Surprize!!!OS:DV ki saachi aur IF walay :)

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my dear JLZ-ians!!namaskar/sat sari kaal/good morning/evening/night/asalalikum!!!
tina here!!😊
i know all of you are happy with the upcoming spoilers and to double your happiness here me nd sama present to you a very new and fresh thing...our combined effort,our new OS..hope u have not seen such an OS in this forum before..so i request you to please give it a read..it wont be as boring as you think...and please leave ur reviews..it ll encourage us to write more and we ll be relieved that our so much effort isnt getting into drain...i was so busy with my chinni minni(my two cousins...ll tell their story later)nd sama had a deadline to follow..still we managed it just for you guys...hope u like it...fingers crossed😳
the inspiration to write an OS was obviously given by me,idea by samaa and the rest is our joint effort...please do comment..its samaa's 1st work..pms ll be send by samaa as i hate to send pms...want your full contribution here because ruslaan ko send kerna hae guys...forum ki izzat ka sawaal e...😳

now whats new that we are presenting here??there you have saruv,like other works...but our main characters include us all...we forum members...
sama,tina,preity,vinee,prodipto,nancy,nidhi,priya,priyanka,vimal,zaraa,anu di and kunal...sorry if i left out anyone..pm me or comment here and you ll be added asap...
and one more very very special and new idea..u can edit your character here...u have to write ur own part by urself so that there isnt any element of bias in the story...set your imagination free and get it to work to make it a masterpiece...now the ball is in your court..u can carve your character and get yourself recognized...ur part ll b added in the story once u pm me or write it in comments here...
nw happy reading😊
nd happy writing your part...story is awaiting 😊


IF GALS and BOYS SPECIAL OS:
A tribute to hamara payara SARUV and to all IF GALS/BOYS...
Tina and Sama ke taraf se...IF land mein seher.hope it ll be a trendsetter!!😊


Starting from Thursday sequence :

DV is super sad standing at prabhu nivas gate to get a glimpse of saachi... He kept standing there whole day without eating and drinking... Being unnoticed he fainted on the road... In the mean time IF gals(sama,tina,preity,nidhi,vinee,zaraa,anu,priya,priyanka,adi,ifrini,soapbubble) are very much concerned for DV and they already took there first action , mission rescue DV, because it was intolerable for them to watch DV crying hard...😭.
Suddenly a helicopter came and landed on dils roof🤣...But nobody gave a damn!... Two gals came down from the Helicopter on the road ,😎 Tina and Sama, pulled DV in the Helicopter and then gayeeb😆...Dils also came out of the house, but hum loogo ko jo karna tha vo karchuki thay... the only clue Dils got from the Helicopter ws,big "IF" written on it

Dilz ran worried to Saachi, Aji and Naani and informed them that two ladies kidnapped DV. They called the police and informed them... So they cannot figure out who those mysterious gals can be...and who is " IF "

On the other hand, Tina and Sama were flying with DV, who was lying senseless on the bed in the helicopter.. And we didnot want to wake him up then...
Finally we have landed on our 8th star Hotel 80 story high helipad, facing Indian Ocean, where all the IF beauties Preity, Zaraa and others were waiting with flower petals in their hands...as we came with dv supporting him on each of our shoulders,the girls showered him with petals and hooted DV, DV yay!!. We rested him on a chair nd tried 2 bring him bck 2 consciousness again... When he woke up,he was stunned to see so much girls around watching him keenly ..he dinot understand where he was??and thought he has been in the fairyland😆 it was a ball room of world's first 8th star hotel .. All beautiful ladies around him introduced themselves as IF gals, who could not tolerate his sufferings the way he cant tolerate Saachi ji crying 😭...they took great care of him,served him with the wrold's best food and talked 2 him about various topics a lot.
Hum loog usse samjate hein, Abb to jee le zera DV... Hamare saath bhi time pass karle...he was deeply touched wid their gesture..he thanked all of them and was very much pleased..he started talking and smiling like before...our very own cute,smiling dv was back...this made us very much happy...
Here we will request all IF Gals to participate there imagination with DV... Flirting, romancing, dancing
**Some romantic moments picture on dance floor. *****Here all the games and play will come from us☺️
Now it is time for music and dance . Here we suggest which songs we want to dance with DV...*****Here all funny sequence between us and DV☺️
so here comes the 1st sequence from priyanka...
Priyanka's POV

