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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with more ph scenes
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
very nice update dear..........hmmm..now premeer r alone... can't wait to see...plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
Hello Dears😆!!thank u all for liking it..and ur appreciation and also ur feedback..I usually write these FF's on the weekend..I continue the episode which ends on thursday..because we don't have KDMHMD from fri-sun..I'm really glad u all like the FF's I'll try to continue this one..but no garauntees though..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
ook this'll be a short update..but my next FF will be this weekend..I'm going to end this update today..
Prem drives for a while and notices Heer is not speaking to him..

P:naaraz ho?

H:hmm?

P:meine poocha tum mujhse naaraz ho?

H:nahi toh..aisi koi baat nahi hai..aisa kyun poocha?

P:tum itni chup chaap jo baiti ho..meine socha shaayad tum mujhse naaraz ho..

H:mein naaraz kyun hongi..mein toh bahot khush hoon..came an immediate reply..and she realises how enthusiasticly she had replied and keeps quiet..

P:is very happy..tumhe pata hai humara farm house kahan hai?
H:haan pata hai..baoji ne mujhse kaha tha ki aap ke paas ek farm house hai..jo bahot bada hai aur bahot sunder..

P:acha?aur kya kehte the tumhare baoji?

H:woh hamesha aap sab ko yaad karte the..maa toh bas humesha tum logon ka intezaar karthi thi..

P:aur tum?

H:unse bhi zyaada..realised what she had said..

P:mujhe achcha lagta hai jab tum mujhse khul ke baat karti ho..

H:mujhe bhi..

He holds her hand and stares at her..

H:yeh kya kar rahhe ho..dekh ke gaadi chalao..

P:kuch nahi hoga..aur yahan kaun hai jo hume dekhega..humari sagaai ho chuki hai..ab toh istara sharmaana band karo..
H:sagaai ho chuki hai iska matlab yeh nahi..ki hum jo chaahe kar sakte hain..

P:arre baba sirf haath hi toh pakda hai..teek hai tumhe acha nahi lagta hai toh mein chod deta hoon..saying this he leaves her hand..she feels bad for him..

H:boora maan gaye?

Prem doesn't speak..

H:sorry..holds her ears..and then she holds his hands..ab toh maaf kardo..
Prem couldn't resist her innocent face so eventually gives her a smile..

H:aaj meine dekha ki tum naaraz bhi ho sakte ho?

P:insaan hoon..naaraz ho sakta hoon..acha..bore ho raha hai?

H:nahi to..bilkul bhi nahi..
P:teek hai..meine socha ki shaayad tumhe bore ho rahi hai..isliye poocha..
He drives forawhile..and suddenly stops the car and gets out of it..

H:Prem?yahan gaadi kyun roki?farmhouse toh abhi door haina?

P:ek minut mein aaya..tum yahin rehna..
H:magar..Pr..before she could call out his name he goes from there..and as he said within few minutes he was back..yeh Prem bhi na..sab log humara intezaar kar rahe honge aur yeh gaayab ho gaya..

Immediately there is a bunch of fresh roses infront of her from her side of the window..it's Prem..she is pleasantly surprised..and takes them from him..he runs to his seat and closes the door..

H:Prem..yeh?bahot pyaara hai..par yeh kisliye?
P:aapke liye madam..

H:mere liye?thanks..and she looks at the flowers..there is a soft kiss on her forehead now..she is then again surprised and doesn't know what to do..so she blushes..
P:I love you!!smiles..

H:Me..

P:waiting for a reply..ME?
H:Me too..aur thanks phool ke liye..bahot pyaare hain..

P:tumse achche nahi hai..

H:ab chalen?der ho rahi hai..

P:haan chalo..so he starts driving again..tumhe boora toh nahi laga?

H:boora?kyun kya hua?

P:meine jo tume kiss kiya?

H:woh..it's ok..humari sagaai ho chuki hai?

P:yeh tum keh rahi ho?..abhi kuch der pehle kya kaha tha?
H:woh aise hi..

P:achcha toh aapki baari aai toh aise hi..not done..

H:it's ok..

P:ek baat kahoon..

H:kaho..
P:actually mujhe achcha laga ki hum dono akele ja rahen hai..baatein karne ki liye mauka mil gaya..
H:achcha..feeling the fragrance of those flowers..kya baatein karni thi?

P:bahot kuch..par ab bhool gaya..

H:hm mm..smiles and nods her head..
They reach the farm house..and to their surprise there is no one in the house..Prem asks the watchman where everybody else are..and the watchman says nobody has come here..

