Yeh Wada Raha FF-PART 7:PG.12-NEW UPDATE!!-3/15/09 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I love ur character sketch
waiting 4 ur first part
ayesha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THANKS A LOT:
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~sweet Ash~
Wil try my best to continue soon.....
PALCHIN
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice do update ur first part soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice CHARACTER SKETCH update part 1 soon waitingggggggggggggg
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg i luv this!!
plz do continue with this ff!
i luv the sketch..can't wait for part 1..
good luck with developing this ff..
from the looks of it - i predict this ff will be really cute
plz update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nie character sketch..cnt wait for the actual part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1

At Mann Niwas: Their House


Little pond/Garden in their yard:

It was 10:30 at night. Outside it was dark and chilly with fierce wind blowing outside. Balraj and Teji were in their room discssing something important.

Balraj: (smiling at his wife) Aaj mai bahot khush hu.....Pata hai kyu....?

Teji: (smiling back to him) Lekin aap itne khush kyu hai.....aur woh kiska phone tha?....

Balraj: (looking at her) Lalit ka....Woh kal hi wapas India aa raha hai.....

Teji: (really happy) Kya?....

Balraj: Haa.....

Teji: Par kal woh kab aa rahe hai?.....

Balraj: Kal subha......7 baje.....woh sab airport poch jayenge.....

Teji: Mai abhi Baccho ko kehti hu.....

B: Theek hai....lekin Heer se Prem ke baare me kuch mat khena......

T: Theek hai......

Saying that, she goes to Meher's and Ash's room to tell them about the Junejas coming. Meher was really happy to get the news while Ash just laid on her bed caring less. Lastly Teji goes to Heer's room. She comes and stands at her doorway where she spots Heer looking outside the window, wearing this.

Her window was open and the fresh, cool air was blowing inside. The air was making her dupatta fly as well as her long, black, silky hair blow beautifully. Teji looked at her beautiful daughter who was in deep thought. She slowly approached towards her and then stood behind her without Heer noticing anything. She raised her hand and gently patted her hair. Heer notices this and turns to look at her mom.

Heer: (smiles) Kya hua maa.....

T: Beta...kal Lalit bhaisaab aa rahe hai.....

H: (excited) Lali chachu?.....Sach....

T: Haa...woh sab kal subhe aa rahe hai aur hum sab unhe leene jaa rahe hai......Issiliye mai yeh khene aayi thi ke tu sooja......jaldi uthna haina.....

H: Haa maa...lekin Meher kaha hai....

T: Wahi.....meri rockstar beti ke saath.....tum dono ko dekh kar koi nahi keh sakta ke tum dono behene ho.....

H: (smiles)

T: Tu sooja beta.....

H: Theek hai...Goodnight.....

T: Goodnight.....

Teji leaves the room and then goes to sleep in her room. Everyone was asleep by 11:00 besides Heer. She had so much excitment about her Lali chachu coming. She lay there on the bed trying to sleep but she couldn't. She got up and walked towards her little mandir next to her bed. There lay a cute murti of Lord Ram, Sita, and Lakshman.

H: (looking at her Ram) Mujhe neend kyu nahi aa rahi hai.....kya kal kuch khaas hone wala hai?....Itni becheni si kyu ho rahi hai?.....Aisa lag raha hai ke meri zindagi kal se badalne wali hai....Kuch toh ishara di jiye.....Kya kal kuch khaas hai kya? (she closes her eyes)

Suddenly the winds blows hard from the window making a rose petal fly to Heer's hand. Heer opens her eyes and is shocked to find her Ram's "ishaara." She smiles at the murti and goes to sleep again knowing for sure that tomorrow was going to be one special day for her. She keeps staring at the petal for a while and then falls asleep in no time. The wind makes the rose petal blow out of her hand and out the window it goes.

To know where the flower went, stay tuned. Baqi next time. Please leave you views and comments because that is the only way I get to know if its good or not. I hate editing so sorry for any mistakes in the typing. Love you all and PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!

Palchin

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey palchin!! great start!! loved how u described everything so well...plz continue soon...the story's very interestiing!!

garima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: srklover93

hey palchin!! great start!! loved how u described everything so well...plz continue soon...the story's very interestiing!!

garima

Thank you so much Garima.....And nice to meet you...I am happy to know that you liked my fanfic.....I hope to get m ore replies so that I get to know if other people like it or not. I will continue soon. I have the 2nd part done but just wanted to know people's opinion on how it was. Thank for the encouraging comments. They truly really help. Love Ya!
Palchin( you can call me Pallu as well-nickname😆)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dr.Smart

Thank you so much Garima.....And nice to meet you...I am happy to know that you liked my fanfic.....I hope to get m ore replies so that I get to know if other people like it or not. I will continue soon. I have the 2nd part done but just wanted to know people's opinion on how it was. Thank for the encouraging comments. They truly really help. Love Ya!
Palchin( you can call me Pallu as well-nickname😆)



awww....ur welcome pallu (lol nice nickname..its cute)
im sure u'll get many replies!!! cant wait till second part!! love ya too!!!

garima<33

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