FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 16 years ago

#651

awesum update
loved it 👏

take care of ur health

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Thapanee

@Thapanee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#652

great update lots of prem and heer wating for the next part...

hope u get well soon😊

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#653

Mindblusting!!Xcellent!!Superb👏WOW tht was tooooooo good Great dear just loved the whole par&dnt b sad,atleast im really happy with this part enjoy it alot,Heer's naughtyness r increasing day by day have to say like u {🤣🤣Sangat ka assar hai😉Hope ur funtion had gone well.ll b waiting for the next part as well😳Takecare

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kiran9

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Posted: 16 years ago

#654

Hey its really intrestng i enjoyed the whole ff but i m desperatey waiting to know about daljeet's plan please tell na wht is the plan n wht is she going to do with prem n heer?😳please

kiran

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Sanaya

@Sanayaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#655

Why did u update it
If u r not feelin well u shuld not update na
We all can wait Ur health comes first
Now plzz update d next part only if u r feelin better actually tab karna jab aap bilkul theek ho jaao

Comin to d part it was as usual gr8. Premeer scene was mindblowing Prem ki nd Heer ki naughtiness badhti hi jaa rahi hai. Nihaal nd Veera They r lost in their own happy world nd Veera she applied burnol on the entire hand except jahan jala tha🤣🤣🤣
Reception party was also very good.

Ur ff is different from others U always upload pictures, videos( Wonderin how do u get so much of time to give d pics videos along wid very very bada update) . U r too good .

Plz ab don't update until nd unless u r completely fine

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

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Posted: 16 years ago

#656

Hey!

That was an awesome update!

Never knew Prem and Heer were so stubborn..lol!

Nihaal and Veera were so sweet, he even burnt himself while taking the aarti....cute!!

Loved the dance scene!

Hope your headache goes away soon!

Get better!

xXx

Sunayna

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Anusha

@-Anusha-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#657

Hi guys h ru ? don't worry I am somewat fine..woh kya hain ki..Mujhe headache se sight aagaya hain..But I don't like using spects..and not even lens..so I will not keep spects..thats why this headache will irritate me..some times..If once I get the headache..i cant even control it'After scolding from my dad, mom , bro and doctor..i am using spects now..So I am fine now..My headache is now ok..If u guys also wanted to scold me no probs..aap sab tho mera frnds hain na..u r always welcome'.

Ok lets come to the sweet memories of Premeer'My 18.1 part link is

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1027244&TPN=92

If anybody did not read it first read that part and then think of reading this part.as that is the main part and the first part..OK'Guys I really tried to make this part real by adding all Premeer dance sequences'some Picture credit goes to Khushi and some myself..I really enjoyed by writing this song for my Premeer..Hope u all loved it

18.2 -Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi

After the group dance Prem gets an idea and goes to Sonu Nigam ,tells something in his ear'They both laugh''.

Sonu Nigam : (takes the mike )'Now I am going to sing a beautiful song for especially the newly married couple'I kindly request both of them to come on the dance floor and makes us happy by their dance..One more thing our Dulha Mr.Prem Juneja selected this song especially for his wife only'So guys a Huge round of applauds for the new couple'.

All the guests are clapping by his announcement'Heer is surprised and looking at Prem'Preet, Karan, Harman are shouting in joy'

Prem comes to Heer'He offers his hand to heer like (below)'Heer smilingly gives her hand in Prem's hand and they both get down from the stage to dance'All are encouraging them by clapping'Prem and Heer are facing each other..Then Sonu Nigam sings the song which Prem told him to sing..

This is the complete song , I am dividing it into lines to show the exact expressions of Premeer while dancing''

Tu Hi To Jannat Meri, Tu Hi Mera Junnon
Tu Hi To Mannat Meri, Tu Hi Rooh Ka Sukun
Tu Hi Ankhiyon Ki Thandak, Tu Hi Dil Ki Hai Dastak
Aur Kuch Na Janu Mein, Bas Itna Hi Jaanu..
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu..

Kaise Hai Yeh Doori, Kaise Majboori
Mene Nazaron Se Tujhe Choo Liya
Kabhi Teri Khusboo, Kabhi Teri Baatein
Bin Maange Yeh Jahan Pa Liya
Tu Hi Dil Ki Ha Rounak, Tu Hi Janmon Ki Daulat
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu..
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu..

