FF- ETERNAL LOVE-upd part 25 on page92 10th feb - Page 46

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fijiana

excellent update.love the tender moment between prem and his unborn baby.so sweet.and love your ff.happy new year to you and your family

hey marica...
a very happy new year to you and your family too....😊😊😊
thanx a lot for replying... glad that you loved the update and the way the story is developing....
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rag-ran4ever

awesome.. cute premeer!!!

hey amna....
a very happy new year to you....
glad that you liked the update..
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vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

waitingggggggggg for da update

hey swati...
i'm still writing...
maybe i'll update by evening....
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago
It was a sweet update Vandana.
I really wanted them to be together, just the two of them..am glad it happened. Prem is so sweet...he showered his love on his baby..and he knew it was a girl as it was a result of his labour :)

Ash seems to be getting lots of dedications this week...lucky :)

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riks1

hello afreen..
thanx a lot for leaving a reply....
why are you blushing???
feel free to share your thoughts with me....
love
vandana

oh because it was soo cute.. cant help frowning..prem's touch to heer gave me goosebumps lol
good job dii👏👏👏
update s0oon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Magpie_07

It was a sweet update Vandana.
I really wanted them to be together, just the two of them..am glad it happened. Prem is so sweet...he showered his love on his baby..and he knew it was a girl as it was a result of his labour :)

Ash seems to be getting lots of dedications this week...lucky :)

hey maggie....
first of all let me wish you a very happy new year...
sorry couldn't pm you as i was a bit busy after returning... kaan pakading...
glad that you liked the update...
yes ash has got a lot of dedications this week as she has gone on a long break....will really miss her....
next update will be up in a while...
do read and leave a comment..
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago
hello everybody.... wishing you all a very happy new year once again.....well i was suppose to update on friday...but was caught up with some important work....so couldn't keep my promise....first of all let me share something with you... i had to end my new year on a very sad note.....i updated...and very few people commented😭😭...i saved my face as a few silent members left a reply....guys in case if you are not liking the ff....do let me know...i'll wind it up.... 'kay... here goes the next part...
part 20

as heer felt his moist lips on her bare stomach.....all her senses went haywire.....his touch was sensuous......his lips traced the area near her naval and his fingers kept playing on her waist.....as prem did this he looked up and saw the effect all his acts were having on heer.....seeing her growing warm with desire.....he felt the passion grow stronger stronger inside him......oh.... how badly he wanted to make love to her.....to experience the the same feelings once again...to show her how much he loved her....but..... the doctors words rang in his ears....... he had to wait for a couple of more days.....he couldn't ignore the caution issued by the doctor....as it would mean taking a chance with heer or the child......something which he could not.....
he sat up.....heer's eyes were still closed....as she felt him getting up.....she thought that he would continue with what he was doing but when she felt no such signs......she gently opened her eyes...and saw prem looking at her with all the love in his eyes.....what happened prem.....she asked him worried.....nothing sweetheart.....replied prem as he touched her face......it was just that i got carried away.....i mean..this is not the right time.....not yet....i guess we'll have to wait......
heer sensed the sadness in his voice.... was something wrong....with her.....or was it the child...was prem hiding anything..........the last thought ran a chill down her spine...and she got up hurriedly and asked prem.........prem is everything all right.....i hope you are not hiding anything from me.....
no heer.... don't panic....prem was taken aback by her sudden panic and calmed her down.....everthing is absolutely fine.....there's nothing wrong with the both of you... our child is absolutely safe... it's just that because of your bleeding the doctor advised me to refrain from making love to you for a few days.....thats it......i actually wanted to crucify the doctor for issuing that caution....prem joked with her........but as far as you and our child is concerned i spared him.....but don't worry......i'll make up for all the times lost as soon as the coast is clear for and thats a promise....said prem naughtily as he hugged her......not to mention that only making love to you is forbidden.....nothing else....these words making heer shyly dig her face in his chest ........
he then tok her into his arms and lay down.....not knowing when they both fell asleep...... both lost in their dreams of their bright future....prem's arms around her and his head resting on his heart so that she could listen to his heartbeats clearly......
as prem opened his eyes the next morning.....he smiled to himself as the events of the previous night flashed in his mind...... he looked up and saw heer infront of the mirror.....busily getting ready....she had worn a baby pink suit.....his favourite colour... her hair all wet with water dripping from the ends....she was wiping her hair with a towel and as she pushed them aside on her left shoulder......prem's eyes did not miss her almost wet back...the material had become transparent...revealing her slender figure and her creamy complexion.....
not being able to resist any further.....he got up from the bed and hugged her from the back.....this took heer by surprise as she felt his warm breath near her earlobes and his hands around her waist.......prem dug his face in her nape and sucked her earlobes which tickled heer.....heer closed her eyes.and enjoyed the love which prem was showering on her......she felt her knees go weak as prem placed a series of long and passionate kisses along her shoulders and nape.... she would have definitely fallen down had prem's hands not been there to support her.....
as his lips met her wet skin....heer felt herself flushing with the heat of passion....they both wanted each other so badly.......he continued placing kisses along her neck as she felt his hands slid up her waist to her breast.....this was the first time they were being so close after their marriage...... he was very gentle.....and seeing no resistance from her he continued with his task......
it was as if he had reignited the passion inside her.....each and every touch of his was making her moan and yearn for more.....her hands slid up his neck and touched his cheeks....as she caressed them.. she felt him kiss her palms... and felt him turn her around so that he could fulfill his desire to taste her lips......he gently cupped her face and removed the wet strands from her cheeks.....then he gently rubbed his index finger along her cheekbones and traced them down to the corner of her succulent lips.....as he was about to touch her lips with his.....and start savouring their taste......he heard someone knock the door......i'll kill whoever is at that door.......muttered prem to himself....
heer chuckled as she heard those words...and went forward to open the door.....
a disgusted prem made his way towards the washroom....glaring at heer.....
heer gave a faint smile s she saw veera at the door.....where's prem bhaiya... mom's calling him downstairs.....
he's in the washroom... we'll come down as soon as he's ready.....
there's no need for you to come down.....mom has just asked him to be there for the pooja.....said veera.....heer did not miss her indifferent tone......btw.... how was your first night........ must say...... you're a lucky girl...... 3 first nights in a span of three months.......great going i must say......said veera sarcastically and left the room......
the last few words hit heer like a hurricane...... this was what she was dreading....she knew that veera had never liked her... and after the rr incident she simply hated her....... but whatever she had just said was too much for heer to bear.....will prem's family accept her whole heartedly?.... yesterday she had not felt anything like that..... but the fact that she was not wanted in the pooja today pointed at something else.....she just prayed to god that this time prem did not have to make a choice between her and his family........yesterday prem's words had relieved her a lot... and the fact that he would always be with her was enough for her... but she knew what was coming....today it was veera....tomorrow it would be someone else...........
'kay guys... thats it for today....do let me know your views about continuing this ff or not.....will look forward to your comments..
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it plzzzzzzzzzzz do continue asap.dont stop updatingggggggggg plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome and too romantic and passionate....Oh i want to kill veera....so mean .Update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it plzzzzzzzzzzz do continue asap.dont stop updatingggggggggg plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

hey swati
thanx a lot for the reply..
love
vandana

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