FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: BushraHameed
👏👏I really liked the promo it was awesome n i m waiting for the update but first concentrate on u r studies

And best of luck for u r xams 😉
With love Ayesha
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thankq so much ayesha for ur cute comments
thank q so much for telling to concentarte on the eaxam. i did my exam well yaar
loved ur commnets

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweta2005
update plzzzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggggggg asap with long part plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hey sweta ur eagerness came to end
i am updating the part within few min. hope u wil like it yaaar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#203

Part 11 - Candle Light Dinner

All are busy with the household works. All the ladies are busy in preparing lunch. Harman, Preet and Karan are busy with marriage arrangements. Lallu , Veera and nihaal are discussing abt the mandap and the guests.

Lallu : we will arrange the mandap in the home itself and Prem aur heer ki shaadi hamare ghar mein hi hooga (excitingly)
Veera : no papa
Lallu : Kyun kya hua? (shockingly)
Veera : Papa mere paas ek aacha idea hain, Kyun na hum shaadi hamare hotel mein karengi (excitedly)
Preet : Hotel mein..... (surprised)
Veera : Haan Bhaiyya, shaadi ke liye bahut saare log ayengi . .and they all cannot adjust in our home… If we perform marriage in the hotel, as our hotel has a capacity of nearly 1000 and more people. All the guests will feel better there.
Harman : Ya i think thats better idea
Veera : Thank you Bhaiyya , and one more thing, we can also take Baraat of Prem bhai also. We can also make Gruhapravesh of Bhabhi in our home.
Karan : Absolutely rite Veera, isn't it Bauji??
Nihaal : Ya Karan bhaiyya, its really nice idea
Bauji : Ok , jaise ab sab ki marzi. Shaadi hamare hotel mein hoogi. Khush Veera beta (smiles)
Veera : ya Papa.

( i don't want to leave a single ritual on our Premeer marriage, if marriage happens in home, there will be no Prem's Baraat. So i decided that Prem's marraige will happen in the hotel, so that Prem's Baraat will take place. Hope u understood guys)

Then Gay3 calls all of them for Lunch. All move to the dining table for having Lunch. Prem comes from upstairs and takes his chair. Heer , Gay3 serves food for all and Heer sits beside Prem. Lallu announces that marriage will take place in their hotel. Prem and Heer agrees and blushes.

Gay3: Prem beta
Prem : ji maa (drinking water)
Gay3 : kal tum dono milne to door, ek dusre ko dekh bhi nahi sakthe.
Prem : (spills water from mouth) Kya ...........? (shockingly)
All are laughing to Prem's sudden reaction. Heer is shocked and laughing
Gay3 : Haan Prem, kal tum aur Heer ek dusre ko dekh bhi nahi sakthe (laughingly)
Prem : Lekin kab tak? (worried)
Gay3 : jab tak Heer tumare saath mandap mein baitegi, tab tak
Prem : Lekin kyun maa (shockingly)
Gay3 : kyun ki shaadi se pehle dulha , dulhaan ek dusre ko nahi dekh sakthe, yeh aachar hain, agar galthe se bhi dekha tho, bahut bada apshagun hooga. samja????????
Prem : Jee maa, mein heer se kal baath nahi karunga (unwillingly)
Gay3 : baathe tho dhoor ke baath hain, tum mujhe heer ke aas paas bhi nahi dekhna chahiye (warning him sweetly)
Prem : ok maa (assures unwillingly)
Gay3 : aur Heer tum........ (looking at Heer)
Heer : Jee maa, mein samajgaye. (assuring her)
Preet : bhai , aapke halat dekh ke mujhe ek gaana yaad aaraha hain (teasingly)
Veera : Koun sa gaana ??? (excitedly)
Preet :
Char dino ka pyaar o rabba
Lambi judai lambi judai
Lambi Judai (singing in his sweet voice, all are laughing)
Karan : aree Preet char din nahi , sirf ek din yaar (corrects him by patting his shoulder)
Preet : Sorry Jeju
All sings that song louder to tease Prem and Heer
Ek din ka pyaar o rabba
Lambi judai lambi judai
Lambi judai
(Preet is acting that he is crying and wiping his tears to tease prem. Heer is blushing. Prem is getting angry on Preet)
Tere bin dil mera lage kahin na
Tere bin jaan mere jaye kahin na
Kitne zamane baad o rabbaaaaaaaaaaaaa (stressing the word)
Yaad tu aaya, yaad tu aayaaaaaaaaaaa (stressing the word)

