Fan Fic... Love Beyond reason UPDATED!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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absolutely awesome
loved it
pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok here it is....

Azaan was outside with Sania... She was going on and on about when they were finally going to get hitched... Azaan was getting tired of her talks and burst out...

"Bas karo Sania. Im sick of your crap. Don't you know I'm married? That lady you called yr bhabhi is my wife now. Get that? She's my wife now."

"Yeah I know... But she said that she's gonna reunite the both of us. She knows about our past. I was shocked at first when I found out that the both of you were married but then she explained to me that it was a compromise between the both of yr families to keep everybody happy."

"She said that? But--"

"I know, unbelievable right. but that was what she said. Now why are you behaving this way? don't tell me you don't love me anymore? Don't i have any importance in your life anymore?"

"Its not that... Its just that I need some time to think about things... and you are my first love and i can't love anyone else the way i loved you..." (but deep down he knew that was a lie)

He can't believe that Afreen could make such a big decision about their lives without consulting him... But that is so unlike Afreen... But then why would Sania lie( We know that She made up the story..Afreen didnt say anything of that sort.) He's just so confused.

Sania merely smiled at his reaction towards her piece of news... Well Afreen didnt say anything of that sort but since that was gonna happen so why the delay? Let him know that the title rigtfully belongs to her.

"afreen... you may have gotten married to Azaan.. but he still loves me up till today... Pointless for you to wait or hold on to him... Just wait and watch... He will be mine and mine alone..Ahahaha..."

ok... gotta go now... be back soon.. coz im having a splitting headache...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmmm......sania making things up, eh??? well....hope azaan doesn't fall for it...make him smart in ur fic, lol.....
can't wait fer ur nxt update....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nasha, Very nice fan fic.... Thank you and please do continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very cute drama serial so far! 😊 I hope you feel better!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nasha 😊
bahut khoob yaar!! keep it up 👏 👏
thanks alot for such a great fanfic 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
your doing a good job. please continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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HEY PLZ POST D NEXT UPDATE SOON...CANT WAIT NY MORE 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey pple... so sorry for the late update... was sick and busy after that... well here it goes..

The last scene, Saniya was making things up... Azaan was confused and Afreen realising that she has to fight for her love...

Azaan was pacing in his room pondering over Saniya's words... Is it really true that Afreen is willing to let him go? Did she not feel anything when they were together? Was that twinkle in her eyes when she sees him a lie? Or is she sacrificing her love for his sake?

Afreen was thinking whether she should let him go or fight for him. If she lets him go, she will regret it. But if she holds on to him, he will never be happy and neither would she. Does he even love her? Deep down she knows she loves him but she rather walk away than hurt him. Afterall, isn't love all about seeing the loved one happy? Suddenly there was a knock at the door. It was Saniya.

"Bhabhi, can i sit here and talk to you for awhile?"

"Sure, why not?"

"You know bhabhi. me and Azaan we shared so many moments together that it is hard for me to forget him. But I know he's married to you. So I am walking away from yr lives so that you can live happily. I'm really sorry if i've hurt your feelings while i was here Bhabhi."

"No Saniya. I am wrong for coming in between true lovers. I've been in love and i know how you are feeling at the moment."

uhh... after this im lost for words... can someone help me by PM-ing me some ideas so that i can continue? I have the next scene where a confrontation goes on but i need a filler in between so that my fic wont sound so hollow... Please??/

Thank You!!!😊😊😊

Nuresha~

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Posted: 17 years ago
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weeelll.....hmm....my suggestion wud b not to drag this fic too much...seeing the serial is enuf...v need sum realllyyy gud scenes in teh fanfics (ur doin a great job)....
how abt making afreen and azaan just have a heart-to-heart talk.....
i honestly feel that azaan gets kinda mad wen he comes to knw tht afreen is ready to let him go nd ges up to her and questions her......nd tehn she makes one of the speeches abt how she wnts him 2 b happy nd stuff...nd then he shud tell her tht his happiness is wid her nd no one else or smthn like tht.....

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