P:arre yeh log kahan reh gaye..Preet ko phone karleta hoon..he dials Preet's number..Hello Preet..

Pr:PB!!kahan ho aap?humari toh tyre puncture hogayi aur hum yahan ek auto repair shop mein hain..

P:laughs..achcha..lekin raaste mein toh kahin mile nahi aap log?

Pr:PB..puncture hua toh farmhouse ke kuch doori pe hum log yahan ek shop mein aagaye..

P:achcha..kitni der lagegi?

Pr:pata nahi PB..arre bhaisaab..aur kitni der lagegi..aur kuch ghante lagenge came an answer from a mechanic..

P:toh mein aur Heer bhi wahin aajate hain..

Pr:nahi bro..aap aur bhaabhi yahan aake kya karenge..hum log gaadi yahan shop pe hi chod kar paas waali ek park mein jaa rahen hain..aap aur bhaabhi wahin farmhouse par ruk jaana..shaam ko aake aapke saath ghar jaayenge..teek haina?

P:shaam?shaam tak kya karenge yahan?

Pr:arre bhaai..aap log baate waate karo..enjoy urselves..achcha toh mein phone rakta hoon..meri battery khatam ho rahi hai..

P:Preet?Preet meri baat sun..phone has been disconnected..

H:kya hua?kahan hain sab log?

P:yeh Preet bhi na..unki ghaadi kharab ho gayi isliye..woh kisi shop pe hain..aur jab tak gaadi teek nahi ho jaati..woh sab kisi park mein rahenge..

H:hum bhi wahin chalte hai na..

P:meine kaha..lekin baat poori hone se pehle hi uski cell ki battery khatam ho gayi..uff..woh yahan shaam ko aajayenge..
H:shaam ko?shaam tak hum yahan kya karenge?

P:baate waate karenge..

H:kya?
P:Preet ne kaha..

H:chalo na Prem hum bhi wahin chalte hain..
P:teek hai..lekin park kahan hai woh pata nahi hai..aur thodi der ruk jaate hain..abhi abhi toh drive karke aayen hain..chalo ander chalo mein tumhe farmhouse dikha ta hoon..

H:teek hai..lekin thodi der baad..hum chale jaayenge teek hai..

P:haan baba ab chalo..to the watchman..dekhiye hume dopehar ka khaana yahin bhej deejiye..teek hai..and he gives him some money..

They enter this huge house which is fully furnished..

H:hmm..ghar toh bahot bada hai..

P:ander aao..takes her hand and brings her into the house and walks her around the house..they come to the backyard which is equally big as the front garden..and there is a swing there..Heer runs to the swing..

H:jhoola!!mujhe jhoola bahot pasand hai..mein yahan bait jaaon?pls?

P:pls?pls ki kya baat hai..tumhara ghar hai toh tumhara jhoola..bait jaao..

H:thanks..she sits on the jhoola..pata hai Prem mujhe bachpan se na jhoolon par baitna bahut acha lagta hai..

P:pata chal raha hai..he walks behind the swing and leans on it and starts to sway it gently..Heers hair is coming to his face so he slides the strands of her hair onto her shoulder and keeps his head on her other shoulder and comes close to her..she has this weird nice feeling and she closes her eyes..kya hua?baatein kyun band kardi?

H:kuch nahi..tum bhi baito mere saath..and takes his hand and brings him to the swing so that he can sit on it too..

P:hm..takes her hand in his hands and slightly pulls her onto his shoulders and kisses her forehead..she hides her face on his chest..he runs his fingers in her hair..aaj mein bahot kush hoon..

H:mein bhi..and she kisses his hands..

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so guys..that's it..agla FF..agle weekend ko..cya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
LOVELY UPDATE AWESOME
WILL BE WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

LOVELY UPDATE AWESOME
WILL BE WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE


Hi there..thank u..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
aww i loved it!!
will be waiting for the next weekend updates
they're always soooo cute
thnx a lot for always cheering us up!
rinki
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

aww i loved it!!

will be waiting for the next weekend updates
they're always soooo cute
thnx a lot for always cheering us up!
rinki

Hi Rinki..am glad u liked it..and yeah I hope they give a nice episode on thursday..because it makes continuation easy..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79

aaawww......so cutie, romantic PREMEER scenes........mein to PREMEER ki duniya mein kho gayi thi, while reading this.......I can feel everything....excellent job.......plz, plz, continue......I don't care abt EKTA's storyline, but plz continue further with yr story.........I love yr FFs......plz, continue....if u can......

Edited by zindagi001 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
That was so sweet!
I absoulutely loved the swing scene!
Can't wait till next week!
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