FF When love finds a way PREM RETURNs UpDt..Pg44.. - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

317

Views

31.8k

Users

28

Likes

19

Frequent Posters

Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Here's the next longggggggggggg part................Hope u all like it...............

There Prem was already at his nerve's edge……………he shouts at the driver-- aur kitna waqt lagega?.................

The driver tells him-- Main jaldi karne kii koshish kar raha hoon saab…………….

Prem attends ranbeer's call meanwhile…………….Ranbeer says-- Kya hua Prem?...............is everything OK?................Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai……………

Prem replies back annoyed-- Pareshaan is a very trivial word to explain my stae of mind ok Ranbeer?!.................Mera dimaag kharaab ho raha hai…………..this…………this khataara gaadi has broken down………….upar se yeh baarish…………..Damn!.........................

Ranbeer tries to console him saying-- Lekin the jaldi kis baat kii hai?.................Raat ke baarah baje tu koi meeting ke liye toh late nahiin ho raha then why in a hurry my friend?..................

Prem replies back-- I have work to do ranbeer……………mujhe hotel pahonch ke bahot saara kaam karna hai…………….I…………I don't want to be stuck ina car…………..and in this heavy rain……………at this hour of the night………….Samjha?!................

Ranbeer replies-- Relax Prem…………….relax…………..chal ek kaam kar…………..look out of the window………….batta tujhe kya nazar aa raha hai?....................

Prem is really annoyed and he says-- Ranbeer……………Please!...............Mera dimaag kharaab matt kar…………..abb main iss waqt tujhe baahar kaa picture description doon?!..................

On Ranbeer insisting Prem looks out of the window……………….

Prem is really annoyed and he says-- Ranbeer……………Please!...............Mera dimaag kharaab matt kar…………..abb main iss waqt tujhe baahar kaa picture description doon?!..................

On Ranbeer insisting Prem looks out of the window……………….

He sees Heer getting drenched in the rain……………dancing her way to glory………….all alone!

Prem eplies back to Ranbeer who was waiting for him saying-- Ek nihaayti bevakoof…………aur baddimaag ladki…………baarish mein bheeg rahi hai………….aur vo bhi akeli………….aur kuch? (he asks irritated)……………

Ranbeer replies back-- Arre toh ek baar tuu bhi usske saath baarish mein bheegne ka mazaa kya hota hai jaan le naa?...................

Prem loses it by then and replies-- Alright Ranbeer………….bahot ho gaya………….kabse dimaag kharaab kar raha hai mera………….mujhe kisi ke saath nahiin bheegnaa……………I just want this damn car (he shouts)………….to be repaired taaki main hotel jaa sakoon aur…………….

Ranbeer cleans his ears and intervenes-- Aur kyaa Prem?................Agly din ke liye packing kar sakey…………..meeting kii taiyaari kar sakey………….bas yehi naa?...............Come on Prem…………..abb bahot hua………….subah se jitna kaam karna tha tune kar liya…………….Abb relax………….iss bhaaga daudi mein teri zindagi beet jaayegi……………aur phir tujhe ehsaas hoga tune kya kuch khoya hai…………..iss naam aur paise aur shohrat mein kuch nahiin rakhaa……………Sanjana ke saath reh kar tu bhi ussi kii tarah materialistic ban gaya hai…………….Ek baar………….ek baar iss gaadi se baahar kadam rakh kar toh dekh…………..vo thandi thandi hawaa jab tujhe chueygii…………tab ehsaas hoga……………zindagi kitni khoobsurat hai………………vo baarish kii bondein jab tere chehre par pedengii…………….tab ehsaas hoga kii tu kita khushnaseeb hai…………….uss ehsaas ko mehsoos kar sakta hai……………jab vo boondein tujhpar se hokar zameen par girengii…………..apne saath teri saari pareshaniyaan…………tere saare gham apne saath le jaayengi………………aur phir…………..vo geeli mitti ki saudhi saundhi khushboo…………..ehsaas dilaayegi kii haan…………..abb ek nayi shuruvaat hai…………….bevakoof aur baddimaag vo ladki nahiin………….Tu hai Prem……………U r missing something she is enjoying…………..ek baar jaa kar toh dekh………………

Prem was listening quietly all this while…………….

He says a yes and gets off the car………………

Through the entrance of the Juneja mansion…………….

He enters the garden…………….where Heer was…………….

All this while eh felt exactly what Ranbeer had said……………..he felt fresh………….alive…………..energetic………….and walked towards Heer…………..as if some unknown force was taking him to her……………

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao................

Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Sorry guys...............There's something wrong.................I'll post the next upate soon................
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Alright I'll be soon posting the next part..................
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Here's the next longggggggggggg part................Hope u all like it...............

There Prem was already at his nerve's edge……………he shouts at the driver-- aur kitna waqt lagega?.................

The driver tells him-- Main jaldi karne kii koshish kar raha hoon saab…………….

Prem attends ranbeer's call meanwhile…………….Ranbeer says-- Kya hua Prem?...............is everything OK?................Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai……………

Prem replies back annoyed-- Pareshaan is a very trivial word to explain my stae of mind ok Ranbeer?!.................Mera dimaag kharaab ho raha hai…………..this…………this khataara gaadi has broken down………….upar se yeh baarish…………..Damn!.........................

