FF: Hamara Pyaar*(NOTE; pg 112; 3rd oct)* - Page 68

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Posted: 16 years ago
Amana.. I am sooo sorrry!!..cause I thought I did leave a comment on thias part.But I guess I didn't!! really sorrry for that.O I am sooo glad Harman is leaving!!Atleast he has some Akkel in this FF..sorry my hindi ... i know its pretty bad😆😆😆..But LOVED the Meet part ..wish there were more Meet scenes on the show i really missed them alot on friday's epi...anyways ...just can't believe they danced togather and all..in just 1 update...when will we ge to see an angry preet again in your ff?.. I a m just curious..lol..even though i don't think he was "angry" "angry"..just..ummm..nvm...sooo..where exactly is prem??u can tell me i won't tell anyone..Promise!!!Pakka promise!!!O yes when is next update??...And you better continue!!!..Please...Overall hope you do good on your exams!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqra238

Amana.. I am sooo sorrry!!..cause I thought I did leave a comment on thias part.But I guess I didn't!! really sorrry for that.O I am sooo glad Harman is leaving!!Atleast he has some Akkel in this FF..sorry my hindi ... i know its pretty bad😆😆😆..But LOVED the Meet part ..wish there were more Meet scenes on the show i really missed them alot on friday's epi...anyways ...just can't believe they danced togather and all..in just 1 update...when will we ge to see an angry preet again in your ff?.. I a m just curious..lol..even though i don't think he was "angry" "angry"..just..ummm..nvm...sooo..where exactly is prem??u can tell me i won't tell anyone..Promise!!!Pakka promise!!!O yes when is next update??...And you better continue!!!..Please...Overall hope you do good on your exams!!!!


iqqqqqqqraaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!
where were u???i waited and waited....
hhhhhmmmm chalo maaf kiya. but this is the last time😆
boy, u really dont like harman. no even an ounce of pity for him, huh???
hahaha.. it was all my akkal! yay!!😆
cool, u liked the meet scenes. yeah preet's had a fab epi this week. it kept me wanting more *sigh* but the creaivesjust llllloooooooooooooovvveeeee ruiing things!!
its like a mental disorder!!
yea they danced and more. well, preet is not essentially angry. and i havnt really thought about getting an angry preet.. but maybe i will now,just maybe.
aha! now now iqra be patient. i dont want to ruin the effect of the next updt
yes, ur highness i shall continue😆
yea i gotta a exam on wednesday.. gotta go study
ill updt once my exams r over
thanks for dropping by😃
love
Amana



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Posted: 16 years ago
no no!!!! Please continue and give it a proper ending!!!
I really like this story a lot!!!! I don't mind Meet, was it Harman that was watching Premeer that day!!!!! It seems like it was!!!!!!
I feel bad for him, and i hope he will move on soon!!!!! Great story and i hope you get time to update after your exams!!!
Best of luck for your exams!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~sumedha~

hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
okay me hyper!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maths exsam ke pehle hyper hona is healthy😆
lllllllllooooouuuuuuuuuuueeedddd the update really! thankoooo😃
for the first time in my life i found meher and preet cute, hot sizzling!!!!
seriously! ooohhh now thats new, i though u hated them! well all thansk to me *raising collar*
the convo with the barman was super!!!!!! he he this was all a part of my nemerous weird dream!
you know i feel like i suddenly wanna say so many things to you like---- okaaaayyyyy *keeping ears open*
your a fab fab fab writer -- a hidden talent if ever there was one!!!! THANKS!!!🤗
if it werent for you bugging me i wudnt be on the forum today i know --- see what a boon i am to the world atlarge😆
i actually feel like sending aparajith a pm to tell him how mindblowingly you write! NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNN uska naam mat lena. iu kono i cant said the man so lets keep this place aparajith free shall we??
i dont know what in the world i'm gonna do without you me too! u better start coming on FB more often!
i guess i love the update even more coz i know whats in your head when you write! haha u always do. u practically hav accomplished telepathic skills! and i tell u anyways before writing. so it's likr reading a hard copy!
i know i've not commented for awhile but tujhe toh pata hai how absolutely lllooooouuuuulllyyyy and beautyness my life is right now! i knooooo mine too!! hows bad was chem??
i just wanted to say that you are the most amazing girl and my best best girlfriend and i still cant take it that your leaving and most of all well life just sucks! but atleast that'll get us to b net savy😆 from being technologically challenged that we r!🤣
I LOVE YOU!!!!! Awwwwwwwwwww me tttttttttooooooo. im gonna miss u 😭😭😭
okay me getting orey the senti now so i'll stop! yes this is place is public. and u sound like agony aunt! hehehe
loooooaads of love and huge big bear hug! 🤗 a BIG hug ffrom me too
pariiiii!! Amana😃
p.s: wats this i hear about 4th of april????bulshit! i hav highly convoluted travel plans! hell, i gotta go to patna. thats practically the other end of the country!
dont tell me your gonna study for english and i kno you dont need freakin 5 days for eco so get your bum up and update!!!! want more of prem and heer !!!! yes yes ur highness i shall!!
p.p.s: chem was terrible! sure to flunk! how was b.s?
b.s. was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long . my finger freaking turned blue. but it was ok. crapped a bit as always. hopefully devakumar will not be too grouchy while correcting .... or wait im asking for too much aint i?? he and not grouch? impossible.
chal gotta go do limits and derivatives

