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aww thanxx...u guyz motivate me so muchh...i feel like i have fans...lol i am corny i noo...HHEHE(A)
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hey
just read part 5 6
awesum
loved it
wonder what will happen👏👏
do cont soon...
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YOOOOOOOOOO! I loveeee your FF yaaar!!! maann, that was soo gooddd... i lovee the ideaasss... and the way the story goes alongg... i lovee the concepptt hehe.. poor Tusshaarr and LOL your FF- it is SOOOOOOO FUNNYY!!
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"Okay then, I am Prem'Prem Juneja. And you are?" inquired Prem

"Heer..Heer Juneja" replied heer still in his thoughts
"WHAT" said prem shockingly
"Sorry, Maan..Heer Maan" said Heer

🤣

"Why did you tell prem to marry my sister? now he keeps asking me," said heer

"So, sharing is caring..share him with your sister" laughed tushar
"THAT RULE APPLIES TO FOOD YOU DONKEY, MONKEY, JANGILI BILLI" fumed heer

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Edited by sakeena - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!
I just caught up on all the parts!
and your FF is just Woooooow!
I loved it all!
and now her Grandad's there, wonder about what's gonna happen next!
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Thank you guys once more for the motivating comments?and I really appreciate the fact that you all actually take the time to read my FF's. Thanks a lot all of you?Thanks Anuthika aka karthika for editing?

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Part 7:

Recap: Prem and Heer are at the dhabha where her grandpa shows up

At the sound of her grandpa's voice, Heer stands up which causes Prem to stand as well. Prem notices a thick man standing with a beard and a turban coming towards them. He was dressed in a white dhothi and a kurta and he was also wearing glasses. As soon as Heer's eyes met with those of her grandpa, she felt nervous. She wondered why though as no one except her and tushar knew that she had loved prem from the depth of her heart. She could easily lie and tell her grandpa that Prem and her are just friends. But, something in her soul, in her mind, in the most deepest corner of the heart- something forbade her to do so, to tell her grandpa that her relation with prem was just of a friend.

"Heer beta, I never expected this from you, alone in Bombday, with a man?" asked her grandpa

"Dada ji, Were just?", Heer tried to say but was interrupted by Prem

"We were just coming to tell you that we are both in love but I was explaining to her how important it is to meet you guys before we settle anything", said Prem

At that moment, Heer was not able to believe what had just happened. Was she dreaming? Everything had stopped for a second? the birds stopped singing, the people stopped doing what they were doing?everything was quiet. In her mind, being the bollywood fan she is, played tumhi dekho na.

"Kiya? You have chosen this man to be your lawfully wedded husband", asked Dadaji

The question made Heer turn red? and not just red? about 100 shades of red which were easily identified due to her creamy skin. She turned around so that no one could see, she wasn't a shy girl. She had confidence, self esteem, empowerment. She couldn't see herself shy away so she turned around and said

"Yes, yes he is".

"Well since you have chosen this man, ill talk it through with your mother and invite you over to go over some rituals?until then ?Jeetay raho (bless you my child)" he said as he bid farewell to the "couple"

The drive to Heer's house was very silent. Prem didn't do anything as he was so stunned at what had just happened. He wasn't even aware of what he was doing.

Heer was just looking up at the blue sky smiling, she was thinking about they way he had said that they were in love. This thought made her blush again and again.

"Prem, why did you do that", asked Heer finally

"I don't know, Tushar had told me about the problems that you would have to face if you didn't find a job and a husband so I thought I would help", said Prem

"So you did this out of pity or?" inquired Heer

"No?not at all?you are my friend so why would I do that", Prem wondered

"Yes why would you", Heer said as she told him to stop the car so she could get out

The blue sky turned grey and the clouds started to appear. The wind blew faster and heavier as the rain droplets started to fall. Heer felt a drop on her face and ran?ran as fast as she could so that Prem wouldn't see her. Prem knew he had hurt her? but he didn't do it intentionally. He was trying to help her only.

That night Heer was surprisingly happy. She wasn't a person who would take such things seriously. Although she was happy that she had incurred a fight with Prem. This would lead to more love as she thought he was thinking about her.

Prem was really worried that he had hurt her so he decided to take a walk. There he met Tushar who was standing in the rain, dousing in water. Tushar failed to recognize Prem and concentrated on what he was about to lose in his life. As soon as Prem tapped him?

"Hey Prem, you here?" inquired Tushar

"Yes, Heer and I had an argument. Well not much of an argument but?yeah." Said Prem

He explained what had happened.

"Oh that's too bad?Heer is a nice girl? you shouldn't have hurt her. From what I know about Heer, she doesn't take things seriously. She probably has forgotten all about it now. You should go to her", said Tushar hesitantly

"Tushar, have you ever fallen in love", asked Prem

"Maybe, why do you ask", asked Tushar

"Because I know it's a feeling that cannot be described. I think I like someone," exclaimed Prem

"Oh really", Tushar said tentatively, "and who might that be"

"Oh this girl, Sanjana, I think I like her? she adores me. She will die for me", said Prem

"Yeah Heer's love is like that, wait what? You like sanjana?", said Tushar shockingly

"I don't know I think I do? my mom and dad like her so I guess so", said Prem

"What do you mean guess so? you either love someone or you don't? and if you like her why did you pretend to be Heer's lover", asked Tushar

"Heer is a really close friend and I wanted to help her out?. I am not sure if I love sanjana yet though. We'll see" Said prem as he turned and left.

