New FF : Jaan UPDATED (Part 4 Pg 5) - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: bd670816

hey,
i read ur ff.
it was awesome.
cont.soon.
take care.

Thank you ill definatly continue soon thanks!
Love
tiaaz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
hey
awesum update
loved heer
mr knight shiny armour haha
wonder who entered the cave

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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Hi guys im sorry for the really late post....my laptop had some problems with it's internet connection. Plus KDMHMD recent episodes are making me so frustrated and confused. In my opinion if the creatives are really planning to destroy the show completely then they should inform us in advance so that we will not suffer the shock of KDMHMD going off-air. I mean ekta really need to start pulling up her socks fast! Anyways.....This is part 4....hope you guys enjoy it....so sit back get a pepsi and chill.

Part 4

Prem walked towards Heer as fast as he could . He grabbed her from the waist and pulled her to the darkest corner of the cave so that no one could spot them.

Heer's POV

"whoever this man was his touch was creating havoc in her. His warm hands on her slim waist was sending her heart the wrong signals."

Heer was stumped by his gesture. He cornered he to a dark wall. Heer could feel his hot breath on her lips and she started to feel the stomach turning. Prem head was turning left and right cautiously. Heer could hear both their heathbeat. Her hands were pinned to the wall she was against. Her hand wanted to forget everything and touch him. Feel his rapid heathbeat against them. She knew she could not do that she did not even know his name for crying out loud. Them why was their an unknown urge in her to touch him.

Just then a red ant bit Heer on her right hand that was pinned to the wall. She gasped in pain and flunged the hand and rest it on prem's chest unknowingly. Prem turned in shock and looked at the hand on his heartbeat. He then slowly looked at heer who was staring into his eyes. He got lost in the moment and heer got lost in his eyes. Even in the darkness prems eyes stood ........all of sudden she had the crazy thought that the chocolate pair of eyes infront of her was worth dying for..
Their eye lock session was interapted by someone's voice. It was from the man who had come to find them.
"I want you to find her! Woh salli yahin kahin hogi."
Heer turned to prem with shocked filled eyes and spoke in a wisper
"Please mujhe bachao.....agar mein in logon ke haath aa gayi toh.....toh.....patani mere saath kya karengi........please .....mein mein...marjaogi....."
The tears in Heers eyes were rolling down in a stream......she was begging him to save her.......at that moment she was trusting prem more then her life. Prem eyes soften and he wiped her tears away.....he looked deeply in her eyes.....
"kya tumhe lagta hai ke mein tumhe in logo ke haathon mein jaane doonga? Isse phele in logo ko meri jaan leni paregi......Choona toh choro agar in logon ne tumhe dheka bhi toh inhe aisi moot doonga ke moot bhi kapegi."
(This part in on both prem and heer's POV)
Just then the man in the cave spoke again...
" Par woh....woh salli dhikti kaise hai.......?''
'' Meine uuse dheka nahin ......par door se hi kayamat lati hai....uske lambe baal hai..... uska badan...hii hii......badan to mano upsara jaisa hai..."
" Phir toh guru usse marne mein bohot dukh hoga.."
"Arre us salli ko aise tori maraange ..........bohot bagaya hai uss kamini ne......ab uski saza toh milegi naa. Waise bhi bohot din hogaye kisi larki ke badan ko hamare haaton ne sehlaya nahin hai.......ajj bohot maza aayega........Jab woh melegi toh usse toh hum chaaron ki pyaas toh bujane hi paregi....hamare hawas ka shikaar toh usse banna hi parega......"
"waah guru kya baat kahin hai...ub aur intezar nahin hota chalo jalti dunte hai usse...."
The four off them started laughing..
Prem flet his insides boil.......he was on fire.....how could those B**t**Ds talk about her like this...........he wanted to tear all of them into peices ...He knew at that moment that saving her was a must.......even if it cost his life........images of her suffering and pleading infront of those hungry animals filled his mind. He could feel the goosebumps in him......no!
Prem looked down at heer she was looking at prem eyes afriad of looking at him.....her eyes was in tears.....he used his finger to push heer's face up and looked at her eyes......he could see shame in them..................heer closed he eyes and turned away......she was so embarrassed that that for goons were thinking of her as a object to satisfy their hunger thats all! She had never flet being treated so cheap before.......prem turned heer face to him and wiped her tears once again......He knew at that second that the woman in his arms was meant for him....he did not know her.........or anything about her.....but she was his.........whether logical or not she belonged to him from that moment itself and protecting her was as important ad breathing!
Prem tightened his grip on her waist and heer looked up with trust in her eyes for prem......she rested her head on her chest and prem hugged her in a very possesive way.....they stayed silent like this for several moment until they thought that the goons had left ......they let go of each other.and came out of the dark corner..
They were about to leave the cave when Someone grabbed heer from her hair and banged her head against a wall....blood starte to flow from heer's head........she became unconcious and prem was left staring shocked at the sight.......😕😲
PRECAP : Prem heer first kiss.....😳
OKie guys that was part 4 hope you liked it. Please comment on it thanks you...take care
Love
tiaaz..😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

awesome update😊.first i feel bad that goons wer left without getting their dose.but now iam hppy😛 tht surely they get but poor heer got hurt😭.wow!! next is action 😊and romance😳.really can't wait plzzzzzzzzz update nxt pt asap

-sugi

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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
awesome update. loved each and every part of it.
cont.soon.
tc
P.Kamaljit.Sean thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
super update
poor heer
loved precap
hope premeer get out of this mess soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

hey thank god u updated meri tho jaan jarhi thi kk i agree bad joke but yaar kya likthi ho thum wah wah kia bath hai luved it do continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz thank u very much

tc

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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

i read all parts today

it's awesome
can't wait for next part
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
Hey just read all the parts they r awesome.Heer's comic side is really funny and gud.Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update it soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
Hey
just read all the parts
it's really goood
do update soon

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