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Hilary

@hil4eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: .xganga.x
Hey!
That was an awesome update!

I wonder why Heer left Prem!

Can't wait till the meet!

Looking forward to the next update!
xXx

Sunayna

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hi!!! thank youuuuuuu........hhhhmmmm....why did heer leave prem??? read on to find out😉😉...the meeting will be in the nxt update definitely!!!😊

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kavya6724

@kavya6724

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

heer cmae back and wrote a letter to prem for him to take back it is simply superb,well i really want to know the reason behind their break-up.i like the way u described prem letting his heart taken complete control over his mind.wow he does really love her so much.please do continue ur ff,waiting for the next chapter

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Hilary

@hil4eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: kavya6724
heer cmae back and wrote a letter to prem for him to take back it is simply superb,well i really want to know the reason behind their break-up.i like the way u described prem letting his heart taken complete control over his mind.wow he does really love her so much.please do continue ur ff,waiting for the next chapter

heyyyyy!!! heer cam backkkkk!!!! thanks you thank you😛😳 i am glad u liked itttt!!! well u will find out the reason sooooonnnnn!!!! i rally liked the way i described prem too..lol😆...that prt is my fav!!! ooo yahhh he luvvvssss her a lotttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! will continue soon!!!! will pm u when i update! take care...thanks for taking the time and commenting!😊

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Hilary

@hil4eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

I will try and update today guys!😊

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Hilary

@hil4eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Hey guys! This is Part 2! This part was inspired from a book I read... and some things from the story I heard! So this part is not entirely mine!😊

Part 2
Was she doing the right thing? Heer wished she knew, but the truth was, she'd lost her trust in her instincts long ago. Or maybe she'd just lost her trust in her own decisions, specifically the one she'd made to leave California for Paris.When she thought about what she'd given up in order to go off and find herself, her heart physically hurt. It had hurt the whole five years she'd been gone. She'd played at design, flitted around, all under the guise of growing up, but the truth had been far less flattering.
She'd been running.And when she'd realized that painful truth, she had to face the rest. That the running had to stop. That she had to learn to deal with and face her emotions, no matter how scary.So she'd come back to California with some definite goals'starting with finding happiness. To do that, she had to makes amends, right all her wrongs.
Her biggest wrong? Walking away from Prem and the best relationship she'd ever had.But she knew he would never have talked to her if she'd just called him up and asked. Which meant she had to concoct this crazy scheme to get him up here.After at least a half a mile of walking straight up the narrow trail, she came to a fork where she could go straight, or veer off on another trail to the left, neither of which looked familiar. "Damn."It was far colder up here than she remembered, and her lightweight blouse and cargos'while perfectly designed and sewn by hers truly'were no protection from the wind. It whipped up around her, tossing her hair, stinging her cheeks, making her wonder if she was doing the right thing by forcing a reunion with the man who in all likelihood hated her.But she had to try. She'd have no inner peace until she did. "So the question is," she asked herself, "left or straight?"
"Right."
Oh, God. At the low, sexy, unbearably familiar voice, everything within her quivered, and as she turned, she put a hand to her heart because it felt like the organ was going to burst right out of her chest.

There he was'Prem Juneja, tall, lean, rugged, sexy man. He had short dark hair and dark eyes to match.He was wearing a dark blue proffesional suit. He wasn't smiling, but she happened to know that when he did smile, it came off a little sweet, some charming, and had a whole lot of wicked naughtiness to go with it.Not that he'd smile at her, not now, maybe not ever again. Everything within her wanted to run and throw herself at him'just hold on tight and never let go.But he clearly wasn't feeling any such need, and she tampered the urge, reminding herself that she'd put that look of anger on his face. "Hey," she said softly. "So we go right, then, to get to the spot?"
"We?" He slid his hands into his pockets. "There's no we, Heer. Not anymore."

Do share your viewsssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛

Edited by hil4eva - 16 years ago

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Hilary

@hil4eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

I have updated part 2!!! comment and share ur views!!!

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Sadia87

@Sadia87

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

omg u updated!!

awesome!!

but oh so short..plz continue soon..

mucho love

oh and whats up with heer? why back after so many years?!?! what does she except from prem? = of course he's gonna be angry with her..lol..

plz continue soooooon!!

-Sadi*

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@flowers4u

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

oooooooooooh i want them to be 2hether

anyways luv ur ff

do continue

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: sadizzle
omg u updated!!
awesome!!

but oh so short..plz continue soon..

mucho love

oh and whats up with heer? why back after so many years?!?! what does she except from prem? = of course he's gonna be angry with her..lol..

plz continue soooooon!!

-Sadi*

hey!! thankxz..i am glad u liked it!!... yes i know very short!!! will cont. soon!! all ur questions will be answered!!!! ooooo he is angry...but will anger outweigh his love??? or will love outweigh the anger???😉😉 read on to find out!!!😃