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Posted: 16 years ago
mine mine mine!
i sound like finding nemo birds 😆

*edit*

Ravz you have made me the happiest person in the whole wide world by updating do you know that? and have I ever told you how much I love you???
😉
I am soooo happy that Heer has finally hit the road and iss daljeet ki toh main achi hassi class 😡 lelungi...dehko main kya karongi! *scratches head* pata nahi main kya karo! and shabo saved the day..go shabo..go shabo....
heer ran away hai I wish wish wish that is Prem driving the car..I so do and trust you to leave it there?!
ab mera dimaag karaab ho jaye ga yeh soch soch kar! your so bad ravz...wait hang on a sec I just told you I love you and now I tell you that your bad?!..... 😆 😕 something is definetly wrong with me...first it was my typing and now my brain..what next??
nuff said about me and my bak bak
I want you..this is literally a demand to update soon!!...and when I mean soon I mean sooner than usual....but that does also mean..update when you can ok??
I will be nice..but I still demand an update for sooner!!

-melove-
aashifa
Edited by curledup - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi0295

SHABO SAVED THE DAY 😃
Thank you Shabo!!!! 😃



I like you. *starts to stalk you*

Anyway Ravzie, you were not kidding. 😲 You updated!

Totally awesome part! I can not BELIEVE Daljeet! What a SOUR HEAD! 🤬 And *I* totally came to the rescue. 😳 *bows down* Mention not, it really was nothing!

RUN FOR IT HEERRRRRRR! That better be Prem's car Ravzie.

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
Excellent update!I've been a silent reader for a long time,but now I've decided to comment after all your FF is THE best!For me it's the best because it's simple,sweet,and unique!I loved the fact how the story is moving in a slow pace and also that Heer has finally ran away from her wedding!Since I NEVER want Heer to marry someone else besides our loving Prem!Of course who will want that!Anyways I'm so happy that her family and her friends helped her run away and I'm starting to think who's car did she hide in?Was it Prem's?!I hope so!I really truely hope so!Anyways your an excellent writer!👏Please add me to your PM list!Please update soon!
Edited by buttercup123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
* quickly rubs eyes*
ahh..i'm not dreaming..you actually did update!😆..lol..just messing with you there!
it's just pure awesomeness(yes i know that's not a word..but it is in my dictionary!) that you updated!!
I'll read and then come back..kay?
alrighty...i read it..and now i don't really know what to write.
shabo..i don't know who that is(maybe i do..and i just don't remember)...but she's aweesome!! She heard Daljeet...but she actually(unlike all the other fools in tv shows) followed daljeet because she thought something was wrong. soo shabo..I LOVE you!!
YES!! *dances happily* heer ran away!!...nice..i was waiting for something like this to happen. ohh and the best part is...she sat in prem's car..didn't she?
well if she did sit in prem's car...they're surely going to have a fight!..i can just feel it.
this chapter was sooo long!..and amazing! if all of your updates are going to be this good.(not that the others weren't good. they were all amazing..but i'm just trying to make a point here).. then take your time in updating..i can wait! or atleast I can try to wait.
I babble too much don't I?!..ohh well...i was born with it..😆
love,
Nitya
P.S. I love the gang...they're supporting Heer through everything!! if I actually see them...i would give each and everyone a big jappi!!😊
Edited by nityatarlapally - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey firat of all sorry for latge comments.............bt really in teresting n long update indeed..................thanks for pm n looking forward towards ur update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I caught it...I'm saving my spot..Sorry again ravs 😔It's ok =)

*edited*

Bleh...this one is gonna suck! 😆(comments I mean)Liar😆

I loved the update! It was soooo awesome and long! 😃I know😃 It was my goal, which I achieved😎

I'm glad Shabo found out about stupid Manmeet (who I already knew was evil *smug look*)Same here =) And yeah you were right😆

And yay for everyone getting Heer to run away! 😃😳 As long as Prem's in the car! 😉😃I have a thing for people running away on their wedding day. I think it's cool🤣

Update again soon! 😃Ok😃

Love you,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I'm guessing she's in Prem's car.Maybe...😆

And this is my spot!Ok😆

*edited*

DJ is utterly materialistic and horrible! To take advantage of someone like that, when they're at their most vulnerable. Eurgh, she's despicable!I know😔

And Manmeet. Idiotic. I hope Heer's friends do something to him.Maybe they will. Maybe they wont =)

Shabo is awesome! Sneaking around like a ninja! And finding out the truth and helping Heer escape.I wanna be a ninja😲

She's in Prem's car isn't she? And then, they're going to fight first. I think. They always fight. 😆I know😆 But you guys find it funny when they fight don't you😆

I miss the doodwala. *pout* Write the story!I will. When I have time.

