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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello to all of u.

thanx to all those who appreciated my work and gave me suggestions. ur encouragement and responses meant alot to me.
Before posting another creation from HEER's Diary. i want to clarify u all that the poetry in HEER's Diary is not my own poetry its all from my collections.
So one more from HEER's Diary......
Suno!
Hum toot jayen ge
K doori seh na payan ge,
"JUDAI MAAR DALAY GI"
Suno!
Yeh ankhain bohjhal hain,
inhain kis trha behlayen,
"JUDAI MAAR DALAY GI"
Suno!
Hum so na payan ge,
kabi khush ho na payan ge,
"JUDAI MARR DALAY GI"
Suno!
Yeh dil tumhara hai,
na tum bin ab guzara hai,
SUNO!
Kuch waqt do hum ko,
Bana lain dost is Ghum ko,
Humain maloom hai aakhir..
"JUDAI MAAR DALAY GI"
"JUDAI MAAR DALAY GI"
Plz comment on it.
Link for HEER's DIARY 1:
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1081967
Link for HEER's DIARY 2:
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1082135

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Posted: 16 years ago
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yay first to read! its awesome poems...who are they written by. thanks for sharing them 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome poems
nd gr8 work by u

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