FF: Hamara Pyaar*(NOTE; pg 112; 3rd oct)* - Page 50

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blue_girl

hey amana hiii ......lovely update thanks alot😊 ,,,,,it was really cute😃. very curious to know what happens next...........lol hahaha that u all are, arnt u?? well u gotta wait and watch dear

cntn soonnnnnnnn i will
thanks for reading
love
Amana

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Posted: 16 years ago
when will u update???????
plssssss.... make it fast
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Posted: 16 years ago
its a fantabulous update yaar...specially the phone call and all the teasing....and heer's naughty conscious was absolutely amazzzzzzzzing and i love love love this line>>>>but , take it in writing , your gonna come back to me. I will make you, if I have to…. Thought prem
this is soooo wat is gonna happen to u and ur bhanja yaar!!!!!mujhe ye upd padh ke laga ke tu likhte waqt prem ke bare me kum aur uske bare mein zyada sochti hai....lol
looouuuuwwww from my side,
pareeeeeeeeeeeeeee(wid all the numerology)

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~sumedha~

its a fantabulous update yaar thanks yaar!!...specially the phone call and all the teasing....and heer's naughty conscious was absolutely amazzzzzzzzing and i love love love this line>>>>but , take it in writing , your gonna come back to me. I will make you, if I have to?. Thought prem 😊 thank u thank u!!!
this is soooo wat is gonna happen to u and ur bhanja yaar!!!!! ok u really need to shut up!!! mujhe ye upd padh ke laga ke tu likhte waqt prem ke bare me kum aur uske bare mein zyada sochti hai....lol sumedha biswas pls for christs sake do not voice ur opinion so publically, and as a matter of fact its not true!!!😛
looouuuuwwww from my side, love
pareeeeeeeeeeeeeee(wid all the numerology)lol finally u remembered , chal see on friday

enjoy 3 days of vacation...
Amana

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello everyone

I am extremely sorry for the late update. I know this sentence is seriously beginning to lose meaning, but please accept the apology on my part.

Its just that we're gonna move so various things required my immediate attention – cleaning cupboard, getting rid of stuff that have preserved but conveniently havnt used for years etc etc…

I would also want to tell sweta2005 that I dreamt of her yeaterday, which is why I decided hat no matter what…. Theres an updt coming today- just for her

So swati(I hope I got ur name right) this ones for you- for being so patientJ

CAUTION- subtle adult content is there….

People who don't like it pls forgive me…. Its my first attempt ever!

Chapter 20

Without even waiting for an invite, he enter her room, a flash of pure passion raced through his eyes. Without waiting for anything he scooped her petite frame in his strong arms and carried her to her the bedroom……

Placing her gently on the bed he proceed with a kiss not giving her an opportunity to speak. His hands slid down her sides while hers clutched on to his shirt, holding tight. She felt his hands tug at her shirt, nodding against their kiss she closed the space between them, telling him she's his. Forever and ever……

She felt him under her shirt, his hands sliding up. She knew she wanted this sometime, but only now she realized how much she longed for it. It was like a long unquenched thirst, and unfulfilled desire.

It was only until the need for breath was inevitable that they broke apart. She didn't even realize when her shirt went askew until he felt his kiss on her bear shoulder.

She shuddered at his touch, his kisses tantalizing her by the second. Letting him at his job she soon relaxed against him, her hands already undoing his shirt buttons…

She moaned as he kissed her down her throat, but a sudden loss of cntact made her open her tightly shut eyes. He was there, right there, smiling , shirtless and pulling the sheet over them to finish what he had started. Sensing that she missed his touch already he planted another kiss on those lips

Knocking all senses out of her, all heer could say in that dazed state of her was, "Rahul!!".

"we have to do something", said preet as he walked into the study where meher was busy working.

"excuse me??", replied meher not looking up from the computer screen.

"look both are breaks are gonna end pretty soon and if we don't do something, then who will", said preet exasperatedly

"are u talking bout prem bhaiyya and di??", asked meher

"who do you think I was talking bout, Hansel and grettle??", replied preet sarcastically.

"but what can we do?? They're both so stubborn!!", meher said helplessly,"they're perfect for each other…bu…but its just sooo complicated. Heer di hasn't told him about manmeet, prem bhaiyya is not gonna ask her coz he doesn't wanna pry. How on earth are they ever gonna talk??"

"when is heer di comin again??', asked preet

"tomorrow night", replied meher gloomily," we bearly have a day, besides with everyone at home they're only gonna keep looking at each other. Being alone is out of the question, talking is far far away!!!!!!"

"not if they have no one but each other to talk to right??", said preet brightly!!

"huh???" meher craoked out.