Love,
Radz

Thanks =)

Originally posted by: yasu09

great update...............👏
can't wait 4 da next 1.................😍

Thanks for liking it😊

Thanks =)

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

awesome update
continue asap
thanks for the update
pm me!!!!!

Thanks for liking it and np about the PM😆

Originally posted by: brainychild92

ur a saksham fan.. eww my cousin loves him. lol but i like the first siggy..lolYes I am😎 And thanks😃


anywayz great part.. is that guy prem in the car.. pleaseee!!!!i will be so happy if it is:D:D:DNo😊🤣 I'm joking. Maybe😆

great part.. continue soon!!!!

Originally posted by: mimi0295

*bouncey bouncey bouncey bouncey*

*rolley rolley rolley rolley*

*imagine be jumping on a bed* Ok😆 That was soooooooo exciting! And it was LONG, AND it was worth the wait, Thanks😃 AND you're still an alien no matter how much you deny it 😡😳I AM NOT an alien😳
I loveeeeed this part!!! I was kind of shocked how fast the wedding/engagement thing went by. Thank GOD you didn't write about that man *shudders*I suck at writing details😆
And 😲Daljeet is SUCH a ()*&(*^*^(&)*)_(+ 😲😡For PROPERTY? Ohmigod 😭Only reason I could think of😆
SHABO SAVED THE DAY 😃TechnicallyI saved the day😆 But I'll let Shabo have her moment😆
Thank you Shabo!!!! 😃
And Heer's running away 😲will she ever come back? 😭No😊 Joking. I dunno😆OMG OMG is she in PREM'S CAR 😲😃Maybe😃
Update fast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!No😊🤣
--Cookie

Originally posted by: Momana

heyy nice update...
i bet she;s in prems car...lol
thnxs for the pm
plz pm me again when update😊

Thanks for liking it =)

Originally posted by: curledup

mine mine mine!Ok ok ok😆
i sound like finding nemo birds 😆Omg I loved Finding Nemo😲 Remember Dorey?😲 She was so cool🤣

*edit*

Ravz you have made me the happiest person in the whole wide world by updating do you know that? and have I ever told you how much I love you??? I did?😆 And no you haven't but thanks for letting me know now. Better late then never😆
😉
I am soooo happy that Heer has finally hit the road and iss daljeet ki toh main achi hassi class 😡lelungi I'm so glad I'm not DJ 😆...dehko main kya karongi! *scratches head* pata nahi main kya karo!Good luck thinking of something😆 and shabo saved the day..go shabo..go shabo....Yay Shabo😆
heer ran away hai I wish wish wish that is Prem driving the car..I so do and trust you to leave it there?!
ab mera dimaag karaab ho jaye ga yeh soch soch kar! your so bad ravz...wait hang on a sec I just told you I love you and now I tell you that your bad?!..... 😆 😕something is definetly wrong with me...first it was my typing and now my brain..what next??It's ok😆 We both know you love me. That's all that matters😆
nuff said about me and my bak bak Ok😆
I want you..this is literally a demand to update soon!!...and when I mean soon I mean sooner than usual....but that does also mean..update when you can ok??I already updated. And took my sweet time as you can tell😆
I will be nice..but I still demand an update for sooner!!