All are singing still louder. Kulraj is laughing. Prem is giving angry looks to Preet. All are teasing Prem and Heer (just imagine the scene guys, it will be so funny

Gay3 : Bas bas bahut hogaya. Ab sab chup chap kaana kao, aur Preet tum tho Prem ko dekh kar bahut hass rahe hoon na, ab kal prem aur heer galthi se bhi ek dusre ko dekh liya na , mein tumare band bajaunga (warning him)

Preet : Mom, its unfair mom, how can…. I stop them? (defending her)
Gay3 : Mujhe yeh sab nahi pata, mein heer aur prem ka responsibility tumko derahe hoon (telling final decision)
Preet : No mom, don't involve me in this matter (pleading her)
Kulraj : Preet…. Ash se shaadi karne hain na?? (putting jam on the bread for his son)
Preet : Ofcourse, why not? (smiles)
Kulraj : agar tum chahthe hoon ki hum sab tere aur Ash ki shaadi karvaye , tho kal tumko prem aur heer ke responsibility lena hi chahiye (linking with his marriage)
Ash : di……, its really unfair . aap prem ke shaadi se hum dono ke shaadi kyun link karrahe hain. Agar…….. prem aur heer kal galthe se bhe ek dusre ko dekh liya tho………???? (enters in the middle) (shockingly)
Kulraj : tho…. Samjho tum dono ki shaadi nahi hoogi (teases her)
Ash : Kya??? (shocked)
Kulraj : soochlo Ash (teasingly)
Ash : maine sooch liya (with a determined look)
Karan : kya??
Ash : Preet kal Prem aur Heer ka responsibility lega
Preet : Ash tum bhi ??? (cries cutely)
Ash : Haan Preet, mere liye , hamare shaadi le liye, please preet (Cutely crying and requesting preet)

Preet : ok, ok kal mein prem bhaiyya ke saath hein rahunga aur dekunga ke PB kaise bhabhi se baath karenge. Mujhe yaad aaya,kal se kyun aaj se , nahi nahi abhi se mein PB ke saath rahunga
Saying this preet gets up from his seat and tries to sit beside prem
Prem : where r u going?
Preet : I am coming to sit beside you bhai and I want to start my duty from now itself
Prem : Maa ne kaha ki kal mein heer ko nahi dekh saktha , aaj nahi, samjhe…….. (telling him sweetly)
Preet : oh, I forgot. So my duty starts from 2mrw morning. Kal mein apke peeche hi rahunga bhai aapke saaye (shadow) ke tarah. Aap Ram ho tho mein aapke Lakshman ho bhai, aap jaha jaha jathe hein mein waha waha aathjata hoon.

Prem : aacha , mere pyaare lakshman ab tu khaana ka, mera dimag nahi (sweetly shouts at him)
Preet : ok…….

All are laughing by listening to Preet's words. Prem asks heer to pass dal for him. While Heer is passing Dal with her left hand , he suddenly catches Heer's right hand under the table . Heer is shocked and gets nervous.She forgets about passing dal to him

Heer : Prem, mera haath choodo, koi dekhlega (shockingly)
Prem : Kya hua heer dal pass karo na (teasingly)
Heer : Pehle tum mera haath chodo , tab mein dal pass karungi (replies back sweetly)
Prem : Kitne dher (late) lagaugi Heer dal pass karne ke liye (pretending )
Heer passes dal with her left hand. Prem teasingly looks at Heer. Heer is requesting him to leave her hand by giving signals. Gay3 sees Heer
Gay3 : heer…..
Heer : Jee maa…..(shockingly)
Gay3 : khalo beta , warna khana tanda ho jayega
Heer : Jee maa (in a trembling voice)
Heer takes a spoon and starts eating with her left hand. Kulraj sees this
Kulraj : Aree Heer tum khaana left hand se kyun karahe hoon.
Heer : Woh……………… mein………. (shivering)
Preet : Woh… mein.. kya bhabhi

