FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6) - Page 74

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: 12345xxx

di pls take care of ur health .......dont worry about next update ........u can update later.missing u alot😭😭



with luv,
urs sister😊.



Thanks for ur sweet concern my sister..😳😳😳
loved ur message....🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: heer hann

bad di because of u now i m crying😭dont cry!😭



no cries dear..just cheer up i am somewat fine now😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ruexangel

Hey

I read last 4/5 parts, its awsome, u have a gr8 imagination! i loved imagining the cute naughty scenes of premeer 😳😆 haha lyk towel joke lol, prems so cheeky lub it lol😳😆. & also dialogues are quite funny. its rlly awsome. You put in a lot of effort, & pick xatcly the right songs & pics. soz i hvnt repiled regularly but wt ive seen its rlly good. nice reading. A lot of effort & some funny & cute scenes 😆, i lyk those premeer scenes best.

~Rue



Hey Rue h ru ???i am really happy for seeing ur cute comments 😃😃😃...thanks for ur appreciation...Towel scene was really funny i laughed a lot while writing it yaar..😆😆...thanks for ur each and every comment i loved them....no worries that u havent replied regular...take ur time yaar😉..
loved ur comments yaaar😉😉😉



Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!

Just read the last 2 parts which i missed and loved them both!
I loved how you put the pics in! The song choice was awesome too!
Can't wait till the next part...and sorry for the late comment!
xXx
Sunayna
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thanks for ur cute comments sunayna dear..just loved them a lot...u r alwys welcome....thanks for apprecialting my work yaar.....😳😳
😳loved ur comments dear,,,,😃😃,
i will try to update the part so soon😉


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anushka10



even i too use them on exams ..but i have headache also with sight so i should wear it all the time dear..

nor u were them nor u listen to doctor very bad di very bad😡
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pisces26

Hi anu

hiiiiiiii di h ru ???😃😃😃

I did read your ff both part I remember that part in which you wrote prem first brush ur teeth I could not hold my laughter as your di saw at night you updated but sibling time started so no chance to read at that time next day it was Sunday I did first thing in morning to read but I was Same 😳

noooooo probs di..atlast u commented thats enough for me...waht is sibling time..???..

Now come to ff I will say not awesome as you are simple the best as you really work very hard on it

thanks for ur cute comment di😃😃😃..thanks for appreciation

Tanu was cute you made us laugh

Tanu was realy cute remeber how she spoliled Prem's kissing mood in the show😆😆😆

PREET and PREM scene was superb was it was very funny .👏👏👏

thanks as usual they are funny bros😳

PREM was anger u describe it very nicely

HEER expression which you wrote is marvelous👏

i even forgot what i wrote again i have to read that part to answer ur cute comments..finally i gave a glance and thanks that u loved that part

I read all part again . the picture and the song all are well arranged you really work very hard I personal say this is the best on India forum as your hard work is visible to each and every one here . ⭐️

ANU your are champion of making other blush ☺️ as Credit goes to you I just wish Ekta read it or any one from kis desh mein hai meraa dil team read it when Prem come back

They follow your FF .

thankssssssss for ur cute appreciation on my FF..itna mat sar pe chaad dho mujhe kabhi kabhi niche bhi ghir saktha hoon...i really loved ur marvellous comments as u left me speechless di really i am hppay and even i cant express my happiness in words....just say one word thanksssssssssssss soo much..loved ur apprecation and comments di😳i really wanted the destructives to take the ideas from our FFs as they have brain😆😆

Sorry your di is lazy .😳 you can get angry on her . and last but not least please look after ur beautiful eyes as if you spoil that how will we get such a nice FF .if next time your di do this say you are angry ok . i am proud of you as when i see your reply increasing i smile and PRAY for you .MAY ALLAH BLESS YOU and you keep giving us such nice ff

thanks for ur blessings di just loved them..u r nat lazy di..when Prem comes i want u on the forum active ....😃i will take care of my eyes and dont neglect them di...my replies are increasing but pls di i want ur FF to be updated di pls for ur readers sake pls update di missing ur FF a lot😭😭

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel82

Anu,

sorry for being late...
no probs just i was missing ur comments😃

lemme start with part 18.1.....
are u kidding me...with all those pics added , you expect me to write a long comment....I have already spent more than hour drooling over them....

omg that was great ..u spend more than one hr just drooling over those pics 😳😳

you have mentioned harshad and additi's names here instead of PRem and heer...lol...cant blame you ,coz its always them in mind while writing rite?

