FF: Bittersweet Allusions [Pt 13 pg.57] - Page 3

Originally posted by: Garima93

Reserved!!!!

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OMG!!!! U started another FF!!!!! Yipeee!!! *Jumps up in joy* Teeheeeheee!!😆😆😆 well, as u can tell I'm kinda high right now 😉😆😆 Lol. I can kinda tell. It's ok. Now you know how I feel everyday😆

Ek minute ek minute, why am I not in the meera-kimz-shabo-ravs-heer gang??? hmmm missy??? NO FAIR! Uh...because I decided this before and I'm trying to think of a cool part for you?😆
Me wanna be part of gwoup too *says in baby voice*....LOL jk jk!! luv ya!!!! I totally love the fivesome, they're so adorable!! BFFLS!!! hehe😆😆 LOL. Ok😆 I'll make you have a guest appearance with Radz =)

Awww, Bechaari Heer has to be yelled at by her chaachi for waking up late! Poor her...actually my mom does that to me too, lol on the weekends and in the summer...hehehe Did I write Chachi instead of Kaki?😆 Oops. Omg my mom does that too😲

I love Heer's personality, she sounds like a sporty-ish type of girl!!! I love it!!! Ohhh!! Can't wait to see who she bumped into!! *Cough Cough* Prem!!! 😃 Byeee!! Luv you!!!! No it's the dood wala!😆

~Gari 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

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Only YOU Ravz....only you.....😆 And what exactly do you mean by that?😕😆

Well first of all, glad you started another ff! 🤗Sounds amazing, specially because it's being blessed with all these beautiful girls alongside the normal gang...OH PLEASE MAKE ULLU ALIVE SO WE CAN PULL PRANKS ON HIM!! PLEASE!! *prays to (god) Preet* You want him to be alive? This is going to call for some changes in the story😆 I believe you know the story already (the one I made up when my friend was bored remember? Mona, Adil, Usman?) I think it can be arranged though =)

Sounds like Heer is like Zaara from Veer-Zaara?? *sigh* I have Tere Liye playing in my head thanks to that remark😆 Srk again huh? =] Again?😕 Why am I so slow today? Pleej explain😊 Loved the description of the two...and and fyi I don't like Chachi. But I lurrrrrvee this Shabo girl...sounds like she is amazing huh?😉 Did I write chachi by accident? I meant Kaki😆 And of course you do. I wonder why😆

Loved how close all the friends are...can't wait to keep reading...and CLIFFHANGER ALERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cliffhanger? Where😲😆 How would you react if I say she didn't bumpinto who you think she did and it's actually the dood wala?😆

--shabz

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

oooh awesome ness!! 😃

Thanks Rinki😃

lurved it, heer's too cute and kaki is evil!

I love how you all think Kaki's evil😆

shabz is course smexy as always 🤣 ah this was too cute!!

Lol. I was gonna have her play too but then I remembered she plays lacrosse😆

aww meeri and ravsie be rolling their eyesies 😆

Yes yes. I like doing that😆

ooh is lallu alive? if he is, make someone throw a bomb in his house! 😈 ah or u could let kimz and shabz deal with him...😆 its adorable! loving it..😳

I dunno. Maybe he is maybe he isn't😆 Ooh how about a stink bomb instead😃

-- Rinks

Originally posted by: shabo24

YOU AND THE STUPID DOOD WAALA! GAWD! DID SATI SAY SOMETHING ABOUT DOOD TODAY SO YOU HAD A SUDDEN CAREER CHANGE??? Well if it is the dood walla....hun...you are in dood. 😉

ok-aaaaay. That didn't sound as cool as I thought it would. =]

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

nice super ff
loved the characters

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Ai hai! New story? That too with Shabz, Meeru and you? Now I cannot wait for the next part! Yupyup😊 Don't you love how I complain about writing and not wanting to update and yet I go and start another FF?😆

I love the way you have characterised Heer, so innocent and child-like. Very cute. But I am not liking this Kaki so much, though so far, she doesn't seem evil, which is a good thing. But Heer, so sweet. *pinches cheeks* And I can so imagine Shabz getting annoyed with someone for what Heer did. 😆 Such a Shabz reaction, expected. 😉 And then you and Meeru, can so totally see you guys roll your eyes at Heer trying to come up with an excuse! 😆 Aww thanks Radz. Why does everyone hate Kaki?😆 And yeah I tried to imagine how Shabz and Meera would react and wrote it like that =)

So Heer has collided with ... sada Prem by any chance? Cannot wait to read the next part Ravzie! No the dood wala!🤣 I can't stop saying that😆 And Shabz has inspired me to become a dood wali😃

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😳 Will edit tonight sorry!

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I've told you before how much I love the idea/concept of this story/ff!😃 village ones are so much more fun!😳 Yes you have😃 Really? I wanna go to a village now🤔 Me+You=trip to a village in India?😃 Teehee, I say we go!😃 which village though?😆 Uh....yours?😆 Or mine?😆 Or how about we get a map and pick a random one. Of go to the one where Sahir went❤️ Oh oh oh! Or we can go to Ambala😃

Yay! She bumped into someone! 😃 You already know I have a thing with ppl bumping into each other!😉😆😆 Can't wait to see/read what happens next!😃😃 Yes yes I know all about you and bumping into people😆 I'll post the next one soon. By that I mean maybe in a week or two😆 Yes yes yes! 😃 Bumping is fantastically a way to meet!😉 ahhh can't wait!😃 Yes is it. And do you know who she bumps into? The dood wala!😆

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-