Prem is laughing by seeing Heer in that situation. Karan thinks that something is happening. He observes that Prem is feeling shy. Then he acts that he dropped the spoon and looks under the table and finds Prem catching Heer's right hand. Karan understands everything and smiles

Heer : Woh kuch nahi , bas yuhi……. (doesn't finds out any answer)
Prem : Kyun bachpana karrahe hoon heer, sab log kehrahe hain na.Chalo apni right hand se khanna kao. (teases her) (Heer is looking at him angrily)
Karan : Prem agar tum apni left hand se khaana kaoge tho Heer apni right hand se khaana kayegi
Preet : Matlab… mein kuch samja nahi (confused)
Karan : aree budhu Prem ne Heer ka right hand pakada tha issliye woh bechaari left hand se khaana kaarahe hain (smiles at Prem)
By listening Karan's words Prem immediately leaves Heer's hand and feels that he is caught. . Prem and Heer are blushing. Heer shyly looks down.
Gay3 : Prem, tu bada badmaash hogaya hain
Prem : woh……. Maa……..aise koi baath nahi hain. Jeju ap bhi na…… (sweetly smiles)
Preet : bhaiyya , ap bhabhi ke saath baitkar bhe, aise kaam kar rahe hain table ke neeche. Agar mein ap ke saath kal nahi raha tho, ap bhabhi ke saath baath bhe karenge, issliye mein kal ap ke saath hi… rahunga
Prem : aacha, kal hi kyun abhi aaja mere saath baith (waves his hand to Preet)
Preet : ok……..
Preet gets up from his seat and moves towards Prem.
Prem : aa… tumare hi intezaar kar raha hoon, ab mein tumhe nahi chodunga, bahut bol chukka ha thu (sweetly shouting at Preet)

Prem gets up from his seat and runs after Preet to beat him. Preet is running to hide from Prem. All are laughing happily. Preet goes upstairs and Prem follows him. Atlast Prem catches Preet. Prem puts his hand around Preet's neck
Prem : Neche bahut mazak udaya hain na mere, ab dekh mein tumhe kya kartha hoon.
Preet : bro, pls leave me, I am sorry (requesting him)
Prem : kya bola. I did not hear
Preet : sorry bhai, pls leave me, I will not tease you again (sweetly requests him)
Prem : that's better (leaving him slowly)
Prem leaves Preet. Both are tired by running. They both sit on the bed.
Preet : My time will also come that time I will see you. I will not allow you to meet bhabhi 2mrw. (warning him)
Prem : Pls preet aisa mat karna, kuch tho sooch yaar, I can't live without talking to Heer even for a second also. (pleads him)
Preet : Noways , if mom comes to know that I am helping you, she will kill me. I don't want to take any risk (denies his proposal)
Prem : ya, you are right, if mom comes to know, she will not forgive me. And moreover she told that if I meet heer 2mrw, it will become big apshagun. So I think I should not meet heer tomorrow
Preet : Correct bhai, but you can meet bhabhi today and you can talk to her whenever you want. I think instead of chasing me you can spend your time with bhabhi now.
Prem : ya, you are right Preet. (happily)
Preet : ofcourse, I am always right
Prem : Kis ka bhai hain (raising his collar)
Preet : Aacha ………
Saying this Preet hugs Prem sweetly. They both share a sweet moment

IN PREM'S ROOM
Prem thinks of giving surprise to Heer and spending all the day with Heer. Next moment he gets an idea and calls someone . He tells that person about his plan and insists him wat he has to do? . He quickly rushes to that place within no time He arranges all the place by himself. He finishes all his work and becomes happy by seeing that place. He thinks that " Heer tho bahut khush hojayegi ye sab dekh ke, well done Prem ". By saying this he pats himself on his shoulder and feels shy thinking Heer. He then drives to home. He quickly goes to Heer's room.