Ranbeer tries to console him saying-- Lekin the jaldi kis baat kii hai?.................Raat ke baarah baje tu koi meeting ke liye toh late nahiin ho raha then why in a hurry my friend?..................

Prem replies back-- I have work to do ranbeer……………mujhe hotel pahonch ke bahot saara kaam karna hai…………….I…………I don't want to be stuck ina car…………..and in this heavy rain……………at this hour of the night………….Samjha?!................

Ranbeer replies-- Relax Prem…………….relax…………..chal ek kaam kar…………..look out of the window………….batta tujhe kya nazar aa raha hai?....................

Prem is really annoyed and he says-- Ranbeer……………Please!...............Mera dimaag kharaab matt kar…………..abb main iss waqt tujhe baahar kaa picture description doon?!..................

On Ranbeer insisting Prem looks out of the window……………….

Prem is really annoyed and he says-- Ranbeer……………Please!...............Mera dimaag kharaab matt kar…………..abb main iss waqt tujhe baahar kaa picture description doon?!..................

On Ranbeer insisting Prem looks out of the window……………….

He sees Heer getting drenched in the rain……………dancing her way to glory………….all alone!

Prem eplies back to Ranbeer who was waiting for him saying-- Ek nihaayti bevakoof…………aur baddimaag ladki…………baarish mein bheeg rahi hai………….aur vo bhi akeli………….aur kuch? (he asks irritated)……………

Ranbeer replies back-- Arre toh ek baar tuu bhi usske saath baarish mein bheegne ka mazaa kya hota hai jaan le naa?...................

Prem loses it by then and replies-- Alright Ranbeer………….bahot ho gaya………….kabse dimaag kharaab kar raha hai mera………….mujhe kisi ke saath nahiin bheegnaa……………I just want this damn car (he shouts)………….to be repaired taaki main hotel jaa sakoon aur…………….

Ranbeer cleans his ears and intervenes-- Aur kyaa Prem?................Agly din ke liye packing kar sakey…………..meeting kii taiyaari kar sakey………….bas yehi naa?...............Come on Prem…………..abb bahot hua………….subah se jitna kaam karna tha tune kar liya…………….Abb relax………….iss bhaaga daudi mein teri zindagi beet jaayegi……………aur phir tujhe ehsaas hoga tune kya kuch khoya hai…………..iss naam aur paise aur shohrat mein kuch nahiin rakhaa……………Sanjana ke saath reh kar tu bhi ussi kii tarah materialistic ban gaya hai…………….Ek baar………….ek baar iss gaadi se baahar kadam rakh kar toh dekh…………..vo thandi thandi hawaa jab tujhe chueygii…………tab ehsaas hoga……………zindagi kitni khoobsurat hai………………vo baarish kii bondein jab tere chehre par pedengii…………….tab ehsaas hoga kii tu kita khushnaseeb hai…………….uss ehsaas ko mehsoos kar sakta hai……………jab vo boondein tujhpar se hokar zameen par girengii…………..apne saath teri saari pareshaniyaan…………tere saare gham apne saath le jaayengi………………aur phir…………..vo geeli mitti ki saudhi saundhi khushboo…………..ehsaas dilaayegi kii haan…………..abb ek nayi shuruvaat hai…………….bevakoof aur baddimaag vo ladki nahiin………….Tu hai Prem……………U r missing something she is enjoying…………..ek baar jaa kar toh dekh………………

Prem was listening quietly all this while…………….

He says a yes and gets off the car………………

Through the entrance of the Juneja mansion…………….

He enters the garden…………….where Heer was…………….

All this while eh felt exactly what Ranbeer had said……………..he felt fresh………….alive…………..energetic………….and walked towards Heer…………..as if some unknown force was taking him to her……………

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao................

purplestar22 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
awesom eupdate!!! but u ended up posting teh same chapter a couple ties!!!!
-svetalana- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
awesome ,Nice update.Good one.Keep it up.
sugii thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago

hey its superb.ranbeer's dialogue part is grt.i enjoyed it vry much.

hmmm.... coming to my virus compliment..first i don't know what to name tht virus, as ekta is queen in this field, i used it (no offence personally just for fun yaar)as no other name came to my mind.wow!😃as a result i hv found junior ekta😊 .i love ekta's all concepts of her serials.but the main prob comes when serial has to be dragged .it goes up when it dragged using interesting concept without losing the intial concept.thats really vry vry vry hard.its really a vry vry grt talent to lead a serial in an interesting manner and my opninion after seeing ur ff i feel u r perfect for serial maker and hope u will lead serial in interesting way.i love to see urs.ALL THE BEST👍🏼 for ur future plans.And now onwards i'll see ur ff as serial.i believe u tht u'll surely proceed it in intersting way.

eagerly waiting for nxt pt to enjoy.

-sugi😊

Edited by sugi77 - 16 years ago
asyasahil928 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
hey
that was awesome 👏 ranbeer's dialogue was so meaningful and emotional. cant wait to read the next part...continue soon. 😊
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx purplestar22 ...............Glad u enjoyed this part too dear..................Yaa I know................actually connection slow tha...............I kept on pressing post reply waala option again and again.................isliye ended up posting it many times😆.................anyways thanx once again dear....................😊
Princess_Priya1 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx Intellienough ..............Glad u enjoyed this part too dear..............next part asap................till then take care...............and keep replying.............. 😊
Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".