Now Tushar was confused. He knew if he told heer, she would shatter. But if he didn't he would shatter due to the burden. Both ways was a lose-lose situation. He didn't know what to do. He called Heer?.

Precap- Heer takes her Flower pot and throws it?

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!
Fantastic update!
Sanjana....Oh no...hope this doesn't get Heer mad!
Cont soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.
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Part 8:
It was a stormy night, clouds were blocking the moons light to show through, lightning and thunder were very loud. Loud enough to scare the most toughest of the mankind. Heer was standing on the deserted wearing faded jeans and a bright pink kurti with sequins. Her hair wasn't clipped back, as usual, and was flying in different directions. Heer was trying to reach out to someone who could help her but the heavy winds wouldn't let Heers slender body move even the weakest of her muscle. She couldn't talk either. Then from the shadows of the sky stood a built, strong man in front of her. He was dressed in mens jeans and a white kurta. His hair seemed messed due to the winds and his face was red because of the harsh cold weather. Prem, yes it was Prem. As he came close to picking Heer up in his arms...THE PHONE RANG

"Who is it man", Heer said angrily

"Its me, Tushar, I really need to speak with you. Its important", replied Tushar

"Why, whats wrong", asked Heer worryingly

"Umm...Umm you know Prem, have you ever spoken to him about love", posed Tushar

"No why, did he say something about me to you?," asked Heer excitedly

Hearing the excitement in her voice, Tushar couldn't do it. He was too scared to do it. Worried that he might lose her, worried that she might be broken, worried that the bubbly Heer he knows would become depressed and frustrated.He wasnt a coward...he was just worried...

"Yes he said that you eat a lot and that you should stop...its not good to eat unhealthy foods at this time", Tushar laughed as he kept the phone

Heer got really mad.

At sunrise, she woke up...did her usual prayers and left for the radio station. She was wearing her usual "Indian wife" get up which was getting to her now. As soon as she saw Tushar, she started walking behing him. As soon as they got into his office, she locked the door. Tushar turned around and saw an angry, fuming Heer about to slap and break everything.

"You ruined my dream yesterday", said Heer walking towards him

"Come on Heer it was just a joke," he chuckled as he said it, he was walking back

She had him against the wall now....even though he was taller than her she was able to make level to level contact.

"My izzat Heer...my dignity stop please Heer stop...some one will see us", said Tushar

"Ahh you're such a drama queen tushar...you ruined my most wonderful dream", said Heer as she let go of him

"Oh really, well let me tell you something Heer", said Tushar

"You are in love with someone who...who...who may or may not love you back...but I...Heer. I..," paused Tushar

It was now the other way around as he walking towards Heer. He had her against the wall. He caressed her face with his finger and removed the strands of hair from her face. Her alluring grey eyes were in contact with his. He brought his hand down to her shoulders and she felt a tingle up her spine causing her to lose eye contact. His face came closer and closer to Heer's and she was able to feel his warm breath on her neck. He placed his face on her neck about to kiss it but took his face back. He came close and closer until his nose touched hers and he almost kissed her but he was able to contain himself from doing so. As soon as he started moving his hands from her shoulder to her arms, she opened her eyes and looked into his once more. He carefully placed one of his palms in her palm and closed it. He put his other hand around her creamy, slender waist and squeezed it playfully and said....

"I love you Heer... love you more than anything", said Tushar

Heer was not able to say anything. His cold hand were still touching her bare waist. She didn't know what to do. He finally let go and said

"Did you have fun?Maza aaya..",

Heer was still in a shock to say anything but let out a chuckle.

"Come on Heer I was joking....don't take it seriously" said Tushar.

"I am not...You ..you...", Heer paused

Heer took his vase and threw it near his foot?

"Ouch...security security ..i am being bullied", Shouted Prem

Heer quickly came and put her hand on his mouth which forbade him from speaking.

"Chup pagal (shut up), are you crazy..stop making a fuss", said Heer as she left for the show...he winked at him before she left which meant that she wasn't mad.

After Heer left, Tushar remembered that moment. His hands were still cold from the touch of her glamorous body. The thought of kissing her made him feel warm and fuzzy inside. He was happy, happy that this had happened but sad that this was never going to happen again. The moment he had just spent with Heer was one that would be memorable throughout his life. He was going crazy...he loved her to an extent where no man has ever gone before. He was craving her lips, her body, her touch, and also that moment that had just passed by...

Precap: Prem and Heer go to Ludhiana and Tushar and Preet follow them.

Edited by DMG_farwa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Another fantastic update today!
I hope Tushar goes away and leaves Premeer alone!
The Promo sounds awesome!
Can't wait!
xXx
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey just caught up with your entire FF loved it just awesome loved the part where heer goes heer juneja instead of heer maan 😆😆😆
keep working doing a good job
just give ppl time and see your FF will rock

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