Prem : Heer kya kar rahe hoon?
Heer : Kuch nahi Prem , bas paper pad rahe hoon.
Prem : Aacha tho chalo jaldi se tayyar ho jao
Heer : lekin kisliye ?? (shockingly)
Prem : Maine kaha na tayyar ho jao. Hum dono bahar jarahe hain.
Heer : Lekin Prem hum kahan ja rahe hain
Prem : Tum bhi na Heer kitne sawaal pochthe hoon, lekin mein tumare koi sawaal ka jawab nahi doonga, tum bas chalo meri saath, Mein tumhe ek surprise dena chahtha hoon
Heer : SURPRISE............ Kaun si surprise (surprisingly).
Prem : Phir se sawaal, mein tak gaya hoon, tumare sawaalon se, please Heer jaldi se tayyar ho jao. Mein tumhe ab kuch nahi bataunga. Please Heer make it fast (almost cries)
Heer : ok baba, tum roona mat mein tayyar ho jaunga (assuring him)
She turns to go to washroom but she gets something in her mind and turns to Prem
Heer : Prem........
Prem : ab kya hua?
Heer : par maa… , maa ne kaha ki hum dono nahi mil sakthe
Prem : Maa ne kaha ki kal hum dono nahi mil sakthe, aaj nahin
Heer : ok
Prem : so please get ready soon, i will talk to mom, bye
Heer : bye

Prem leaves from there to talk with Gay3 about taking Heer out for sometime. Heer goes to washroom and quickly changes her dress . She is waiting for Prem. Prem asks Gay3 about this matter. Preet, Veera and Harman are talking with Gay3 abt marriage arrangements

Prem : Maa, woh..... mein, Heer ko bahar le jaana chahtha hoon
Gay3 : Prem.........., ab. Lekin kaise beta, kal tumare haldi hain aur parso tumare shaadi hain. Kal se tum dono nahi mil sakthe .
Prem : Maa, please bas 3 hrs ke liye, hum jaldi aajayengi (assures her)
Gay3 : ok for only 3 hrs, you both should get up early in morning , so no late nights
Prem : ok maa, pucca only 3 hrs. Thank you mom
Preet : bhai, can we come? i think you will get bore (teasingly)
Veera : yes bhai, can we join you , just for company (teasingly)
Harman : ya bhaiyya just give us 5 min , we wil get ready fast
Prem : aacha…., hame ap theeno (three) ki company nahi chahiye. Atleast leave me for today. Kal se mein heer kho nahi mil sakthe, and that time we will go anywhere as your wish.
Veera : no, we want to come with u now only
Harman : Ya bhaiyya, we too will come with you. (teasingly)
Prem : maa….. dekho na, yeh tho peecha hi nahi chodrahi hain (sweetly complains to her)
Gay3 : (catching Veera's ear) kyun taang kar rahe hoon mere laadle ko, tu jaa prem heer ke saath, mein dekh thi hoon, koun tumara saath aatha hain
Prem : Thank q soo much maa (kisses her on her cheek)

Prem goes to Heer's room and both of comes down happily. They both leave the home saying bye to all and assuring gay3 that they will come home within three hrs. Prem and Heer sit in the car.
Heer : ab tho batao, kaha jaa rahe hain hum dono??
Prem : phir se shuru ho gaye tum , thodi dher intezaar nahi kar sakthe (scolds her softly)
Heer : aacha baba, mein kuch nahi puchungi
Prem : I think that's better
Heer : yeh tum kaha le jarahe hoon mujhe, city se bahut dhoor aachuke hain hum, kya mujhe bagakhe lejaneka programme banaya hain. (teasing him)
Prem : aacha mujhe yeh baath batao, aisa koun se dulha hain jo apne dulhaan ko thek shaadi ke do din pehle baga kar lejatha hain
Heer : aur kisi ki baath kyun tum hoo na, bataona hum kaha jaa rahe hain
Prem stops the car suddenly.
Heer : Prem…. Gaadi kyun roka tumne, woh bhi beech sadak par (shockingly)
Prem : (staring at heer in anger) 10 bar puuch chuki hoon yeh sawaal mujhe. Ab tum apne mou kola na mein plaster laga dunga tumare mou par. Samje (warns her sweetly)
Heer gets angry and turns her face from prem . she is staring outside.
Prem : naraz ho mujse (asking cutely)
Heer : haan…….(replies in anger)
Prem : mujhe pata hain, ki tumare naarazgi kaise dhoor hoge (smiles)
Prem sweetly puts his hand on Heer's hand. But Heer removes her hand. Prem is smiling sweetly. Prem takes Heer on a long drive. Atlast Prem stops the car in a lonely place. Heer sees Prem. He gets down from the car and cutely opens the car door for Heer . Heer comes out of the car. Prem closes Heer's eyes with a small cloth.. Heer continusly asks Prem " where is he taking her?? ". Prem catches Heer's hand and guiding her all the way. Prem stops and automatically Heer stops walking. Prem unties the cloth and asks her to open her eyes slowly. she opens her eyes .
She is surprised to see that place decorated with candles everywhere. She is amazed to see the path which she is walking is decorated with flowers. Prem asks her to continue her walk . Heer sees a table arranged with candles. Heer gets water from her eyes by seeing Prem's surprise. Prem sweetly wipes her tears. Prem gives a small cover to Heer. Heer opens it and sees it . It is a western dress black in colour which matches Prem's black suit..

