FF-(new)-Tujh Mein rab dihkta hai...pt3pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nikita
nice 2 see one more ff of ur's...... i loved ur dil par likhdo ff..... u started this off really well..... cliffhanger!!! do update soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg niki niki niki!.. ur bak wif a brand new FF!!.. lol.. i thouth u wer nevah guna do anotha FF lol.. will be reading this one.. luved it tu bits!.. it's a great start!.. crnt wait for the next update :d

x-Radhika
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heer-Ab jeene ke liye koi waja nahi hai…Kisi asse insane ke saath shaddi karna, jisse main pyaar nahi karthe…Isse toh acha hai ki main iss duniya main hi na rahoon…

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Heer stood at the edge of the hill, and closed her eyes, reliving each of those 7 days clearly as if recalling each scene in her head…

2 weeks ago…

Heer-Ma!! Jaldi..!! Mere flight choot jaye gi!!

Teji-Arre!! Asse kaise choot jaye gi!! Bus 2 minute

Teji came out with a thali, she put a tikka on Heer's forehead, and began to cry

Heer-Ma!!Please math roo!!

Balraj came into the house after loading the suitcase into the car

Balraj-Arre tum bhi na Teji, Beti ek shaddi attend karne jarahi hai, konsa humesha ke liye ja rahi hai…

Teji-Shaddi toh ek din ki baath hai… liken Greece goom ne bhi toh jarahi hai…Heer tu ek kam kar, bus shaddi attend karke vapiss ajja!

Heer-ma!! Itne mushkill se toh appko razi kiya…Come on ma, sirf 5 din ka Greece ka tour hai…I promise main aapko rooz phone karoongi…

Meher began to talk in between

Meher-And you never know mummyji, Di ko koi ladka pasand ajjaye?? Some hot Punjabi munda no?

Teji-Chup…Wase…

Heer cut Teji off

Heer-MA!!! Mere flight…

Balraj-Haan chal…

And heer and balraj were off to the airport…

At the airport Heer met up with Ashlesha, and Rubina her two best friends…

Ashlesha-Hey Heer!! Rupa ko maine phone kardiya tha…She said she wont be able to join us for the tour, plus ussne tho pure zindagi vahi toh bithani hai…So…Its just the three of us…

Rubina-Haan haan, sari bathein airport ke bhar karni hai, ki flight mein bethna hai!

Heer-Haan haan, tum log Chaloo, main athi hoon…

Heer-Acha, daddyji main chalthi hoon..

Balraj-Beta, appna kyal rakna…aur yeh le…Kuch pasie

Balraj hands Heer a pack of Euros…

Heer-Daddyji?

Balraj-Chup chap lelo…

Heer takes the money and puts it into her bag

Balraj-Kub masti karna, aur humhari isath ka kya rakna…

Heer-Ji daddyji…

Heer and Balraj hug, and Heer runs inside

Heer looked around for the Alitalia check in counter…

Rubina-over here!!

Rubina waved to Heer, who eventually saw her…

Heer ran up to them, and all three quickly checked in…

As the three entered the plane they looked for there seats…

Heer-Where is 32B?

Rubina-Forget that, 37D kahan hai??

Ash-aur 47 E?

Heer-Great! Hum sab alag betrahein hai!! Listen you guys…Jab hum Greece poonchegein, and incase we loose each other, we'll wait by baggage claim…and if we see each others bags…Take them!!

Ash-Haan haan, yeh le Heer tera seat agaya hai! And be friendly!

Rubina-I think I found my seat!! Wow !! What a hot guy in the seat next to mine!!

Heer-Ruby!! Chup!!

Ashlesha-Kabhie kabhie, tera beheanji wala attitude kills the mood yaar…

Heer-Haan haan, flirt nahi hone se toh acha hai ki main beheanji bano!

Rubina-Tum log fight karthe raho, main appne hunk ke pass chale!!

As the three girls settled down…

Preet-Where the hell is he??

Harman-Why would I know??

Preet-Haan haan, you never know anything!

Harman-Oh shut up!

Preet-You! Look 15 minute mein Alitalia ka counter band hojaye ga! Aur abhi tak bhai ka koi atha patha nahi !

Harman-What ever, bhai and his usual lateness! I'm going to board…! I;m not missing this wedding for anything! Its Kabir after all!

Preet-True man! Chal…Bhai ki kismat main hoga toh ayyengeh!!

XXX

Edited by nikitaic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
hey
awesum super update
thanks for pm

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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
ooooh is it prem they r waiting for?????/
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Awesome UPDATE!!!👏👏👏
loved it !!!!
plz continue SOOOON!!!!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
wow prem gonna make an entry in next part?? wowww update soonnn
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
its a nice start👏Keep It Up👍🏼cont soon ll b waiting for the next part.Takecare
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow! Continue Soon... -Priyanka xx 😃

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