Vaasdi Vaasdi Vaasdi, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasdi
Naasdi Naasdi Naasdi, Dil Ro Ve The Naasdi
Rab Ne... Bana Di Jodi.....
Vaasdi Vaasdi Vaasdi, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasdi
Naasdi Naasdi Naasdi, Dil Ro Ve The Naasdi

Cham Cham Aaye, Mujhe Tarshaye
Tera Shaya Ched Ke Chumta..
O O, Tu Jo Muskaye, Tu Jo Sharmaye
Jaise Mera Hai Khuda Jhomta..
Tu Hi Meri Barkart, Tu Hi Meri Ibaadat
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu..
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu

Vaasdi Vaasdi Vaasdi, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasdi
Naasdi Naasdi Naasdi, Dil Ro Ve The Naasdi
Rab Ne... Bana Di Jodi.....

Here comes the actual romantic dance sequence of Premeer'''..

Tu hi toh jannat meri, Tu hi mera junoon

Prem takes her hand and pulls her towards him to dance with him..

Tu hi to mannat meri, Tu hi roo ka sukoon

Prem's one hand is catching Heer's hand and the other hand is resting on Heer's waist..Heer is feeling shy'But Prem is contiuesly staring at her'

Tu hi aakhion ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak

Heer finally manages to look into his passionate eyes..Prem and Heer are continusely staring into each other's eyes'.

Aur kuch na janu mein, bas itna hi janou

Prem and Heer are lost in their own world of Love,Passion and Happiness looking into each other's eyes'

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Prem is pulling her towards him and dancing with her happily..Heer is feeling shy..

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

(sorry I am nt getting any words to describe their current heart stage i even dont think words are required to express the feelings..i will try to describe ...)

Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Heer feels that she could not resist his passionate eyes anymore and looks down...Prem is still staring at her

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Ohhhh hoooo ohh'.ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
(flute sound )

As the music plays Prem is rotating her with his hand and Heer is happily enjoying the dance with her husband'

Kaisi hai yeh doori, kaisi majboori

Meine nazron se tujhe cho liya

Oh ho ho Kabhi teri khusboo
Kabhi teri baatein

Heer is looking into his eyes passionately'she feels that she could not resist it anymore..so she tries to move away from him'But Prem catches her hand from back'

Bin mange yeh jahan pa liya

Tu hi dil ki hai raunak,
Tu hi janmo ki daulat

Aur kuch na janoo
Bas itna hi janoo

He makes her turn to his side and looking into her beautiful eyes..

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Vaasdi Vaasdi Vaasdi, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasdi
Naasdi Naasdi Naasdi, Dil Ro Ve The Naasdi

Rab Ne... Bana Di Jodi.....

Vaasdi Vaasdi Vaasdi, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasdi
Naasdi Naasdi Naasdi, Dil Ro Ve The Naasdi

Prem is completely lost in his wife's beautiful eyes'He really donno how he started the last stanza'He continued the song looking into Heer's adorable eyes..Heer is surprised by her husband's singing side..

Cham cham aaye, mujhe tarsaye

Tera chaya ched ke chumtha

He then makes her turn to his side..and dances with her happily'

Oh ho ho' tu jo muskaye

Tu jo sharmaye

Jaise mera hai khuda jhomtha

Tu hi meri hai barkat, tu hai meri ibadat

Aur kuch na janu, bas itna hi janu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karuo

Vaasdi Vaasdi Vaasdi, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasdi
Naasdi Naasdi Naasdi, Dil Ro Ve The Naasdi

http://i33.tinypic.com/mmdg5y.jpg

Rab Ne... Bana Di Jodi.....

At the end Prem and Heer are completely lost in their own dreamland of Love, Passion and Joyness of being together forever...Prem forgets that he is dancing with his wife infront of the guests and kisses on her forehead passionately..He rests his lips for a long while forgetting the sourroundings..Heer is not in her own senses, she is completely under the passionate spell of her loving husband...

Interrupting their long lasting passionate kiss, the guests and their family members including the singers flush them with a huge round of applauds ..All are excited and amazed to see such a kind of romantic performance...

After listening to sound of claps, Premeer with a sudden jerk opens their eyes and comment of their romantic dreamland.Prem slowly releases her from his passioante spell...

They both feel shy ..Heer feels more shy and quickly hides behind Prem due to her shyness infront of the guests..