Prem gives that dress to Heer and asks her to wear it for him. Heer does not say a single word of rejection to Prem. She agrees and Prem shows her washroom. Heer goes to change dress. Meanwhile Prem lits the candles and arranges the table. Heer slowly comes out. She is feeling uncomfortable in that dress, but she thinks that Prem's happiness lies in this. Prem can sense Heer's presence. He then suddenly turns to her side. He is amazed to see his love in that dress. He slowly moves towards Heer. Heer is happy to see Prem's sparkling eyes. Prem is staring at Heer. Heer shyly looks down. Prem gives a rose flower bouquet to Heer. Heer happily takes it. She sees that he is continusly staring to her. She feels shy and bends her head down. Prem also feels shy and sweetly kisses her on her forehead. Heer feels the warmth in Prem's touch.

Prem : Gorgeous………., pata hain tum bahut khoobsurat lagrahe hoon iss dress mein, jee katha hain tumhe apni bahon mein leloo (staring at heer shamelessly)
Heer : aacha, to kisne roka hain tumhe (signaling him to fulfill his wish)
Prem : Abhi naraaz ho mujse (sweetly)
Heer : Kya Heer kabhi Prem se naraaz ho sakthe hain
Prem hugs Heer passionately and kisses on her cheek. Heer feels shy. Prem makes Heer sit on the chair. Prem is continusly staring at Heer making Heer feel shy. Prem gets an idea and gets up from the chair . Heer is looking at him confusingly. Prem plays a song . As the music plays, Prem kneels down infront of Heer
Prem : Can I have the pleasure of dancing with you ??? (offering his hand)

Heer sweetly puts her hand in Prem's hand and says " why not "

Heer gets up from her seat catching Prem's hand. Then the song plays in the background.

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan

Prem is catching Heer's hand with his one hand and gently places the other hand on Heer's waist. Heer's other hand is resting around Prem's shoulder. They are completely lost in each other eyes. They are looking at each other with wild passion in their eyes.

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

Prem is enjoying each and every moment with his love. Heer could not turnoff her eyes from Prem's passionate gaze. But she puts her head down. Prem kisses her forehead passionately. Heer feels that her heart is racing. He then slowly kisses her eyes. She felt like she was melting with his touch.

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan

Prem slowly kisses her cheeks. Prem comes very close to Heer's lips and sees that Heer closed her eyes. He is adoring her beauty. He sweetly kisses on place near her lips. Heer's hand is stroking Prem's hair passionately. He hugs her tightly. He kisses on her neck and all the way to her cheeks. Heer could not resist anymore and turns away from Prem. But Prem catches her hand and quickly catches her from back

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

Heer is facing her back towards prem. Prem places his both hands on Heer's stomach and stroking her stomach passionately. Heer places her both hands on Prem's hands. Prem is kissing her shoulders passionately all the way up to her cheeks. Heer is completely lost in Prem's passion.

Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan

Prem makes Heer turn towards him. Heer puts her head down. Prem lifts her head with his hand. He is carenessing her cheeks with his fingers. He slowly strokes her hair with his hand. Then suddenly rain begins to fall adding more passion to that song. He is adoring her beauty.