did i let me check once..omg ya i mentioned both names..i imagine them instead of Premer i think😉...no editing let it be like that only😉

lol ,heer threatened to pull Prem's towel...and naughty Prem not one less...loved the entire PH scene...very cute and romantic...Prem always naughty only infront of his wife heer😆😆😆
Aha, Meher indirectly helping Veera to woo Nihaal...wonder if we will get to see such good veera -nihaal scenes in the show...but this veera is a good one unlike the one in the show......no chance Veera will not change at present in the show..may be in the future track....😃
wonder when we will get to see such happy family moments in the show...waiting for that😍
appreciate the way you have described the dance sequence according to the lyrics...its makes it soo easy to imagine.. esp with the pics too ....that must have taken lot of imagination and time to do it...wonderful.....
ya ur guess is right it took time to imagine and write...thanks for ur appreciation yaar😳
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coming to part 18.2
seriously, i could not concentrate on what you have written coz of the pics....PH dance pics which are soo droolworthy....*deep sigh* Premeer ka mayajaaal hain woh😉
loved the way you described their dance sequence...superb....and al the pics you have added esp the lehren one , i just love that, they really look like newly wedded couple in that...Lehran one was the best they really resemble a newly married couple..Heer with mehendi and Prem cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍.
Prem sang for her and also kissed her infront of everyone😳so cute... 😳
and then him carrying her in his arms and putting her on bed slowly, the pics describe the scene soo well...so i felt that no words are needed when the pics are there...😉
all together a very sweeeeet part.... with nice selection of dresses, songs and pics
thanksssssssssss for ur bada comments loved them a lot😃😃😃
Anu , I might not be able to comment regularly on your further updates...but will try to leave a line or two even if I cannot leave a long one....i will be less active over the next few weeks....
ok dear ur wish when u are free....u can comment on it....U r alwys selcome dear...take care😃😃😃
Luv
Angie

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: 12345xxx

wat happen lala?i'm worried😆😆🤣


hey yaar waht Happened ???
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ranrags

Hey Anu..sorry for the delayed reply dear..after sending u the message my system sort of got in trouble..because of that yesterday the whole day I couldn't come to IF..but hey better late than never right??
Hey rani..u r always welcome h ru ???.....😃😃
😃
coming to ur FF..I think ur FF is the only FF which had Prem-Heer pics in it??right??and the way u've used them..i.e.,for the scenes??too good..it's good Veera is a positive character..Prem-Heer were so cute and Preet-Prem scene was..god I was laughing so much,naughty Heer getting her husband fixed in such situations..really looking forward to the next update.

i too think the same as i did not find any kind of pics in any FF..😃...Veera i changed that girl😆...Towel scne are really so funny even i could not control my laugh while writing and imagining it😉😉...i will try to update soo soon..loved ur comments 😃😃

.n take care of ur eyes dear..wear glasses..thnaks for ur sweet concern i am wearing my spects

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey anusha finally commenting on the ff.hopefully you are feeling better.ok coming to ff,first lets start with 18.1

loved it as usual.ong prem chasing heer aroung and that in atowel.hai what a sight.and yes prem is very besharam just like us.he is willing to remove the towel.i say he should have gone ahead.now everytime i watch jab se tere naina with ranbir i start imagining prem/harshad there.i know mein kitni besharam hoon but sawaal prem ka hain.and lov the chemistry going on between veera and nihal.very cute,though i it will be weird watching them n screen.prem is loving and caring he bought heer a saree.trhese small things make him even more charming

ok now 18.2 where do i start from it was just so romantic and the pictures really helped .i was just imagining everything.and to top it off the song was just ...............superb.love the song.and in the end the way prem carried heer to the bedroom,made her lie down and made her comfortable was just so romantic.full justice to prems character.

and finally would like to thank you for the effort you put in to make this ff of yours a wonderful thing to read, phir either it is the rasams of the wedding or the amazing pics.this pics took me back to the memories of the wonderful premeer chemistry.the one we all are crazy about and the one for which we all are always eager to watch,because chemistry is what these two potary on screen.just magical well i think this comment is way too long.heres hoping you get well soon and update soon.and yeah hope to know what excatly is daljeet trying to do.till then take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Anushka!!
First of all im really sory fr replying late was trapped with my finals me back here now! read both chap 18 parts and like always really really like it Mr prem is getting naughty day by day ...........the reception party was really nice and wonderfully described like how nihal and veera are moving too. thereceptin the dance the song selection all was just wonderful and romantic and sweet loved prem surprise for heer
onething very uniquly done in your FF was the way you incprporated all the scene pics and made them part of your Ff really really help visulaise the reader , even without them you do a great job at writting and at expreeeing.
thanx anushaka and sorry again.............will be waiting for the next update soon

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