Fanfic on prem and heer - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
awesome ff!
i just read both ur updates. they're amazing
yay!! heer and prem are together again
can't wait to read ur next update😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
hi di...cont soooooon..its awsome...i had so much fun reading it...tooo gud..
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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epi starts off with Meher and Veer dancing to kachi kaliya maath thoro from laga chunari main daag and they look very funny as Veer's hair is all over the place finally the song is over and gayatri sees lalit, Prem and Heer coming in and is smiling and is like Heer and prem will do a dance they to the song pehle nazaar mein aisa jadoo kardiya they look into eachother's eyes Dekha Heer main kya kaha ka tum sirf mera liya baani ho aur mera bina tum ja nahi sakthi' Prem tum sahi ka raha tha Heer Prem ka bina adoori hai' they both smile and everyone is clapping as the song is over and Heer gets shy and runs away Daljit is watching all this and is fuming with anger and then her husband wakes her from daydreaming and fuming and says its time to get aish and preet married think of ur plans after the wedding.... back to Heer and Prem Heer is standing next to a waterfall outside and is lost in her thoughts of Prem' Ma aaj bhi asaama main bhi kitnay sitaraay nazaar ah raha hai ma aaj main bohot khush hoon babuji na humay maaf kardiya aur Prem mujhse bohot pyaar kartha hai' Heer aaj humari kahani choroo ho gayi hai aaj koi huma alaag karna wala nahi hai hum na mauth ko bhi hamara beech nahi anay diya Heer' They both look at each other with love and the epi ends their.... wait till next epi it'll be very loving 😳brownie
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
wow cute scene ....plz continue soon..........
Edited by angel82 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Epi starts off with Heer and Prem looking into each other's eyes when finally Heer gets shy and blushes and turns away and starts to walk when all of a sudden wind blows and her dupatta goes to Prem and in the background the song is playing 'Chanda chup jaane laga Taare sharmane laga .... Laal chunariyan odd li meine jub sai piya ke naam ki mere Piya bhi kehna lage hai mein kis kaam ki' Heer yeh lo ' but teasingly Prem doesn't give her the dupatta both are runing after one another and finally Prem falls and Heer falls on top of him and the kis desh hai mera dil song plays and both are in deep thought. Prem moves Heers hair away from her face and kisses her forehead and then holds her hands tightly and smiles this innocent smile both can't control their happiness and the hug one another tightly as if this was their last chance of hugging... Maine sapno main nahi socha that ka mujhe itni kushi milagi tum sa Prem' main nahi jaanthi ka agaar main maar'Prem puts his hand on her mouth 'Heer tum kaisa baathiya kar rahi ho tumkho kuch bhi nahi hosaktha kyun ka main tumha kuch hona nahi doon ga jahaa Prem wahaan Heer tumhai maloom hai ka Ram aur sita ek hain waisa hum hai tum Sita aur main tumhara Ram'.... epi ends their

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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
excellent i am still in your imagining your story is better than mine
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thats was really good!

Premeer are so sweet!
?xXx?
Cont. soon!
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
very nice yaar really good do cont soon i will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
hey dear...very nice ff........i liked it very much
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys thanks for liking my fanfic sorry i haven't wrote anythign for a while i was sick and all soo here it goes i'll continue where i left 😉 more premandheer moments ahead...
epi starts off with where Prem compares him and Heer to Ram and Sita..... Prem was just about to come closer to Heer when Babuji (lallit) comes and says..'Area Prem tum yahaan ho aur main tum dono ko kahaa kahaa dond raha tha... achcha Prem beta aur Heer beti zaraa andaar tou aao mujhe ek zaroori baat karni hai' They all go inside and everyone is waiting for them, gayatri is standing with an aarti and says before u come in let me take aarti as u have sufffered a lot, she takes it and lets Heer and Prem in...babuji says he has a very important annoncement' Maina decide karliya ka main ab Heer ko is tara nahi ab raksaktha...everyone is shocked including heer and prem... babuji says with a smile'Fikar karna ke zaroorat nahi main aisa waisa kuch nahi kahraha main sirf Prem aur Heer ke sagaayi ke baat kar raha ho.. ab main heer ko is ghar ke bahu ka roop main dakna chahtha ho Heer to meri beti hain ab ghar ke lakshmi to ghar main honi chahiya hai na?? ab kaal hum indono ke sagayi ke jashaan hogi iss ghar main... everyone is looking very happy and Heer shys away when gayatri comes and says to heer Aaj main bohot kush hoon Heer ka mujhe tum jaisi beti milli hai ab tum is ghar ke sab sai baari bahu hogi aur ghar ke aur prem ke bhi ab zimaadari hai tum kho... Heer looks at gatri and says 'aunty main puri emaandari sai yeh farz nebaogi.. app fikar na karaay Prem ko main kush rokoongi aur app sub ko kabhi shakayaath ka moka nahi doongi' the both smile and hug one another.... the sun is shinning and its the day of the sagaayi and everyone is wondering like chicken with their head cut off making it really hard on gayatri Preet is trying to get away from ash while dheer and veera have a stare down and then aur meher comes down and tells veera that auntyji is calling them...Gayatri tells them they can take whatever they want like in terms or jewellry and sarees, meher and veera like the same maang tika and gayatri says ka yeh meri saas na mujhe diya aur main yeh maang tika Heer ka liya hai... veera gets mad and leaves and Heer is all upset that veera left....gayatri tells Heer to get ready as meamaan (guest) are about to come... Heer gets ready and is wearing an light pink and blue lengha and is looking very pretty..Preet starts to tease Prem about Heer' Prem bhai aap na Heer bhabhi ko dekha kitni achchi lag rahi hai haan na??? ab Bhabi kis ke hain isliya itni achchi lag rahi hain koun Prem bhai' Preet tum chup nahi rah sakthay Main jaantha hoon Heer achchi lag rahi hain aur tum abhi kya kah raha thay ka bhabhi kis ke hai Preet for ur kind information Heer ko kis na chunna hai' and winks at Preet.... epi ends here wait till tommorrow thanks once again for showing me ur love keep it up
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