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pawanika

@pawani

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Posted: 17 years ago

heyy guyz this is my very first ff so plz bare wit me....

Basu family:

prem/ud basu: lovin son of prena and anurag....naughty but he has limits to girlz.....innocent infront of his parent nasty bhind their bac....falls in love wit Mukti later.....and runs kay channel....

Sneha Basu/Mehra: oldest daughter of prena and anu....is married to Omi Mehra ....has a beautiful daughter named after prena....

Prena Basu: lovin mother towards all her children and lovin wife and runs gurukul.....doesn't interfer in her children's life's that much...

Anurag Basu: lovin father and husband doesn't interfer in anyones life and lives his life as flirty as possible...

Deshmukh Family:

Mukti Deshmukh: lovin girl, has a bubbly life, and listens 2 watever he dad says.....her mom died when she was 8....and is a little spoiled....has a sister/best friend named heer.....

Heer Deshmukh: careless girl and funny....

Rakesh Deshmukh: Mukti's dad and Anurag best friend and alwayz wanted to marry his daughter to Prem....

Mehra Family:

Omi Mehra: sneha's husband and P2's dad....

P2 (Prena) Mehra: sneha and Omi's daughter....

Chorpa Family:

Lalit Chopra: Business man and has done many deals wit Anurag's/Rakesh's company that they became close friendz 2....

Gayatri Chopra: lovin mother and can't say much bout her

Harshad Chopra: lovin, romantic, flirty guy...and does everythin 100%.....

(some of these poeple will not be used as much)

try 2 update a soon as possible.....i need atleast 5 postz to continue guyz 😊

Pawani<3

Edited by pawani - 17 years ago

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komal

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Posted: 17 years ago

umm interesting charachters you both Prem and Harshad ...but you only have heer...it will interesting.. update soon

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-Grace-

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Posted: 17 years ago

hmm sounds interesting. i rele want to read part 1 so cont soooon. i liked the character sketches.

luv iqra

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Rinki

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Posted: 17 years ago

aah sounds cool

am glad u used prem for ud nd harshu for prem from kis desh

wnt be soo confusin lolz

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pawanika

@pawani

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Posted: 17 years ago

PART-1

It's 8:45 and prem is waiting 4 UD to come to school....

Prem-omg if UD late again today he is a goner... if ms.fathima finds out that he's late he's goin 2 get kicked out of class....

UD-watz up man??? u look tense....

Prem- i'm tense cause of u... u no if u didn't come on time 2day wat would have happened? U have 2 be serious bout ur last year in college....

UD-bro take a chill pill....Ms.F can't say anythin 2 me.....just give her ur killer smile and sit down....UD laughed.... plus to remind u i already have a job at my dad's office and so do u......i think u need to study that hard......

Prem- kk buddy.. can we go now???

UD-ye sure.....no one's stoppin us...he said lookin around....prem laughed at his actin...

AFTER CLASS......

Prem- god, Ms.F talks so much....he said wit boredem....

UD- u figured that out now???

Prem and UD continued their talk all the way to their carz and Prem told UD that he would meet him down at the club at 8....

Basu house….

Everyone was gathered around the phone….

UD walks in and asks wats happenin but everyone ignores him…..

So he screams wat is happenin here??????

Sneha walks up to him and sayz that Dad's best friend is comin to Canada from London and so are his 2 daughters …..so their planning things 4 them like their house and university transfers and stuff like that and just guess when they r comin???? Guess…..guess…guess….not letting UD answer…. kk never mind I'll tell u their comin in 2 hours…..

WAT???!!!!!! U GOT TO BE KIDDING ME????UD said out loud….

Sneha-and it is urs and Prem's responsibility to show them around sence me omi and p2 r goin 2 the U.S. for shoppin …she said happily…..

UD started whining that he wasn't babysittin girlz wit Prem plus me and prem r goin to the club 2night and little girlz can't go there….

Sneha: well there not little girlz… don't u remember that I told u that their in Unversity????

UD's face lit up that they're fully grown girlz….

Precap: UD and Prem might the girlz…….and r so happy!!!!!!!!

Hope u guyz like it…….

Pawani<3