-melove-
aashifa

Originally posted by: shabo24



I like you. *starts to stalk you*Stalker😆

Anyway Ravzie, you were not kidding. 😲You updated! Have I ever lied to you that you started to doubt me?😆

Totally awesome part! I can not BELIEVE Daljeet! What a SOUR HEAD! 🤬Yes yes I know you hate her. I think everyone does😆 And *I* totally came to the rescue. 😳*bows down* Mention not, it really was nothing!Aren't you modest

RUN FOR IT HEERRRRRRR! That better be Prem's car Ravzie. It's not😊 It's mine😊

--shabz

Originally posted by: buttercup123

Excellent update!I've been a silent reader for a long time,but now I've decided to comment after all your FF is THE best!For me it's the best because it's simple,sweet,and unique!I loved the fact how the story is moving in a slow pace and also that Heer has finally ran away from her wedding!Since I NEVER want Heer to marry someone else besides our loving Prem!Of course who will want that!Anyways I'm so happy that her family and her friends helped her run away and I'm starting to think who's car did she hide in?Was it Prem's?!I hope so!I really truely hope so!Anyways your an excellent writer!👏Please add me to your PM list!Please update soon!

Thanks for the awesome comment =) And glad you're not a silent reader no more. I love reading comments😃 I'll add you to the list😊

Originally posted by: nityatarlapally

* quickly rubs eyes*
ahh..i'm not dreaming..you actually did update!😆..lol..just messing with you there!Yes yes I did. Is it that hard to believe?😆
it's just pure awesomeness(yes i know that's not a word..but it is in my dictionary!) that you updated!!It's ok I use that word too😆
I'll read and then come back..kay?Ok =)
alrighty...i read it..and now i don't really know what to write.Oops?😆
shabo..i don't know who that is(maybe i do..and i just don't remember) Shabo is shabo24 on the forum and is my friend and is also a character in the FF😆...but she's aweesome!! She heard Daljeet...but she actually(unlike all the other fools in tv shows) followed daljeet because she thought something was wrong. soo shabo..I LOVE you!!Shabo is a stalker😊🤣
YES!! *dances happily* heer ran away!!...nice..i was waiting for something like this to happen. ohh and the best part is...she sat in prem's car..didn't she?Maybe?😆
well if she did sit in prem's car...they're surely going to have a fight!..i can just feel it.It is that obvious?😆
this chapter was sooo long!..and amazing! if all of your updates are going to be this good.(not that the others weren't good. they were all amazing..but i'm just trying to make a point here).. then take your time in updating..i can wait! or atleast I can try to wait. Thanks😃 I will take my time from now on🤣
I babble too much don't I?!..ohh well...i was born with it..😆No you don't and it's ok I babble too🤣
love,
Nitya
P.S. I love the gang...they're supporting Heer through everything!! if I actually see them...i would give each and everyone a big jappi!!😊They're actually members on the forum😆 Except Kaki😆

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee

great part
loved it
continue soon

Thanks =)

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey firat of all sorry for latge comments.............bt really in teresting n long update indeed..................thanks for pm n looking forward towards ur update soon

Thanks for the comment =)


Edited by -Ravjot- - 15 years ago
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Part 12


When the car stopped, Heer didn't realize. She awoke to the sound of a thud. The driver had gotten out of the car.


She hadn't realized when she had drifted off to sleep and therefore hadn't paid attention to the road and had no clue where she was. She noticed that they had stopped at the side of the road which was a bit deserted. Suddenly it occurred to her that she was alone. With a stranger. In the middle of nowhere.


Ok Heer calm down. No need to worry. You're alone with some stranger. No big deal. If he tries to do anything, I can take care of him she thought to herself as she took deep breaths and calmed down. All she had to do was lay low and then run away as soon as the stranger wasn't paying attention. He could be anyone. He might even be from her village and might take her back to that hell hole. Thinking about it made her wonder what happened to her friends and kaki after she had left. She wished she could call them but she remembered her kaki telling her not to.


Heer was rushing to the window but Kaki stopped her. "Take care of yourself beta. Don't worry about us, we'll be fine" she reassured Heer. "Here. Take this" she gave Heer a cell phone. "It's mine. I'd give you yours but Daljeet knows the number and can call you and might emotionally blackmail into coming back. She doesn't know this number. That's why I'm giving it to you. Don't call us. Wait for our call." After that Kaki had given Heer a quick hug and before she could get emotional, she led Heer to the window.


Heer was snapped out of her thoughts when she heard the bonnet close.


