heer stop. Sorry about that" Shifali apologized on Heer's behalf and noticed his eyes. She found herself being lost in them but snapped out of it when she heard Heer grumble.

"It's ok" he smiled. "Can any of you guys help me? I'm looking for Shanti Villa."

"That's where takhurain ji lives" Meera looked confused.

"Yeah I'm her grandson. Prem."

"Chote takhur!" the turned to see an old man calling Prem. "Chote takur aap yahan hain? Hum kabse aapko doond rahe hain. Takhurain has been waiting for you."

"Coming Ramu kaka." Prem looked at Shifali and Meera. "Thank you for your help" he glanced at Heer, who stuck her tongue at him, and walked away.

mine😛

*edited*

First of all this whole Chinu, champa, chandu thing is VERY confusing!😆 I love readng it!😉

Awww Prem was going to apologize!😳 how shweet of him!😛😳 He makes me so happy, my sweetu!😃 and apparently he makes my character EXTRA happy as well!😳 Thank you for adding that in...now she sounds even more like me!😆😆 and ooo the grinning sheepishly...PERFECT!😉

Sheesh...Heer's REALLY angry!😆😆 Etho raag? (that's my only bengali...courtesy of Devdas😉😳) Love how shifs and kimz know him too!😉 well kimz had an encounter with the eyes...pretty hard to forget no?😆😆😆

oooo he's a thakur!😳 How awesome?😆😆 Royalty!😳 Yay! He likes me and Shifs!😆

Honestly totally adorable update Ravs!😃 Me loved it!😳😳

Continue soon!😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I don't wanna be a wife. Any thing is fine, but I don't wanna be a dood wala's wife.

Love,

Radz

You and your dood wala Ravzie. You should have changed it and disappointed everyone who thought it would be Prem.

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

How about Chandu is single and so is Chinu and they have another cousin who's in the same business and his name is Champak and is married to Champa?