New FF: Sau Dard Ch17 pg67 Apr 19

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#251

omg poor prem and i fell sorry for heer but great update and do continue

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Amii

@Amii90

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#252

Awesome fan-fic! i commented on ur other fan-fic; Heer's secret in much detail! plz read that as well. and plz update soon! thank u!

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purplestar22

@purplestar22

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#253

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Im sooooo sorry that this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo late!!

Awww the way Heer woke Prem up was cute! And the whole " I love you" part was really cute as well!! I loved how Heer told Pem that she was pregnant that whole part was awesome! But why did she have a miscarriage????😭 Poor Heer.. I felt so bad for her.

Awesome chapter and cant wait for the next chapter!

Edited by purplestar22 - 16 years ago

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#254

amazing

just loved it.

poor heer and prem

do continue soon..............

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#255

very beautiful and an emotional update..... feeling so sad for heer.... I just hope everything will be alright...wondering wat made her go from Prem...

Will wait for the next update and your PM...

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441240

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Posted: 16 years ago

#256

great update...feel really bad for heer and prem..........plz update soon

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zaara006

@zaara006

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#257

OMG *lump in throat... a very big one*!!!!

Will edit soon.

Right i'm back, but am still stuck on what to write!!!!!!! I'll give it a go... as i always do 😆 😉.

The update, i loved the first half of the update. I thought their mini confrontation was sweet, and i think you would agree with me when i say that only us girls know the difference between like and love... something which most guys wouldn't know even if it came and hit them in the face!!!!! 🤓 The way Heer told Prem about her pregnancy was also very very sweet, hats off to you for comming up with that idea... i loved the baby-fied menu how cute was that!!!!! (very very, if i don't say so myself😉 😃) But i don't know why, but i kept thinking that we were going to see a Heer's secret kind of PJ who does not want kids and then started to assume that that would be the reason why Heer would leave him, but then again the jaz maestro strikes again and gives you an angle that you would never ever expect in your wildest of wild dreams!!!! thats just i Jaz thing,you go and do it over and over again!!!!!! 👏 👏 (i don't know whether thats good or bad so i will give you the benefit of the doubt.... but in return you need to make it alittle more happier, come on yaar after all we ike things going right for Premeer!)

The miscarriages were portrayed with alot of emotions i tell you. And again i go off on tangents thinking what happens next, but as you will come out with something very different from my thoughts i will leave it up to you to do that and will wait for the next update (which i hope is not going to be ags away, or as i said in the HS ff, kaan pakering will not save you anymore!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 🤓)

Eagerly waiting already!!!!!!

p.s. seen as i have said lots of things a ⭐️ for you, you might be thinking why........ i will tell you after your next upsdate, so it won't be only me who is waiting for something!!!!!! As i am a firm beliver in give and take!!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😉

Edited by zaara006 - 16 years ago

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katane

@katane

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#258

dear jaz
it was fab.you gave us first happiness and then really sau dard.😔
why must heer always suffering,and prem also?
please,when you want to work in your story in the present part,please work in their happiness and foreverunion,not continuing prem lonliness and his sadness about his separation from heer.
in the end ,i want to say that you are great writer.👏👏
update soon,pleaseeeeeeeeeee
on the best,dear

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#259

ok jaz i think i will have a heart attack with all this suspense
wait coming back to edit

all the chapers

Prem is all lonely and like I thought that it was actually Heer who was doing all the suffering in the story but you surprised me when it was prem....and he has everything..but is still so empty....that whole chapter got me thinking!!!

and then the present bit of chapter 2 had me amazed your description if emotion is great and then the way you describe the first meeting and the pot belly and moustache was funny....😆

the present bit yet again had me astonished!! and when they fell into each others arms..wait I got that wrong when Heer fell into his arms..cho chweet!!

hilarious....prem thought she was coming to hug him awwwww but still funny because he had his arms wide open for her and then realisation hit him and he realised he hugged someone behind him!! 😆

*speech less*

but heer caught him dancing to thriller I actually like that song by Mr.Jackson
😆

this time Prem caught heer dancibg to thriller

'"Ooo, look at me, I'm Prem Jhuneja…business tycoon!" she said in a mocking tone. "I have a secret passion for Michael Jackson's 'Thriller'. I can dance, hell ya I can!" She continued to shake her hips just like Prem had. "Oh, yeah…shake it!" '

loved that mocking bit and when Prem teased back!

"Why did you stop?" Prem asked. "Please continue. I like you dance much better than mine," he teased. "And I must say, you do a very good Prem Jhuneja impression."

😆

and that glipmse!!!

they got him to shout it out woah
funny!!!!! jealousy is the green monster prem!

and nihaal passed out and prem was about too

😆

awwwww they became one yes yes yes yes yes yes!!!!

and the thriller song is officially there's....prem and heer from jaz's ff you can take the song 😆

He never needed the alarm clock once they got married...but now he does!

and the wedding morning cute too cute!!!
and the romantic dinner f-un-nny!!!!!!
the menu card was a good way to tell and a twin or one was good and it took him so long to realise he is a dad!!

but then they have a miscarriage omg!! and two more making it 3 so then triple omg!!!!!

but what is really eating all my insides is why is he lonely the suspense is literally killing me
Jaz just open everything up please please please

prem alone heer leaves him but why????

seriously help me out here!!

but all in all claps to you

👏

~aashifa~

Edited by curledup - 16 years ago