FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: anushka10

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Lady_Impala

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Posted: 16 years ago

#882

hey anusha nice promo as usual.really loved it sorry for not commenting on the previous part have been busy but it was awesome update.and all the best for the visa interview.dont worry you will do good.and yes look forward to the next update when you do update.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: anushka10

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Anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#884

Part 20 - Nihaal's Truth

After a great struggle Meher finally gets the job under Mr. Manav Malhotra..Meher feels happy and comes home . All the others are chit-chatting in the hall. Harman sees Meher coming happily..Harman understoods the reason and gets up from the sofa and comes to her

Harman : i know meher why r u so happy (in a confident way)
Meher : how u know about my happiness ( surprised )

Harman : Tumare aankhon ke jhalak and big smile on your lips is saying that u did not get the job (Meher is simply listening to him and suddenly gets shock to hear the last words)
Meher : What ? (shocked)

Harman : Ya.. As far as i know Manav's attitude he will not give job to any lady in his office.so i think he asked u silly questions to make u confuse and get angry on him. You did not answer to any question . Finaaly he said that u are not fit for this job and asked u to leave. Then u got frustrated on his beahaviour and scolded him. so ur mann ka bhoj halka hogaye issliye tum itna khush dekhrahe hoon. Am i right ?? (gives a winning smile to meher )

Meher : Wow Harman that was a wonderful prediction..tumare ek ek word correct hain but u failed to predict what happened at the end (claps to his intelligence and starts teasing him)

Harman : Failed ? what ? (surprised)
Meher : Finally i got the job in Mr.Manav Malhotra's office as his assistant lawyer (says proudly as that she won the world)

Harman stood like a statue as if he he has heard the world's biggest wonder ie Manav..Manav Malhotra , a biggest hater of women gave job to a girl as his own assistant lawyer ? How can it be possible ? Has Manav stopped hating girlls ? or else Manav liked Meher's innoncence ? Why did a women hater give job to girl ? What he liked in meher ? All these questions are dancing in his mind.

Meher is shocked to see Harman standing like a statue without any noise. she called him and found no reasponse. Kulraj slightly pushed him still no respoanse in him.Preet stops everybody and brings a glass of water and pours on his head to make him feel relax. All are laughing at Preet's naughtiness. As soon as Preet poured water on his head., Harman came into his senses. He touches his head and finds water on his head. Then he sees Preet with water glass in his hand and gives a shocked look to him.

Preet gets scared that his bhai will now gonna kill him. Harman just smiles at him and says " Thankq Preet . Now my mind is cool "..All are laughing seeing them. Preet says " Thank god, u scared me bro " in a relieved tone.

Meher : What happen harman why are u shocked ?? (teases him)
Haramn : Meher pls just stop kidding ..(warns her)
Meher : No yaar i am not kidding ..really i got the job in his office..
Harman : But how did u get the job in his office ? i mean ?? how is it possible ??

Meher : I know you all will be shocked listening this news.First he did not give job but later on his dad's insistence he gave the job to me.really thanks to his dad..(praying him)
Prem : Manav's father gave u that job ?? but how ??

Meher explains the complete office thing to whole family members. How Manav asked her silly questions and rejected her, How his dad scolded him and made him reconduct the interview. Finally Manav gave job by the grace of his father ..All of them feels happy as Meher got job at a right place under a best lawyer. Gay3 asks Heer to bring sweets. But Gay3 suddenly notices her blank forehead without sindoor.Heer is on the way to go and bring sweets but Gay3 suddenly stops her and asks abt not applying sindoor.

Prem sees Heer with a naughty laugh. Heer sees Prem with an angry look. Prem shows her sindoor box which he is catching in his hands. Heer is surprised to see sindoor box in his hand. They both are staring at each other. Gay3 asks Heer again. Heer " woh.woh.." in a confused state. Gay3 " Yeh woh woh kya hain Heer tumhi ne tho kaha tha na mujhe ki Prem sooraha hain uske utne ke baad you will ask him to apply sindoor did you forgot that ? " in a sweet and concern manner remembering Heer , her words. Prem thinks " oh..so this was m sweet wife's plan " with a cute smile.