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan

At the end of the song, Prem could not control his desire of kissing her anymore. He slowly moves his face towards Heer's face. There is no gap between both faces. He is rubbing his nose with Heer's nose. He slowly moves his lips towards Heer's lips thinking that let there lips meet . Heer is burning with passion inside her. There lips are just a half inch apart.

Suddenly they hear a voice " excuse me sir ". Heer and Prem are startled. He sees the server carrying food and he is looking down.

Server : sorry sir, to disturb you, your order is ready sir
Prem : (shivering) ok thek… thek hain, tum…. Tum jao
Server : Thank You sir

Heer and Prem come to their senses. Heer is blushing. Prem gives a blank smile to Heer thinking " yeh server ko bhi abhi aana tha. Aacha mouka haath se nikaal gaya. Mummyyyyyyyyyyy" Prem sees the watch and thinks " omg already one and half hour completed, I must reach home within one and half hour, warna maa mujhe maardaligi"

Prem and Heer sits in their respective seats. Prem cutely feeds Heer and Heer feeds Prem. They both are staring into each other eyes. Only their eyes are talking. They are enjoying rain and having the dinner staring at each other.

After completing their dinner they both leave for home in their car. Rain is falling heavily . Heer sweetly puts her head on Prem's shoulder and Prem touches her cheek with his hand and smiles cutely. Suddenly car stops in the middle of the road. Heer gets up from Prem's shoulder

Heer : kya hua tum phir se gaadi kyun roka beech sadak par (remembering the past incident)
Prem : iss bar car mein ne nahi roka, woh tho apne ap rukh gaye hain (confused)
Heer : Kya?? (shocked)
Prem : haan, shayad engine mein koi problem hogi mein dekhtha hoon
Heer : pagal ho gaye hoon, tum itne baarish mein bahaar kaise jaoge (caring abt him)
Prem : lekin mujhe jaane hi padega, mein ne maa se promise kiya ki hum dono raath thak ghar pounch jayenge.
Heer : lekin prem………
Prem gets out from the car without listening to her and asks heer to sit in the car only. Heer says ok. Prem is becoming wet and opens the engine. He finds that it has severe break down and it can't move further . But he is trying his level best to repair the car, she is seeing him worringly. Suddenly Prem shouts in pain as something hurt him. Heer hears his voice and gets out of the car to check wat happened to him.

Heer : Prem, kya hua?? Tum thek tho hoona?? (worried )
Prem : Haan , mein bilkul theek hu, haath me kuch lag gaya. Ab mein thek hun. Lekin tum car se bahaar kyun aagaye. ???
Heer : Woh… tumare aawaz suna, aur daar gaye, issliye bahaar aagaye. Kya problem hain??
Prem : car break down hogaya, ek inch bhi aage nahi jaa sakthe hain
Heer : Kya??.. kya keh rahe ho tum… itne raat hum ghar kaise jayenge aur woh bhi itne bearish mein??? (confusingly)
Prem : Woh tho mujhe bhi samaj nahi aaraha hain

Prem tries to stop vehicles but he fails. Both are confused and became completely wet. Suddenly he sees a light in a small cottage. Prem shows cottage to Heer and tells her that they will rest in the cottage until rain stops. Heer says ok. He removes his coat and they run to the small cottage covering their both heads in the coat.

They both reach there and finds a small wooden house. They enter the wooden house. They both are completely wet. Prem puts his coat around her. Prem removes his shirt and puts on a small wooden piece for drying. Heer unties her hair and making her dry. Prem is trying to call home, but there is no network. Prem becomes restless. He gathers some wood and luckily finds a match box. He puts fire. Then Heer comes with all wet and leaves her hair. She is standing infront of the fire. Prem sees her. He is completely lost in her beauty and adoring her shamelessly. Heer puts her head down.

Prem suddenly gets up from his place and slowly walks towards her. She feels nervous and making her steps backwards. Prem is coming towards her. Heer suddenly hits to a wall. Prem is staring at her with his passionate eyes. He is so closer to her. He raises his hand, she feels shy and turns her face away from him . Prem smiles and takes a small dust particle from her hairs. Heer feels relieved. Then suddenly she hears a thunder and hugs Prem tightly. Prem is surprised by Heer's sudden reaction and hugs her more tightly. Heer feels warmth in Prem's hug. Prem is rubbing his hands on Heer's back. They both are completely lost in their own world.

