guys,dis is my first fic ever on AA..nd i dint choose ne romantic,mushy topic..dis topic is touchy nd saddy..actually i wanted 2 show how azaan was dere 4 afreen through thick nd thinš³nd i dnt wish 2 drag d story also..indeed,dis is a very short fic..i will be ending it in 2 or 3 parts,here,i hv written d first part..i know it is very bad..coz though i hv written fanfics b4..but dis is my first try on azaan and afreen..so guys,plz patiently go through dis nd plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz let me know how is dis part..good or bad..criticism is more dan welcome..nd if neone wants 2 pm me wid ne suggestions or feedback dey r more dan welcomešnwy,here it goes-
PART-1
he was watching his wife through d open window of doctor's chamber..he was helplessly standing dere seeing his wife bursting in2 tears saying-i cant remember nething doctor..mujhe kuch v nahi yaad aaraha hai..he know he cant do nething widout seeing his wife heading 2wards death slowly..standing dere he remembered d day..d day dat changed his nd his lovely wife's life 4ever..
flashback-10 years back
afreen was lying on d bed as still as dead..her white,soft skin looked pale..nd her eyes were staring at azaan wid delusion..aap kaun ho?afreen asked azaan..azaan felt a jolt by her voice nd her glance..afreen,afreen..he said lovingly nd excitedly nd reached 2 embrace her in a hug..he thought she was joking wid him..but afreen moved away wid fright nd apprehension..azaan saw her scared eyez nd he froze..suddenly he was interupted by d doctor-mr. khan,i need 2 talk 2 u..plz cum wid me..
doctor,plz tell me..what has happened 2 my afreen?azaan asked d doctor impatiently..d doctor came near 2 him nd put his hand on his shoulder..nd wid a sympathy in his voice he said-cool down mr. azaan..sachko to manna hi parta hai..den he took a deep breathe nd said-mr. khan,ur wife has been suffering 4m a very deadly and uncurable disease called ALZHEIMER'Sā¦.it's a disfunctionality of the brain where the patient is unable to recollect anythingā¦all parts of memory are completely wiped put and nothing remains but a blank slateā¦azaan looked at the doc with white eyes but d serious look on his face told him dat the doctor was dead serious and that it wasn't ne joke played on him. He sat in the hospital corridor for hoursā¦just crying helplesslyā¦everything seemed so bleak and desperateā¦ the uncertain future hung over him and he thought about his world without herā¦his mind protested stronglyā¦no, there was no life without her..he straightened up..his thought process now getting clearerā¦his resolve strengthening..he had to make sure that his afreen was still thereā¦he couldn't lose so easilyā¦he had to fightā¦he went back to her and she stared at him with a blank lookā¦that look of unrecognition and detachment nd he felt he was losing his afreen..but however he controlled his tears nd sat down next 2 her nd said..assalam vaalekum,mainazaan khan hu..aur aap?
"um um vaalekum assalam..main..main..main .." she looked at him frantically trying hard to remember her name but all she got was a blank spot of gray..nd she cried helplessly.i cant recall nething..watching her crying helplessly..his love infront of him..nd he cud do nothing..he saw she was injected by d doctors nd was put in2 sleep..azaan never felt so helpless b4..
he cudnot tolerate it nemore..he went out nd sat on d bench nd thought abt deir glorios past..d moments dey spent 2gether..azaan khan..he cried like a baby..like he had cried never b4..he cried-allah,i am losing her..all d moments were being displayed infront of her eyez..all he cud hear her voice..her smile..he wiped away tears nd tried 2 erase d growing hollowness nd empty desires..destiny had betrayed dem..destiny has taken away his afreen..it was clearly evident dat afreen will never get bak her memory..it had been fading away by d unseen enemy..nd one day afreen will also be faded away just like d disease..dis thought gave him a jolt again..no,i cant even think of losing afreen..i hv 2 get her bak..nehow..my life will be nothing wid out her..i dont care what happens..but i will get her back..
after reading dis part..if neone wants 2 throw chappals,eggs,tomatoes plz pm dose things 2 mešš
Jhanak