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

no no!!!! Please continue and give it a proper ending!!!

I really like this story a lot!!!! I don't mind Meet, was it Harman that was watching Premeer that day!!!!! It seems like it was!!!!!!
I feel bad for him, and i hope he will move on soon!!!!! Great story and i hope you get time to update after your exams!!!
Best of luck for your exams!!!!!!


hey maddy😃
i have decided to continue
im glad u like my story!
yup it was harman alright who saw them and took flight immediatly
yup this friday is my last
will updt after that
stay tuned
Amana
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Posted: 16 years ago
waitinggggggggg for da update asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey guys!!

I think im taking the statement 'fashionably late' a bit too seriously.

I'm actually at my grand moms place, so getting time of is kinds erratic.

Do here's the next updt. It didn't turn out as great as I thought itwould but anyways..

Chapter 24

It was 2 am in the morning and heer was growing more frustrated by the minute. It was common for prem to return late fro work given his workaholic nature, but would it kill to inform??

Preet and meher too didn't pry seeing heer gearing up o throw fire balls at the first person in sight. Saying a silent prayer for prem, preet descended to his room hoping his brother would live to tell the tale.

" jeez!! She's already wife-ing around", thought preet who was down for a late night snack and saw the light still on in heer's room and a driveway short of one car.

" agar log phone uthana nahin chahte toh log phone rakhte kyun hai???", heer grumbled. Deciding that some milk and cookies were the best solution to all crises' she went down to get some after trying prem's phone for the umpteenth time.

She was on the verge of loosing it. It was past two in the morning and there was still no sight or sign of prem. There was no way she was gonna get some sleep. Her dreams would just freak her out.

'prem better have a good reason for keeping me up till the crack of dawn' she hissed furiously while taking out some cookies from the cupboard.

Prem groggily kept his eyes open and made his way through the front door. He had a nagging feeling that heer would be seething in anger. 12 missed calls pretty much confirmed his suspicion. He made his way to he kitchen seeing the lights on and to his sight came a very VERY angry heer charge at him.

"Where the hell hav…." She yelled but was silenced by his kiss. Sliding his hands down to her waist he gently lifted her on the kitchen platform bring her in level. However, she knew him well enough to know that he was just trying to calm her down and hopefully get her to forget about the yelling. But he had no business to keep her waiting so late! Completely engrossed, heer has to literally push prem away.

"Sorry! I'm a little late", he grinned cheekily. Resting his forehead against hers.

"Nice try but is that all you got?" heer replied wittily.

"conference call from Frankfurt. Lasted longer than expected…I lost track of time", he explained tiredly.

You better catch some sleep. We'll talk in the morning", she said softly, running her finger under his eyes which ached for sleep.

Entwining his fingers with hers, he walked up to her room. Heer grew suspicious but later dismissed it for his fatigue. Turning to say goodnight she noticed prem was miles away in thought. Easing out the crease on his forehead she asked, "Is everything okay?"

Pulling her close, he tried to find the right words to break it to her.

"heeer woh…", he started running his hands through his hair, "you know what, it can wait for tomorrow"

" it's nothing….really", he added as assurance but he knew heer's brain would fish something out.

Pecking her forehead, he hastily said good night and headed to his room for a long night

Okay guys that's it for today

Please remember to leave comments

Love

~Amana

Edited by amanaranjan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
HEY DEAR LOOK I M A SILENT READER BUT FIRST ONE TO GIVE COMMENTS ITS AWESOME LIKE EVERYTIME BUT TO JUST HOPE THAT NOW U R FINE AND WILL UPDATE REGULARLY PLS POST NEXT PART ASAP
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap with long part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey amana good to see you back..how did your exams go..

this part was really sweet..Heer's anger was pretty obvious... and come back at 2??? was there any other reason than conference.. want to know.. post soon

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