PRECAP : Prem is kissing Heer passionately. Then a song plays in the background " Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain " from RHTDM. Heer is trying to move away from him. But Prem catches her from back and passionately kisses her hand and all the way to her neck.

Hope u enjoyed the part guys. Please please leave ur valuable comments. I am totally depressed by seeing yesterday's episode. Ur comments really make my day. I have put a lot of effort to make my readers happy. So please leave ur comments.

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 16 years ago

#204

brb

Sorry sis

I did not added comment to your promo lazy me😭 as I was out of mind .your this part is very nice what to say . the dialogues are fabulous. Scenes are real .as it is a movie or a drama which we are watching . you will go very high Insha Allah . 👏

And about prem heer scene you are simply awesome . what to say ?👍🏼

Thank God waiter came or I was ………….. ☺️

Preet is great our second hero. He is same in every FF as kis desh mein hain meraa dil.

Oh I am waiting what prem will do in next episode .

Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

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Posted: 16 years ago

#205

hey very nice update, waiting for the next part,,,, do write soon

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Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#206

hey anushka...very nice n itna bada update!!! loved it yaar...aise hi badi badi update dete rehna..ok...well returning to ur ff...its just fantastic..premeer table scene n karan seeing them...awww...bichare premeer...lols...well preet saying prem cant meet heer tomorrow...aww do din ki to baat hai..hope ye do din jaldi khatam ho jaye...well i loved ur update...well heer wears a western dress for prem...wow...nice one yaar..do i haev to comment on the last part..lols...its awsum as usuall...very nice...every part waz described vvvvvv beautifully....i m glad u updated i waz waiting eagerly...thank god..coz waiting isnt for me...i cant wait...plz next part bhi jaldi jaldi update karo sis...ur bhai is waiting...

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#207

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

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lala

@Harshitipremeer

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#208

i m faint dudez!😆n the word u said shamlessly!😆just imagine if this scence happens in real than i dont know i can watch it or not!😆😆😆too good do continue very soon!😳

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#209

first of all lemme say i am sorry for not commenting for the earlier parts had problems with my net.anyways.thank you for another awesome update.love the interactions you put in between the members of the juneja family.everyone form prem and heer to preet and prem.just too good.and coming to the candle light dinner awesome.to tell you the trutth i loved it.am i sounding absolute besharam but then cant help it,if they not showing it on tv then guess we have to make do with the amazing situations created by our amazing ff writers.coming to the last part in the cottage prem without his shirt that is one sight i am missing in the show.i know besharmi ki bhi hadh hoti hai but then when it comes to prem we all are besharam.waiting for the next part.but still knowing my prem and heer i bet they can wait till after they marriage.once again nice update

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silpa

@SILPA8

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#210

Hey Anu, you again did magic with your update...really i was dreaming while reading...Coming to update...

1. Veera...omg!!! she is such good in this FF, sharing works with family and also cool character...the way she giving suggestions to family abt premeer marriage...really ur thot is gr8 of modulinge her character good.

2. Gaya3...what to say??? when she said to prem...dont meet heer..the way he reacting while drinking...and family members faces...i imagined...its really funny...prem face was🤣

3. Karan...naughty jiju...see how prem blushed...shameless prem na doing romance under table...

4.Kulraj...such a nice sis...for one brother teasing other one..

5. Preet...such a spoiled guy...teasing his PB...really i imagined scenes between prem n preet...kulraj n preet n ash... Ash face when kulraj told abt their marriage...very funny...

6. Hmmmmmmmmm.....coming to Candle light dinner n Cottage scene...yar you blushed everyone...what to say???....😍...what to say abt shameless prem and he made heer also shameless....and cottage scene...hmmm...as FIJIANA told besharmi ki bhi hadh hoti hai but then when it comes to prem we all are besharam...waiting for next part eagerly...and plz dont take much time dear...as we are still in ur tremendous update dream...

Thankyou so much for this beautiful part yar...which never happen in show...

With Luv

Sillu