Preet and Harman hugs Prem for his excellent singing at the end, Kulraj and Ash hugs Heer for her marvellous dancing with Prem

Kulraj : Heer, Mujhe tho pata hi nahi tha ki tum itne aacche dance karthe hoon aur Prem tum..Tum ne tho mujhe shoch diya tumare cute awaaz se...i even donno that u sing superb (catching his cheeks)

Prem : Woh di, bas pata nahi aise kaise maine gaaya tha,,,Heer ke aankhon mein dekthe dekthe acchanak mu se nikal gaya tha

All of them shouts " Bhabhiiiiiiiiiii........."..Heer feels shy..

Sonu : Future mein kabhi bhi singing field mein mat aana mere dosth...(All are confused)

He continues " warna ham jaise besuri singers ke choothi ho jayegi " ...All are laughing seeing Prem....

Prem : Aap bhi na ...(shyly)
Gay3 : Bahut hogaya maazak aur dance chalo Prem beta stage par jayeye ...Partu surru karthe hain ..( Pushing them )

Premeer are satnding on the satge..The two singers are busy in singing songs and entertaining the guests with their songs...Guests are coming one by one, they blesses the new couple and flush them with kisses and gifts......All the other are chatting with the guests and singers,After sometime Heer feels tired of standing and she is sleepy, but she is not showing her drowsiness to Prem and happily smiling to the guests....

Prem being the Prem who can easily read her face , who can easily understand what is there in her mind like a brilliant Better Half asks her to sit for sometime and take rest..Heer sits on the chair..All the guests have their dinner and began to leave one by one...

After all the guests leaving , they slowly move to their home in different cars ..All are damn tired...Premeer, Preet, Gay3 are sitting in one car..Preet is driving the car...Gay3 is sitting beside him..Prem and Heer are sitting at the back..Heer first only feelling drowsy...She closes her eyes slowly and automatically she rests her head on Prem's shoulder..Prem is adoring her beauty..Prem takes her head and just puts her on his lap...and carenessing her hair..

Preet is about to tell something to Gay3..But Prem says " sh......" ...and shows Heer is sleeping...Preet understands and keeps his fnger on his mouth and driving silently..Gay3 is laughing at Prem 's loving nature and Preet's naughtiness...Finaaly all of them reaches home...Prem tries to wake up but Heer is not in a mood to wake up and walk to her room...She is justing catching Prem tightly and sleeping silently...

Prem gets an idea..she puts Heer on seat and slowly gets up..He then carries Heer is his soft arms...All are not in a mood to react to Prem's naughtiness..as all are sleepy.....Prem waves a good nite to everybody and leaves to his room carrying Heer is his arms.........

He is caring her in his arms and busy in adoring her beauty...........

He enters his room and Puts her slwoly on his bed without making any disturbance..as a cute and caring husband..

are any words required in this situation...

He then comes and sits beside her on the other side of the bed

He then slowly carenesses her hair and puts a bed sheet on her..and adroing his sleeping beauty

Prem slowly feels drowsy and sleeps beside his wife simply adoring her beauty and slowly closes his eyes remembering the romantic dance,...............

Atlast i have complted in a single post only....enjoy reading to all my silent and active readers....i lost the links of all the parts posted in the first page so pls give me some time i wll fix it soo soon as i have to check each and every page ..ek baat one line commnets mana hain..itna mehanat kiya hain maine ..atleast 2 liner commnets guys...sorry if u feel demanding 😭..but it took 2 hrs to upload all these pictures....replies will be given so soonn make me hapy guys ...sorry for late message my sis Neha (12345xxx) has made a siggy for this FF..i am dispalying that siggy in the first page and page 96 also..pls check it onceBye take care

Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#658

*Reserved*

Me is first here&reserved it,upload it dear im reading it now😳Takecare.

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Anusha

@-Anusha-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#659

posted the comlete part in that post only........

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Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#660

WOW!!!after putting soooooo much effort it ll b unfair/unjustice with u.It was awsome
u deserve a huge round pf applaud for this👏
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It was really very beautiful,soooooo romantic😍😍i just drown in ur writting it was
mindblowing!!soooo perfect!!i dont have much word to praise u.just can say god bless u.
i wondering if there is really some1 exist like Prem😳He is soooooooooo sweet.Sooooooo
romantic Mashallah.Lucky Heer😃

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