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Posted: 16 years ago
Arre nahiin sugi yaar.................I honestly didn't take it to my heart...............To be honest................Its been almost four years I have been writing FFs.................my first FF was for LRL.................tab toh Harshad was kind of nobody for me..................lekin abb toh its entirely a different situation.................distract ho gayi harshad kaa naam aatey hii dekha?................Haan toh I was saying in all these years there have been people who say my FF r like Ekta shows...............and this time it was u who said it...............isliye pehli baar I have come out with this wish and dream of mine...................to share it with u all.................and Thanx dear................for all this encouragement shown by u...............Thanx dear.....................😃
And haan..............u liked Ranbeer's dialogues naa?................Bahot mehnat se soch kar likhna padaa yaar...............but I'm glad u noticed...............😊
I hope u remain hooked to the FF just like u r to the show..............and I'm able to live upto ur expectations..................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi premeer928.................Welcome to the FF dear...............Glad u liked this part...............and well especially Ranbeer's dialogues..............Badaa sochna pada likhte hue................but I'm glad it was worth an effort..............after all u guys noticed it..............anyways...............Thanx once again...............Next part asap.................Till then take care and enjoy.................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely.... and i hope finally in next part premeer will meet....
update soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
nice update again
kya dialouge tha
can't wait till heer see prem
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Posted: 16 years ago

bohath acha laga luved it cant w8 for da next long part lol

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx d@niy@ ................Glad u enjoyed this part too dear.................yes they both will meet in the next part..............what follows...............hope u enjoy that too................Thanx once again.................. 😃
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi pooji.................Thanx yaar for noticing the dialogues.................glad u enjoyed the whole thing too.................I just hope u enjoy the next part even more..................where Heer will at last see Prem..................Thanx once again............... 😊
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx zaibun .................Glad u r enjoying the FF dear..................Hope u continue to do it in the future too................Next long part asap...............Thanx once again dear..................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi guys.................I'm back................I had been sooooooooooo stressed out for the past few weeks ke poocho matt.................Itna kaam..............bas poocho hii nahiin yaar!...............Anyways I'm done with all the stuff.................successfully.................all thanx to ur good wishes................Thanx a ton for all those wishes all of u...................and here's the next...................very awaited.................long part for all of u...................Hope u all enjoy this one too.......................😊

Prem reaches where Heer………….who was enjoying each and every moment in the rain………………….looks towards the side from wher Prem was coming towards her……………..she feels numb…………….unable to believe…………her wish had come true…………..the man she was wondering how she would find just a little while ago……………was walking towards her!...............No………….it was a dream………….Heer had decided…………..she turns away…………….not understanding kii vo ……………vo sapna hai jisse Heer apni hakeekat banaana chahti thi…………ya phir wahi hakeekat…………jo abb sirf yeh sapna ban kar reh gayi thi………………She slowly turns around……………almost sure he won't be there…………….😊

Prem was right in front of her…………..looking at her…………….Heer found it hard to blieve………….she wanted to say it…………..say it all………….but words seemed to have got caught in her throat itself……………Kitna kuch kehna tha……………kitna kuch bataana tha……………kab se Heer ke dil ko intezaar tha iss pal ka……………..lekin na jaane kyun…………….uss pal mein………….Heer chup ho gayi…………….itni raatein bitaayi thi……………uss aasmaan ko dekh…………..Prem se baatein kartey hue…………….aur aaj jab vo unn nigaahon ke saamne tha……………zubaan ne saath chod diya……………….Heer was silent………………while Prem brings forward his hand……………..😳

Heer holds his hand and the two dance to the song (Well I thought sooooooooooo much as to an appropriate song for this situation……………and found this one to be just perfect and apt…………..hope u like my choice………………….the song from Heer's side)……………………

Hmmm Ummmmm Aahaa Ooo HooBaithe Rahe Khayalon Mein Yu..Uljhe Rahein.. Sawaalon Mein Yuun HiUmm Kitni Baatein Hai Jo Kehna Paaye UnakoHum Toh Na The Iss Tarah.................(Hooo Hoooooo Aankhon Hi Aankhon Mein Yuun) - 2 Khoye Rahein..Hmmm Ummmmm Aahaa Ooo Hoo The two come closer as the next para of the song begins-- Plzzzzzzzzzz guys I just hope u all can imagine the situation……………….. Bas Tumko Dekhe, Dekhate Hi RaheRuk Jaye Lamhein Sabhi Jaate HuyeKya Tumse Kehde, Aur Kya Na KaheTum Hi Samajh Lo Sabhi Ai Kaash KeBas Yeh Tamanna Hai Dil Jo Apna Hai, Usko Mil Jao TumAbb Na Khayalon Mein, Na Sawalon Mein, Baahon Mein Aao Tum..(Hooo Hoooooo Aankhon Hi Aankhon Mein Yuun) - 2 Khoye Rahein Chand Sitare Sare Benur The, Tumse Mile To Sabhi Roshan Huye..Yeh Sab Najare Phir Mile Naa Mile, Ek Do Kadam Hi Sahi Milkar ChaleKal Kisne Dekha Hai Kya Bharosa Hai, Reh Na Jaaye GileYeh Ibtada Bhi Hai Intehan Bhi Hai, Hai Mohabbat Liye(Hooo Hoooooo Aankhon Hi Aankhon Mein Yuun) - 2 Khoye Rahein, Khoye Rahein, Khoye Rahein..........

The song comes to an end………….Prem finds himself close to Heer……………closer than he had been to even Sanjana……………….her would be wife……………He slowly brings his face closer to Heer's………………who just gave in showing no resistance……….……………..still finding it hard to believe he was there…………………….😳

Only one word leaves Heer's mouth…………….as she whispers-- Prem……………

The spell seems to have broken!.................

All of a sudden…………he realizes what he was going to do…………….No! It was wrong…………….He moves away…………….almost pushing Heer away from her…………….and the paayal in Heer's hand………….strikes hard against Prem's hand…………which starts bleeding as he holds the paayal in his hand……………

He thinks to himself…………….cursing for what he was going to do-- Yeh…………yeh kya ho gaya tha mujhe?...............Aisa…………aisa kaise kar sakta hoon main……………Nahiin…………..(he says deciding)………….yeh galat hai……………..

Heer looks at him and breaks the silence…………..shedding tears………….tears of joy………….the happiness of having him back……………back in her…………atleast that's what she thought…………….

Heer holds Prem's bleeding hand……………..worried he was hurt……………but she starts kiising his hand…………….desperately……………not letting him go away this time……………..at any cost……………She kept on mumbling all the while—Tum aa gaye…………..main……………main jaanti thi tum aaogey………….tumhe kuch nahiin ho sakta……………tum………….tum mere Prem ho……………..sirf mere……………

Prem is confused……………he frees himself from her saying-- Yeh kya kar rahi hain aap?..................Please…………..don't do this………….aap………..aap galat samajh rahi hain…………..main aapka nahiin……………..(Prem says showing his engagement ring)……………kisi aur kaa Prem hoon………….aap…………aapko kuch galat fehmi ho gayi hai………………….

Heer looks in utter shock and disbelief at Prem…………….wondering why he was behaving like that…………….and the ring…………..Prem was engaged?!...............Heer was taken aback……………her heart seemd to have been shredded to pieces…………….Prem was engaged?!.................lekin……….lekin………….aissa kaise ho sakta hai…………Heer thought to herself……………….while Prem turns around to leave from there…………….😲

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

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