Gay3 asks Prem to take sindoor from pooja room and fill Heer's maang. Prem naughtily replies " No maa, i have sindoor box in my hand itself " giving a teasing look to Heer. Heer is laughing inside for his naughty behaviour but gives an angry look to him . Gay3 asks him to proceed. All are smiling seeing Prem. Prem catching sindoor box in his hand making his steps towards Heer. Heer is just staring him. Prem slowly makes his steps towards her and stands infront of Heer.

Heer thinks of forgetting her angry as all are watching them and tease him in nite . She lowers her gaze down so that he can apply sindoor . But Prem, being the lovely and responsible husband how can he apply sindoor without asking her forgiveness for his naughty act in their bedroom. He keeps the sindoor box on the table and sits on his knees infront of his heer. All are confused , but heer is surprised. Prem sits on his knees and catches his ears with both his hands.

Prem : Sorry Heer, pls forgive me for teasing you (catching his ears and seeing her childishly)
Gay3 : Prem..., even ..you too teased Heer (coming towards Prem folding her hands in disbelief)
Prem : What ? (standing up ) Maa, whats the meaning of you too, aur koun tease kiya mere pyaari patni kho (putting hand around Heer's shoulder, Heer beats on that hand )
Kulraj : Since morning ur sweet bros and sis are teasing heer even ur lovely bro-in-law is also teasing Heer .(seeing everyone)
Preet : Margaya Jeju . PB humme nahi choodegha (whispers in Karan's ears)
Prem : ok..so my bros and sis also teased my wife (coming towards them )
Preet : I have some work..pls excuse me (try to escape from there)
Prem : Are mere pyaari shaitaan tu kaha jaraha hain..iss shaitano ke team ka tumhi tho leader hoo (catches his shirt and pulls preet towards him)
Preet : Bhai u are mistaken, teasing drama started by Veera (blames Veera by giving a naughty smile )
Veera : Oh ..Preet bro u are blaming me ?? Prem bro i did not do anything infact anyone did not get the idea of teasing Bhabhi.This plan was completely made by jeju and Preet bhai.They started it and we have just joined to tease bhabhi .
Preet : Veera now i will not leave you.

Preet runs after Veera as she leaked the complete plan. Veera is escaping from Preet. Veera quickly stands behind Prem. Prem catches Preet's ear.Prem with a angry tone " Kyun tease kiya tumare bhabhi kho " catching his ears. Preet " Bhai kyun tease kiya nahi, kaise tease kiya poocheye " with a naughty tone. " ya bhai, pls once ask how i teased ? pls "..in a pleasing manner. Karan " ask Prem " keeping hand on his shoulder . Prem " ok, kaise tease kiya " looking at preet confusedly by folding his hands. Heer is laughing by thinking that scene. Gay3 is catching her head for Prem's innocence.

Preet : Bhai , listen Bhabhi is bringing coffee for us. Ash runs towards bhabhi and said that i will not marry Ash. Bhabhi asks why pointing me then i sweetly replied that i am not a great lover like you who sees into his wife's eyes forever. (Prem feels shy seeing him)..but bhabhi did not understood my words so..

Karan : (cuts off ) so i said that Preet cant kiss his wife always , to get heer understand abt Preet's words i just showed example like ( kisses kulraj on forehead, she catches her head ) this. (Prem remembers the kiss scene in the party and scratches his head )

Prem : Enough now i understood everything.pls stop it (pleading them)
Preet : Bhai u have listened only sample part now the main part comes..(raising his eyebrows seeing Ash, she is smiling by thinking that scene)
Prem : Main Part ?? (confused )

Preet : Ya Bhai main part ..i am contiuing from Jeju's words.Then i sweetly said to Bhabhi that " Mein hamesha apne patni kho apne arms mein nahi uthasaktha Prem bhai ke tarah..(again he lifted Ash in his arms, All are laughing seeing Preet) Jab mere Patni sojathe hain na bhai mere lap mein..Mein usse wake up karne ke liye soochtha hoon..i dont know how to carry her in my arms without disturbing her sleep like u lifted bhabhi in your arms while she is sleeping in your lap (laughs seeing Prem, Prem catches his head that why did he ask for his explanation )

Veera : Bhai tab maine Preet bhai ko suggestion diya hain ki (prem is seeing her ) woh aap se love classes sekhle . Kyun bhai maine sahi kaha na ?(raising her eyebrows and giving a naughty smile to Prem )
Prem : Jab mein Heer ko apni arms me lift kiya tho aap sab tired the na i thought even u did not see us ? (in a childish manner )
Preet : U mean to say ..Hum (loudly)
Karan : tired hogaye (loudly)
Veera : missing that romantic scene ( loudly)