"well meher put on you best dancing shoes tomorrow night,I see a party on its way" said preet merrily while heading towards the door," oh and you look great in black!!"

before meher could asses whether or not she had been hit on or made a pass at preet poked his head through the door and added," oh by the way im preet, preet juneja, see you around". Flashing a smile that could kill he waved and walked away.

"what the hell just happened", asked a particularly ruffled meher to no one.

"junejas I tell u", she hissed gathering her books and leaving the study.

" so what you up to??", asked sanjana as she flopped next to prem.

"oh!! Um nothing much…I was just um.." said prem fumbling for words

"thinking.", sanjana finished for him

" umm.. ..yeah.. look sanjana im really sorry, I really havnt pais attention to you…timgs are really messed up right now", prem tried to explain

sanjana who had to some extent had figured out what was happening smiled and said," its ok prem ,I understand well I just came to say that im leaving day after tomorrow…. I think its high time I go home.."

"sanjana i..", prem started but was cut short buy her," prem I think we both know why I was here, mom and dad were really keen on our rishta, and somewhere I guess even I was" . sajana moved to look out of the French window which adorned the wall."prem ive loved you ever since I can remember, I guess since the day I met you. But I didn't want this marriage forced on you. I wanted to know how you felt. I know you don't love me prem and that not your fault." She said turning around, knowing how he must be feeling.

" prem its fine by me, I guess it hurts now but it will heal after a while right??

Prem just promise me one thing prem, promise me you'll never leave me,promise me you'll always be there….. as a friend", she asked teary eyed.

" ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai??", responded prem and went to hug her," sanju im really sorry.." whispered prem

"prem don't be silly, I don't hate you, but I will if you don't come clear with heer!!"

prem broke apart,wide eyed, "what?? Did you think I was blind???" she quizzed, wiping her tears.

"no!! I didn't realized we were that obvious", said a shocked prem

" well go and get her…before someone else does", and added sofly," don't let her go.."

"sanju…"and prem bear hugged her. he knew she was hurting but there was little he could do.

" okay now enough rona dhona….. I gotta go figure what im wearing for tomorrows party"

"what party??" asked a confused prem

" I have no clue ask preet", said sanjana and waved good bye

"Harman bhai Harman bhai", screamed preet as he sighted his brother.

"kya preet ", asked Harman whio was lying down reading a novel

"bhai keep yourself free tomorrow, we're going for a party ok??",said preet hastily

"kal raat?? Isn't heer coming tomorrow??", asked Harman instantly

"umm…yea..",preet answered warily.

" hmmm, its been a while since I saw her….she left in a hurry na?? I missed seeing her around……" hrman blabbered on to which preet had turned a deaf ear as he had other things on his mind.

"PREET!!" Harman screames making preet jump from his spot," taking preet by his shoulders and seating him on the bed he said, " preet I really need to get this out, no let me talk" seeing him opening his mouth, " I have to tell someone, preet im in love, im in love with heer!!!", said Harman smiling

"kya??",said preet with a sinking feeling in his stomach.

That's it for today guys

This part has been particularly weird to write

Its my first attempt ever…

Im sorry if anyone thinks it inappropriate

Pls leave comments

Amana

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Posted: 16 years ago
yay first 2 reply...1st of all hu is this rahul? and hw dare he kiss heer?....i hope heer has enough sense to stop him doing whatever hes doing and remember she is only prems and tell that rahul aswelll....sorry in all of this i forget to tell u lovely update now i just want prem and heer to come together and that heer didnt let rahul carry on with whatever he was doing
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Posted: 16 years ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO, Heer with "RAHUL"
now i have to see how to turn this story around Prem and Heer
Can't wait
Plz update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
i didn't get it yaar...was it rahul with heer in room????If yes, then i didn't liked that heer getting intimate with some other person except prem.Or was it heer's imagination???its not clear.where is prem ???is he in home or where heer is staying?????
please make this clear.Other wise the update was mind blowing.GOOD
Pls update asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi amana
swati came in ur dream 😆..... i m glad she did and we got an update, i had completely forgotten where u had left us, and i was thrilled to bits by the first part, didnt even mind the rahul bcos i thought she just used that name ... but when u showed prem still at home , i was like WTH.... and this doesnt have anything to do with weekend thougts..... heer cannot be yearning for anyone other than prem, what was all that? you better have a very good explanation and soon else u ll be having nightmares bcos of loyal premeer fans
and now the first part is completely spoiled for me i cannot read it again bcos i had seen prem and heer doing that not heer and rahul 😭
harman, why does he exist? and how can he be kept away from heer, pls preet tell him all about heer and prem before he goes and does something stupid
by the way, the initmate scene was very well written, tastefully written i should say
cant wait for the next update
thanks for the pm
fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG NOOOOO!
pls tell me it was heer imagination.
harman likes heer!?!?!
great update
waiting 4 the nxt one
thanx 4 the pm
~ayesha

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