"Great. Just great. Stupid car just had to stop working in the middle of nowhere" the stranger said as he kicked the car. He took out his phone to see if he could call someone. "Crap. No network. Now what do I do'"


As the guy pondered about what he should do, Heer saw this time as to try to get a glimpse of the stranger. She was stuck with this guy for a while now and might as well see who he was. Heer couldn't see his face clearly because of the way he was standing. She started to lean over the seat to try to see him. She knew it wasn't a good idea but curiosity got the best of her. As Heer leaned over, she moved over a bit to reposition herself and made a sound with her payal and bangles. She froze, hoping the stranger wouldn't notice.


She was wrong. The stranger had heard the sound and turned.


"Who's there?" he asked. He didn't see any other car around him and wondered if a thief had come. He decided to check is car. "Anyone in here? If you are, come out. I promise not to hurt you."


Heer heard the voice getting closer. She knew he'd find her and there was no use in hiding. She might as well get out. Plus if he tried anything, she could always try running whereas she'd be trapped inside the car.


The stranger looked at the back door as he saw it open and a pair of feet stick out. He then saw it was a girl, because the sari covered her feet.


Heer slowly came out, afraid of what to expect, and look at the ground.


"TUM?!" Heer suddenly looked up and was shocked to see the person.


"Prem?"


"Heer? What are you doing here?" To say Prem was confused was an understatement. He was beyond confused.


"Can't you tell? I ran away" She smirked. Clearly the fact that she had a bag on and was wearing bridal clothes hadn't been a dead give away.


"Well I can see that" He replied. So maybe he had noticed. "But may I ask what are you doing in my car?"


This question was a simple one but Heer didn't know how to answer it. She thought back to the running away thing and her being chased and thought of what might be happening home. All this made tears come to her eyes, something Prem hadn't expected.


"Hey Heer. What's wrong?" he stepped closed to her, genuinely concerned. It took a while for Heer to calm down a bit and after Prem gave her some tissues from the car, she told him everything.


Prem didn't know what to say when Heer was done. He didn't know someone could be that cruel. And that too to their own brother's daughter. Prem didn't want to leave Heer alone like this.


"Where are you gonna go now?" He asked.


"I don't know. Anywhere I guess and find a place to stay and get a job" she replied. Prem just stared at her.


"You can't be serious. How are you going to find a place to stay on your own?"


"I'll manage" she snapped. "I'm not as helpless as you think. I cantake care of myself."


"Yeah but-"


"Before you say anything, how about we find a ride instead of being stuck here all night?" Heer said.


Prem closed his mouth and realize Heer was right. They decided to sit in the car and wait. They chose not to talk as they knew they'd probably end up arguing. Heer was growing restless.


"I can't believe we're stuck here. Your car is so unreliable" she muttered


"Excuse me? My car isnot unreliable. And no one asked you to get in my car."


"You're saying that as if I had a choice"


"Out of all the cars you justhad to pick mine didn't you?"


"Oye! You're was the only one there. If i knew it was yours, I would never have gotten in."


"Really? Then what else would have you done Ms.Heer. Kept running?"


"Yes. Someone would help me sooner or later."


"You should be thankful you found my car. who knows what would've happened" Heer knew Prem was right but she didn't want to admit it so she just leaned back in her seat and stared out the window.


It wasn't till half an hour later they saw a truck driving by. The driver had mistaken them as a couple who had eloped, due to Heer's bridal clothes and the bags both Prem and Heer carried, and offered to help. They had tried to clear his misunderstanding but in the end were told to go sit in the back of the truck as there wasn't room for both of them at the front and both Prem and Heer didn't want Heer to be sitting with a stranger.


Prem told the driver to drop where to drop them, before he headed to the back. He got to the back and waited for Heer to come and noticed her having difficulties. Being the stubborn girl that she is, Prem knew she wasn't going to ask for help so he extended her hand. Heer stared at the hand before taking it and got onto the truck.


"Thanks" she said quietly. Prem was surprised she thanked him but he understood it wasn't just for giving his hand, but for unknowingly helping her escape as well.


"You're welcome."

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This update is for Cookie. Hope it makes you feel better =) I tried to finish it before she had to go but she signed off 10 mins early so I decided to make it longer😆 And again it's longer than my usual one so you should be glad I took my time😆 Hope you guys like it =)

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey really nice update n long one too plz update soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
yayyyyyyyy...........i knew it was prem..........do continue soon.........waiting for new updates............
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superb
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