Preet, Karan, Veera and Harman shouts loudly " No way ". Prem closes his ears and sees heer..Heer is laughing at Prem's innocence. Prem says " Sab ke sab itne shaitan hogaye , purra ka purrra bigad gaya " says in a angry tone .. Harman " akhir siblings hain kiska " teasing Prem.Prem had no chance to scold except to laugh at their naughtiness. Prem laughs and all of them laughs seeing Prem. Heer's angry went to drain..Gay3 cuts them and ask Prem to fill sindoor.

Prem takes the sindoor happily and Heer lowers her gaze down. Prem fills Heer's maang infront of everyone. All are smiling seeing them. while applying sindoor some sindoor fell on Heer's nose. Prem sees that and asks her to rub it off. Gay3 comes and says to heer that not to rub it off as it indicates something shubh. Meher says " i got the job thats most shubh ki baat hain aur kounse shubh hoone wala hain "..Preet says " who knows lets wait and watch " in a cool manner..

Nihaal gets call and moves a lil bit far from the family members. Nihaal is busy in attending the call. Someone knocks the door..Meher goes to open the door and sees a postman asking for nihaal. Meher sees Nihaal busy in attending the call. She shows Nihaal to postman and asks him to give that letter to her as she is his sister. Postman gives the leteer to Meher and goes . Meher remembers when Nihaal said that he gave his parents pic to some studio to make it clear.So she thinks to teasing him..

She goes to Nihaal and shows that letter to him. Nihaal feels happy by seing that letter and thinks this may be his parents photo. Nihaal in a curiosity asks her to give letter..But meher says " kuch karcha lagegha "..Nihaal gives her money but meher childishly says this is not enoughand she opens the cover of the letter..Nihaal is just trying to get that letter from her.Meher almost opens the cover and about to see photo. But suddenly bumps into meher accidently and the photo falls on the floor..

Meher sees the photo of their parents.Nihaal and veera also see the photo . Nihaal is abt to take the photo , but Meher takes that photo and says " yeh tho maa bauji ki photo hain "..in a surprised manner. All are shocked listening to Meher's words including Nihaal and Heer..All gathers near them.. Nihaal takes that photo " Meher yeh tum kya kehrahe hoo.yeh tumare parents ka pic hain.."..in a shocked and disbelief tone..Veera says " ya nihaal yeh tho uncle aunty ka photo hain..iska matlab u are their son "..in a happy tone.

All are surprised listening to Veera's words..Meher and Ash feels happy by seeing their long last brother infront of their own eyes..Heer is stunned by hearing their words and keeps her hand on her mouth in disbelief..Lallu comes and puts his hands on Nihaals face " Tum--Tum mere ballu ke beta hoon..Gay3 yeh mere balraaj ke beta hain gay3 "..showing him to Gay3..Lallu gets tears in his eyes by seeing his friend's long last son infront of his eyes..He hugs him tightly .Nihaal gets tears in his eyes..Prem feels happy that heer got his own bro after a long waiting..Gay3 comes and hugs nihaal..

Nihaal cant control his happiness and suddenly bursts into tears and says " mere maa-baap mere samne hi jalgaye hain..lekin mein kuch nahi kar paya tha uss waqt " in a crying and sad tone..All are shocked listening to his words..Lallu " Yeh tum kya kehrahe hoon beta ".. Nihhaal explains the whole thing to them that how he travelled in the same bus ? how he tried to help them ?? how teji maan pushed him ans asked him to say lallu to take care of his daughters ?? Everything revolves in his mind. But he finally says that he could not help them..Gay3 hugs him and confronts him..Meher and ash are coming towards him

Aa aa aa aa aa aa, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

Ash and Meher are making thier steps towards nihaal after listening to his words..All are watching them sadly..Heer is still in a shocked state..Prem puts his hand on his wife's shoulder..Heer sees Prem with a teary eyes..

