FF: THE HIDDEN CINDERELLA ~ Part26 UPT pg151 mar19 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Alina Zaidi

Hey bhaiya character sketch is really awesome👍🏼

i told u before too u shud join BT ppl!!!
cant wait to see this new FF!!!!
Zindagi was really awesome bro!!!!
luv Alina



hey sis..i told u na i ll join only if ekta quits..😉😉coz its impossible to handle her..😲😲😲.if v r not able to handle her shows then how i ll handle her😆😆...just imagyn my condition wid her...😆
just imagyn--me lying on hospital bed n ekta asking me to write the next scene🥱oh i m tooooo funny..😉

wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal



hey sis..i told u na i ll join only if ekta quits..😉😉coz its impossible to handle her..😲😲😲.if v r not able to handle her shows then how i ll handle her😆😆...just imagyn my condition wid her...😆
just imagyn--me lying on hospital bed n ekta asking me to write the next scene🥱oh i m tooooo funny..😉

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PARTH😊

Bhaiya u r really hilarious🤣
i knw ur conditions!!!!
i m waiting to see ekta quitting it!!!!
luv Alina
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Alina Zaidi

Bhaiya u r really hilarious🤣
i knw ur conditions!!!!
i m waiting to see ekta quitting it!!!!
luv Alina



tumhare mooh me ghi shakkar...i promise i ll join it next day when ekta quits...i m waiting for d day to cum😆😆agar she handles me d charge of kis desh then i ll quikly kill the character of sanjana...n ll get ph married as soon as possible😳

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PARTH
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i can see another awesome ff on the way.great character sketches parth bro.so like you said wont be worried about dj because she will get what she desreves but am looking forward to how angry prem will gel with sweet and simple heer.looking forward to friday for the first update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting character sketch...really looking forward
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys ur replies forced me to post the back story soon...so i did...hope u like it...plz reply...



THE BACK STORY

HEER…………

Heer's mom gave birth to her n died after 2-3 years… she died coz of cancer…n balraaj didn't have that much money that he can offord the operation so that teji can be saved…docs told him that they can save teji but only if he pays the full money for d operation…at last she died…this made balraaj to think that only money minds in this world …so he pulled the socks up n started to gain money…first he worked in a small ship but now he has 100s of ships of his own... after teji's death due to no money he made himself soooo much busy in making money that he never gets tym for heer..His daughter…so he called his bro's wife, Daljeet n her child, Vishakha to take care of heer…he handled his 5 years old child fully to DJ…he knew nothing abt the mentality of her…she waz only interested in his money not his child heer…she infront of balraaj acts like a mom to heer but behind him, She is d total opposite one…she treats her own daughter Vishakha as princess n heer as a maid of the house…she makes her to do d whole work of d house…cleaning, cooking n handling of d house is all upto heer…dj lets her to study in a college coz if balraaj knew that she is not studying then what ll happen to her…she ll b killed by him…so she lets her to study…Vishakha is of the same age as heer…they both study in same college too…balraaj pays the fees of the college n drops a large amount of money for d house hold n personal use of heer n dj…but dj makes heer work in d name of money..heer ll only get money for her personal use if she works…if she deny's any work of dj then dj wud never mind torturing her too…its usuall when dj slaps her…she is very cruel to her…heer never wanted to be wid dj…but to live her life she have to live wid her…whenever dj beats her or she is sad she moves towards the beach, thinking that as his dad works wid ships he ll cum n see her sadness n ll take her wid him…she is alone in her world even she has a family but a family of no use..her dad-who is always busy in his work that he did not have tym to meet her twice a year also…dj-she is hopeless…n Vishakha -who is good for nothing for heer… but there is a heer in her heart who is terribly waiting for her prince to arrive on his horse from a gaint palace only for her… to take her away from her miserable life…to the world of his love…

PREM……………

Prem is very gud son, brother n may b a very gud husband too but he is very short tempered… he saw lallu to work hard to get sufficient money to live…when prem waz born lallu was working in a small hotel as a manager…n when preet waz born he waz still working in that hotel…it waz very hard to live in that situation…lallu n gaya3 were afraid that if there children asked for sumthing then they ll not b able to buy it…one day when preet waz born prem waz 6 years old..he heard lallu n gaya3 talking abt their less money n big family…prem heard their conversation n waz rele sad that how ll he or his parents buy his bro's desired things…its ok with prem that he didn't get sumthing for himself but ll his bro understand it…by the age of 6, he understood the probs of their house…n when he waz 6 his dad waz working in a small hotel..but by his age of 26 he waz d owner of d group of 7 star hotels… he owned them by his hard work n determination of prem…if prem wants anything he ll get it…this waz his believe…n now prem waz capable of fulfilling his bro's any desire…any…whenever preet asks for money he gave more then that…lallu waz very glad that he had a son like prem…who thinks of family b4 his own life …such a caring son…but only one prob wid him waz that he waz very short tempered…and the biggest prob of his life waz…preet…he thot that preet is a spoiled boy…prem's endless love for preet made him very naughtyn spoiled…lallu knew very well that prem gained all this property n money only for his family n specially for his bro preet…prem handled the business wid Lallit…while preet waz wid heer n Vishakha in the same college…



how waz it....plz reply....plz......


wid love

PARTH😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: fijiana

i can see another awesome ff on the way.great character sketches parth bro.so like you said wont be worried about dj because she will get what she desreves but am looking forward to how angry prem will gel with sweet and simple heer.looking forward to friday for the first update




thanks....its so sweet of u to join this ff too...hope u like it...n i promise dj ll highly pay for her deeds...n i ll update next friday the new part...so stay tunned...


wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: angel82

interesting character sketch...really looking forward


thanks sis....i hope u ll like it n enjoy...

wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
Good start 😊. Liked how you've incorporated the Cinderella story in it.

Pls continue.




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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
omg ur sooooooo fast with the updates!!!!!anyways like ur previous ff zindagi ,this one rocks too. pls continue soon

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