FF- ETERNAL LOVE-upd part 25 on page92 10th feb - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riks1


hey ash
thanx a lot
see i'm rushing through the story as i want to land in premeer land within the next few updates😆😆
with the news of prem returning to kdmhmd gaining momentum how can i see them separated in my ff.
next update is on thursday
love
vandana

yeah i guessed that ur rushing to enter the premeer land wen i read the update😆😆😆...and i admit, i have absolutely no problem with it..even im eager to land there😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
vanadana,
that was a nice part..Ilike the pace at which your FF moves...you dont drag anything....Prem came to know the truth , and so did G.mom...Now PH are to meet....hopefully some more truth comes to light or atleast Prem gets to see her bruises .......
looking forward to your next update
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel82

vanadana,

that was a nice part..Ilike the pace at which your FF moves...you dont drag anything....Prem came to know the truth , and so did G.mom...Now PH are to meet....hopefully some more truth comes to light or atleast Prem gets to see her bruises .......
looking forward to your next update

hi angie
how are you? i guess your dd is very near(as i read in one of your posts)
well thanx a lot ..... i am really rushing through this whole rr story so that i can quickly start with the premeer track.... i will try and do it before prem's return in the serial..... but don't praise me much about the pace coz as my ff lands into premeer land i'm going to drag....elaborate each and every moment between them....
bye
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vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago
okay guys here goes part 13.... see i always keep my promise... as i had promised an early update on thursday.. so here it goes..
part 13
since it was not possible for them to meet in a public place lest any of rr's people might see them it was decided that they meet in one of the rooms of prem's hotel
as heer entered the room she froze right at the door......... there was prem..... all alone........she had never imagined that she would ever see him in such a state.
prem looked up and saw heer....... beautiful as ever....... but there was a remarkable glow on her face which had not been before..... was she happy with rr???..... the idea sucked him...... how could she be happy with an animal..... his eyes did not miss the sindoor and the mangalsutra... the sight of a married heer with someone else was enough to shoot up his blood to boiling pointbut he kept quiet.... he just kept on staring at her........
where's maaa...... she asked... she's coming....he replied... and looked down at her.
she was not meeting his eyes...... and he knew why..... he knew that she had come prepared with a false story and would not be able to look directly into his eyes and lie to him...he started moving towards her and heer got startled and moved backwards.... as he kept on moving heer did not know what to do..... her heartbeat had increased at a considerable rate...... she could now feel his warm breath on her face...he was very close to her... so close that he could touch her with his lips.... he kept on moving till he caged her against the wall.....
why heer ........ why did you do it...... why..... as he said so he just touched her cheeks as he could not supress his desire of touching her after such a long time.....
as his hands touched her smooth skin.... he felt as if he had just touched a burning rod.... she was hot...... very hot...... you have fever.... he asked her....
all his questions were forgotten in the sudden care for her....... that she was not well.... he forgot everything... his only concern was heer.... why did you come when you were not well??............ because maa asked me to and i couldn't say no to her..... said heer..... heer let me take you to doctor first...... you're running a high temperature..... it's okay prem.... said heer...... i think i should be leaving now..... as maa is not here and i'm getting late......
as she tried to get up he saw the burnt marks on her forearm...... and that was all the spark that was needed to ignite the fire in him......he caught her by the other arm and asked..... yeh kaise hua heer?...... kuch nahin prem.... it's just a burn..... a small accident in the kitchen... said heer...
prem- has he hurt you heer??
heer- no prem no one has hurt me...
prem caught her and tried to pull her towards him when she cried out in pain. he just turned her around and on removing her hair on one side he saw the bruises on her back..
heer you lied to me!!!!!! that b*****d has been treating you like this and you say that you are happy.....why did you play with your life heer...... i'm not going to let you stay with him..... i'm gonna get you out of that hell..... i can't live with the fear that you're dying a new death everyday.....plzz heer.... come back to me...
heer- prem it's no use saying all this now... and don't you dare interfere between my husband and me...i'm not coming back to you....
saying this heer decided to leave and turned around when she saw g.mom standing at the door.... she had witnessed all that had happened between prem and heer. heer bent down and touched her feet.... g.mom just hugged her and started crying. she was very sad to see both her children in such a state but at the same time her experienced eyes did not miss the change in heer..
heer- maa.... mujhe jaana hai.... i'm getting late...
g.mom- beta ...... shall i ask you something....... will you give me the truth....
heer- haa maa.....just ask....
g.mom- are you expecting???
heer almost jumped at this sudden question.......how did she know??? guess that was what mothers were all about....... they knew everything about their children..... she did not have a heart to lie to her as she was the one who had showered her with all the motherly affection after her own mother's death....
heer- haa maaa.......
saying this heer went away....not looking back even once...... never to come back in prem's life again.......
prem was shocked at the new realisation that dawned upon him....... heer.... pregnant!!!!!!! ....... so that was the reason why she was behaving like this..... she was carrying rr's child that is why she did not want to come back to him...... thats the reason why she wanted to stay in that hell.... oh! god! why the hell was he doing this to him......first heer's marriage.... and now the child..... why with heer.... he kept on asking this question.....
g,mom was absolutely shocked at heer's reply.... she just kept on looking at prem who appeared to be more broken than before..... he kept on staring at her for some time and then spoke..... maa i don't care whether she's pregnant or not.....all i know is that she's not going to stay in that hell..... all i need is your support ... and no matter what... she'll be back in my life.....i don't care a damn about this world...
g.mom kept on staring at prem all through the conversation and then spoke up......prem tell me the truth...... don't hide anything from me.....i want you to speak the truth today....
prem- about what maaa?
g.mom- did you and heer ever........ i mean did you....... i mean have you and heer been close..... very close......tell me the truth prem..... only the truth..... don't hide it from me...
prem was numb......it was as if someone had ripped him off his clothes in public....how did his mother know???... why was she asking it........ why....
the look on prem's face gave g.mom all the answers......
g.mom- prem heer is PREGNANT
prem- i know maa.......as he said this something struck him......
g.mom- prem heer is pregnant........ and it's a well advanced pregnancy.....not that she conceived in the last month........but ....... before that....... much before that.....
thats it guys for today....... i hope i don't get any complains regarding the size of the update..... next update on monday....... do let me know what you feel and silent readers plzzz reply... even one liners would do....
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey vandana
guess prem needs to learn a few things abt the birds and the bees 😉 great update, lamba weekend hai dont want it to end, so monday is going to be a long time away
anyways till monday then

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fj08

hey vandana
guess prem needs to learn a few things abt the birds and the bees 😉 great update, lamba weekend hai dont want it to end, so monday is going to be a long time away
anyways till monday then

fatima

hey fatima
iska kya matlab hua...... even i don't know what birds and bees mean😕😕😕
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riks1

hey fatima
iska kya matlab hua...... even i don't know what birds and bees mean😕😕😕


the birds and the bees pollenate flowers and fruits for reproduction to occur, i.e. prem needs to be told the consequences of the night they spent together
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fj08


the birds and the bees pollenate flowers and fruits for reproduction to occur, i.e. prem needs to be told the consequences of the night they spent together

okay ma'm
got the answer
thanx a lot.....itni details ki zaroorat nahin thi ...... but i guess prem did not realise that he could yeild such results in just one night😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
👏

mindblowing...awesome...so now he knows the full truth....yay!!!!!
rr...tu to gaya😡

cant wait just cant wait...😆


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