Kya bebasi hai yeh, kya majbooriyan
Hum paas hai phir bhi kitni hai dooriyan

Meher hugs him with a tears of joy in his eyes. Ash puts hand on his cheek and adoring his brother..Ash also hugs him with alot of happines in her eyes..Meher and Ash are hugging their brother and crying a lot..Lallu cries seeing their love

Oh, kya bebasi hai yeh, kya majbooriyan
Hum paas hai phir bhi kitni hai dooriyan

Nihaal sees his big sister..Prem asks Heer to go to Nihaal..Heer slowly comes with a tears in her eyes and puts her hand on his cheek and simply adores him..Nihaal puts his hand on her head and seeing her with a teary eyes..Nihaal hugs Heer..Heer happily hugs Nihaal..Prem wipes off his tears which are disturbing him from seeing that scene..

Jism tu, jaan main, teri pehchaan main
Milke bhi na mile, yeh hai kaisa bharam

Nihaal spreads his hand for his other sisters and they both come into their brotherly arms..Nihaal is hugging them with a lot of love in his eyes..Nihaal remmebers that kanyadaan incident and feels happy that he did kanyadaan for his own sister..

Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

Nihaal kisses Heer on his forehead..Heer simply closes her eyes and enjoying his brotherly kiss..Nihall kisses his other two sisters..Nihaal hugs them tightly..Veera wipes her tears and feels happy for Nihaal..Preet also cries seeing their bond..All are crying seeing their love..Teji-balraaj photo was shown..

Preet to change their mood puts hand on Nihaal's shoulder..Nihaal slowly leaves his sisters from his soft arms.All are wiping their tears..Before anyone could speak Preet says that they will arrange a grand party in the house tonite.But Lallu cuts him off and says that they all will go Gurudwara 2mrw and later to Ambala..All feels happy for his decision. All the ladies go for kitchen to make some special for teh family especially for Nihaal..All are busy iin other works..Veera feels happy and hugs Nihaal...

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,

Veera is hugging Nihaal as she is feeling happy for Nihaal and she cant belive that Nihaal is her bro-in-law..Nihaal is feeling happy and swetly hugs Veera inreturn with tears in his eyes....Nihhal keeps his hand on her head and carenessing her..

Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,

They are not feeling any awkwardness in their hug and enjoying each other's company..Veera and Nihaal are lost in thier own world of happiness for each other..Nihaal is feeling happy and enjoying her sweet gesture and slowly puts his hand on her back...Veera is just stroking her hair and feeling happy..

Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,

Nihal is simply hugging Veera and slowly rubs her back passionately..they dono when the sweet gesture turned into a passionate hug..Veera is not in her senses and enjoying each and every moment with her love..

Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..

Veera and Nihaal are hugging tightly not even air can go and disturb them..Veera is stroking his hair passiontely and Nihaal is rubbing her back.. They are completely unaware of their sourroundings and enjoying the hug and sweet moment..

Veera comes into senses and leaves him slowly..Nihaal sees her with a passionate gaze..Veera lowers her gaze down and remembers what she has done and how she hugged him..She could not reaist his passioante looks and shyly runs from there,.Nihaal feels happy and confirms that he got his family and love at a time..

Precap : Sorry latest promo scenes..😭😭

sorry guys i could not write that part now..even i will not write that part soon as i am leaving for Chennai for my Visa interview..i will be back after 9th jan..i will go on 6th jan and will be back on 9th june..may be with good news or bad news i too donno hoping for good news..Pls pray for my succesful Visa and pls excuse me for any mistakes in my update..i wrote it so fast as someone is chasing me..because i need to go for consultancy now . Pls forgive my mistakes and even u can point out it so that i can rectify them..Take care 😃

WISH U A HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE..HOPE THIS YEAR BRINGS A LOT OF HAPPINESS IN UR LIFES.😳

Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago

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swati

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Posted: 16 years ago

#885

awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

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Ayesha Hameed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#886

👏👏Really wonderful anushka i really liked it .........i m happy for nihaal n veera n nihaal's truth came out ............😃prem fills sindoor in heer's maang all i liked very much n i surely pray for u r visa

WISH A HAPPY NEW YEAR N GOD BLESS U

LOVE Ayesha😊

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sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#887

awesome update loved it to bits di and i hope everything goes fine in ur interview

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Sanaya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#888

Rite now i m busy will reply later

nd plz don't be sorry u always do so much for us

Don't worry at all U will get d visa
We all will pray 😊

Edited by Sanayaa - 16 years ago

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Nitty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#889

it's a lovely update and you updated after a really long time,,,, and I really liked the teasing parts it was really funny... waiting for the next part....

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU...