FF:LOVE STORY PREMEER compiled on pg102 (bye aLL) - Page 63

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Posted: 16 years ago

Oh Yar Ji...

Whn u r updating ji....waitng eagerly....plz update fast ji....cant wait more...as u kept us in suspense....ab aur intezaar humse nehi hotha....achi bachi jaise jaldi update kijiye...ok na ji...
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sillu
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey waiting for updating naadia n nice promo dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz waitingggggg asap with long part u promised it.
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Posted: 16 years ago

I hope the person who sat beside him is heer.

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Posted: 16 years ago
PART 23
Kaise Bathaayein Tumhe Aur Kis Tharaah Yeh Kithna Tumhe Hum Chaahathein Hai...
Saaye Bhi Tera Dekhe To Paas Jaake Us Mein Simat Hum Jaathe Hai...
Raastha Tumhi Ho Rehanmaan Tumhi Ho

prem listen these lines
PR
EM shocked to see the person sitting next to him.grip the hand more tight

Few hours back

ASH and MEHER enter premeer bedroom heard some one coming hide them self behind door .they saw PREM he just looked at HEER and went back

They both relaxed as they held their breath after 2 min when it was quiet again they walked to HEER kneel down

MEHER: HEER didi get up

HEER: shocked what happen? Why you are here? Where is PREM? PREM is he fine tell me

ASH: bhabi he is fine first you listen us

MEHER relax didi

ASH: PREET and HARMAN came to know about Sameer and they want PREM bhai to stay away from it .PREM bhai will never listen to anyone .so they plan to send you both to Canada to look up business there. didi you freshen up we did your packing last night when we came in your room PREET is waiting for you make it fast .

HEER: but why PREM didn't tell me?

ASH : PREM bhai letter for you didi read it after wards as you don't have time

I will keep in your bag.do you need any thing else bhabi

PREET: form door keep some more clothes

HEER still confused while washing her face looking at her fore head in anger PREM you are to much I will not for give you so easily .

HEER change and took blessing from maa and hug everyone.

They reached air port

HARMAN waiting bye bhabi take care and please be care full he does not see you. He is very sad.

PREET: tease him for few more min if you like

HEER: I am angry you both don't worry take care of my both sisters

HEER in lounge hide her self from PREM when she saw him wiping his tears could not hold her self wanted to walk to him but stop "nahi PREM you hurt me "

In plane

PREM: surprised still thinking he is dreaming or HEER is sitting next to him HEER is that you?

HEER: no my ghost how dare you leave me like this you cannot wake me up I will not talk to you shaking his arm

PREM: who was so happy he did not listen a single word just looking at her as if he has seen her for the first time

HEER: Don't stare at me like that. I am really angry. You know I cannot live without you but you left me and yes what is this? Took out his letter wave in front of him

PREM: came back to his senses: now don't read it snatches it from her hand but how you came here?

HEER: give me back let me read your first letter she realized they are in plane

PREM: no it is not a love letter it is a sad one and now I don't want you to be sad

HEER: hug him never ever leave me (cannot hold her self more)

PREM: hold her more tightly I love you

HEER: PREM people are watching us

PREM: really

HEER: yes messages for you gave him the paper and took his letter back and keep it in her bag

PREM: what is this? Started reading

PB

sorry we made you sad but we did not have any choice you never think about your self always thinking about other we want you to take some time out for your self and bhabi you had gone through great trauma because of D J and others. PB forgive us when you were sad we wanted to tell you but we hold our self as if we told you truth you will send Harman bhai and will say business no time for recreation in my life etc PB enjoy your trip and forget about home. we will take care of everyone after all we are your bhai trust us.

Your naughty students.

PREM smiled: see they are my baap

HEER: you were crying when I came and sit

PREM: yes i could not imagine leaving you but paused ok forget it

HEER: bus that was your love just came to know leaving me behind and going for business knowing she cannot live.

PREM: i never wanted to but had no choice.

HEER:PREM there is always 2 choice in each and every matter of life. it is you who decide. What is your Priority? You will listen your mind or your heart

PREM: shocked at her statement and felt guilt: yes you are right no body can force me if i say no.

HEER: hmmm put her head on his shoulder

PREM: HEER for give me

HEER: open her eyes PREM I will think (smiled)

PREM: ok as you wish relaxed as he saw there was a smile on her face .but thinking how correct she is if I had prefer her instead of my business HEER today I let you down sorry

HEER: shhh dont say like that as you listen me that is enough .PREM I want to sleep I am having head ache

PREM: ok sleep made her rest on his shoulder felt she is again warm warp his arm around fix her hairs dim the light both be aware from surrounding.

AIR hostess disturbed him as he was lost in staring him

Sir any thing

PREM: no thank you

sir is this lady with you as she showed PREM seat and he was alone at that time

PREM: yes my wife no thank you she does not want any thing just a blanket please .

Air hostess gave him he wraps around her as she was under medication she slept peacefully

Announcement due to bad weather flight diverted to Brussels PREM confused as she was sleeping if he again wake her up her sleep will be disturb he closed his eyes and listen from his heart let all the passenger go he picked her up walked through tunnel and to the hotel next to air port he didn't care people staring at him he walk through corridor

hotel staff showed him way to the room

PREM

PREM kept her on bed carefully without disturbing her smiled to him self as he succeed

Thank the guy who showed him way close the door and walk to his sleeping angel who just made him realized there is another life other than business. He lay down as he was too tired as for last 2 nights he didnot have proper sleep. He*ed her fore head and hold her tight and slept

After hours

HEER woke up surprised to see PREM sleeping holding her looked around confused where she shake PREM as hard as she could.

PREM: kya in sleepy voice

HEER: PREM wake up see where we are?

PREM: sleep HEER and let me too please

HEER: cont shaking him PREM where we are

PREM: open his eyes kya looked at her confused face wanted to tease her more but smiled bad weather flight cancel so we are in hotel staring at her

HEER: hmmm how I got here?

PREM in my arms

HEER: what? Fixed her hairs

PREM: madam you said two choices in each and every matter of life it is you who decide you will listen your heart or you r mind .I just closed my eyes and think from my heart put her hand on his heart .staring at her

HEER: blushed at his long speech and his cont staring hmmm

PREM: madam now any other question or I sleep

HEER: hmmm no you sleep still thinking what people must be thinking

PREM: really looking at her

HEER: yes really and let me too and don't disturb me

PREM: oh I disturbed you tickle her

HEER hold his hand and did not let him tickle her

PREM you shaking me like earth quake PREM wake up we are capture by aliens laughed

HEER smiled PREM you talk a lot

PREM: you just wait and see what all your PREM do hug her and *ed her

HEER: blushed PREM I am hungry very hungry

PREM: smiled ok you go and freshen up i will order

HEER: for how long we have to stay here

PREM:12 hours I think let me check that too you freshen up

*her fore head go did not embrace her

HEER: surprised at PREM

mood thinking he talk that much as she had seen a serious PREM. quickly change and came out PREM pushing trolley in with brunch item looking at her as she was dress in a causal shalwar kameez

She knew he was looking at her cleared her throat: if you had stare me please freshen up as I am really hungry

PREM smiled walked towards her she pushed him to wash room

HEER: that side PREM

PREM: hug and whisper I am in love with you again

HEER: thanks for informing no more buttering PREM I have not for give you yet remind you that .

PREM: ok take your time he smiled and went to wash room

HEER drying her hair walk to the window and the view out side made her shout PREM come fast

PREM who was at the door looking at her walked to her Put his hand on her shoulder

PREM:Bolo

HEER holding his shirt and pointing out side from right hand :i want to walk there

PREM looking at her not at view her face reaction making him smile: ok but first you eat looking at her craziness

HEER: no first i will walk

PREM: shocked at her sudden childish act "but first" paused she was making he crazy "ok lets go "

HEER: really are you sure looked at him

PREM: yes let's go

HEER suddenly hug and *him I love you I cannot live without you

PREM hide his tears: hmmm hold her tight

HEER realized what she did: PREM how much time left we will eat you are right then we will go.

PREM: got HEER let her free as he want to see her sparking eyes do what every you want I am with you?

HEER quickly tie her hair and picked all their things pack not looking at him as she was feeling shy at her act PREM looking out thinking

HEER: PREM come and eat

PREM: you are ready

HEER: yes offer him sindoor

PREM put a pinch and hug her lets go picked up sandwiches and pull her from her arm we will not waste time HEER as each and every min of our life is important

HEER : PREM wait let me

PREM : shhh just come with me

Everyone staring at them as PREM create a scene in morning picking her up in his arms

HEER: PREM why they are staring at us

PREM: they are jealous of us dear

HEER: hmmm smiled why they are?

PREM: I showed them a free scene teasing her in way he feed her as they don't have time only 1 hour to their flight

They reached

HEER : PREM I am very happy you always full fill all my wishes

PREM: what I did? I am so lucky that in small things you get so happy see your face

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HEER busy in playing with fallen leaves PREM took many picture and hided his tears

PREM :HEER you know what I want to sing this song

HEER: yes my singer friend

PREM smiled but you will not laugh

HEER: hug him why will I ? hmmm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PG6Vio_IN8M

link of vm on same song by ron

PREM

Tu, dil ki khushi dil ki pyaas tu

Mere tan mein meri saans tu

Kami thi jo mujh mein vohi to mohabbat hai tu

Zindagi mein meri aasmaan ki inaayat hai Tu

Dil ki khushi dil ki pyaas tu

Mere tan mein meri saansTu

Kami thi jo mujh mein vohi to mohabbat haiTu

Zindagi mein meri aasmaan ki inaayat hai tu

HEER smiled and sing hold his hand

Phir se nahin duniya bani, maheke zameen tere kaaran

Pehle kahan aisi thi main, main hoon haseen tere kaaran

PREM

Na na na na na na yeh sab jhoot hai
Main to hoon sada se ek paagal
Mera nahin kaam yeh, tum khuda ki ho roshni

HEER

Zindagi mein meri aasmaan ki inaayat hai tu
Dil ki khushi dil ki pyaas tuMere tan mein meri saans tu
Kami thi jo mujh mein vohi to mohabbat hai tu
Zindagi mein meri aasmaan ki inaayat hai tu, ho, ho ho ho
PREM
Yun to vohi har rang hain, harpal ka hai vohi mausam
Apna magar lagta hai ab teri tarha saara aalam
HEER
Na na na na pehle bhi aisa hi tha
Tu to tha hamesha mujh mein shaamil
Sadiyon se khoye the hum, humko ab mile zindagi
HEER :hug him never leave me I cannot live without you cried
PREM :shhh wipe her tears I wish our life pass like this *ed her hug her more tight

to be cont only if you will like otherwise the end

Dear friends

After watching Wednesday episode of kis desh mein hain meraa dil and rab na bana di jodi movie I wrote this part Hope you like it .dear readers I want to ask one question if I just revolve ff around PREMEER Would you mind as .as in every ff it is join family . do tell me .this idea is given to me by my dosth as love story PREMEER so why not just their story .

sorry for making you all cry and tease you all please forgive me all my silly mistake if i some how not able to up date or come on forum think ...........🤗 i love you all who leave comments who do not just read and who pm me i love you all .i never thought i will get so nice friends and so many sisters who had given me so respect 😭🤗 i love you all do remember me like a crazy sis an emotional writer 😭🤗

for give your di
Edited by brokenheart26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Jaanu...
🤗🤗🤗
Lovely update...wowww that is profound and very timely. I like the part about all the scenes of PREMEER special...I lik this line vry much "there is always 2 choice in each and every matter of life. it is you who decide." Heer rockd...her childish act😉...heer is hero of this part...y u r sayng this is end...evryone like this...so be strong and courageous🤗....
Relax yar..if u relax more...u will get more thoughts and u can pen more premeer spls😉...ha forgot to say...this is romantic😳 part too...
Urs
Sillu😊
Edited by silparavindar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi loved loved loved your update. Was really happy reading premeer's married life. Hope you continue to write more about premeer with little glimpses of other family to resolve all the issues left like veera and preet harmans weddings.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sooooooooo much nice updating naadia i loved it really
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Posted: 16 years ago
reserved di
just entered the forums after 2 days..so i will try to update comments by 2mrw

*edited*

ummmmmmm finally edited with my commments ..thoda busy thi FF par haath bh nagi laga rahe hoon just reading the posts and delaying the FFs even delaying my FFa also..now i read the part..
wowwwwwwwwwwww super di..so she is heer..thats really nice..loved the first part ...they are planning to sned prem out with heer to make stay from this matters thats really a smart decision by siblings 😳...letter is so nice .ghost😳😆..thats funny dialogue from heer..so smart girl..umm air hostess disturbing them thats bad let them enjoy this memoent .😳
wow heer donno how she came into the room😆..prem hain na😃..chioces part is such an awesome part loved it di ...even premeeer scene is marvellous yaar..ya everyone are jelous of premeer eternal love 😆...they are unique lovers😃..wow the place is nice and the song is superb di..loved the song..
di take ur time no need to say any sorry u are a amotional and marvellous writer...take ur own time
take care di
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so very well written part loved it immensely😳😳

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Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey!
Your back with another awesome update!
I loved it!
The beginning was sweet with Prem thinking Heer was a dream, on the plane....lol
and then we got to see the childish side of Heer..
Can't wait till the next update!
xXx
Sunayna
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