"We all are there in that ball room of that luxurious Hotel everyone excited, but i am just looking at him silently, quietly admiring him, his charm, his handsomeness, his sweetness, his cuteness.
Our eyes meet for a sec. for me everything starts to move in slow motion.I actually pinch myself for a reality check, yes am not dreaming. He suddenly leaves everyone behind and comes to me.
Strikes a convo. compliments me for the dress i am wearing, that red dress. He shares that this is his fav colour and i am looking stunning in it.
Coincidentally music in the background is "Lady in Red" by Chris deburgh. It was all predestined I guess. ( kaise abhi hum sab forum wale saath the aur ab woh sirf mere saath hain ha ha ha)
He then with all his charm and a naughty smile on face asks me" may i have the pleasure of dancing with you lady".I think music had something to do with it.
I am floored by his, dont know, whether by his presence, his compliment.I nod in acceptance. He holds me in his arms, we dance, just the two of us, gazing into eachother's eyes, completely lost.
He showers me with a few more compliments. He teases me by saying your cheeks have turned red, itni sharam(fullto DV ishtyle), itna sharmayengi toh hum aage kaise badhenge ,Priyanka
aur phir humare cheeni, meeni aur Shaurya ka kya hoga. We both started laughing. It was our world, full of laughter, beauty, romance.
Felt like a princess, and he my prince charming.Time just stood still, felt like eternity. My dream has finally come true."
watching us doing so much nd enjoying the IF boys(kunal,prodipto and vimal) got jealous and made a plan of theirs 2,a plan that wud ruin our plan of enjoying with dv.. They decided to go get Saachi and show her what her dearest dv was doing with all these gorgeous IF gals...when they narrated everything 2 her,she became super jealous and angry and decided to go see that all by herself... as she approached the door,she ws stopped by ajji..she held her hand tightly to stop her..
saachi whinned..
s:ajji please..ajji dekho na yeh log kia keh rae!ajji me ko dekhna
a:tou acha e hai na saachi woh apney c choti larkiyon main reh ker tum ko bhool jayye aur apni new zindagi shuru karey..
s:per ajji ager woh larkiyaan uskey laiq na hui tou??
a:chorr na bara
s(crying):ajji me ko meri life jee lene do..mein nahi reh skti dv k bina..ajji mein marr jaun gi..please ajji
ajji after much thought left her hand...
a:ja bara!ja aur jee le apni zindagi..ja aur apna dv unn churailoon c cheen k le aa...mera aashirwaad teray sath hai bara...
(haww!!ajji called us churails..ajji not fair but then everything is fair as long as its related 2 saruv😆)
She ran towards the boyss' helicopter and went with them where we were having fun with our dear DV..Finally she reached the ball room where the dance was going on..she saw dv busy dancing with the girls and the girls enjoying his attention..
by that time the song dil ki yeh goli chali neeno ki bandok sey 4m movie ramleela was playing and dv was dancing with tina and sama..saachi was shell shocked on watching this..
s:rukk jao!!yeh sab kia ho raha hai??
the dj stopped the song and dv looked back to see who was shouting only to see a red,angry saachi standing behind him with her hands on her hips..
dv:saachi ji!ap yahan kaisey??
s:dv tumhein sharam nahi ati yeh sab kerty huy??
d:mein kia ghalat ker raha hoon saachi ji?sirf dance e tou ker raha hoon..isme kia paap hai??
s:dance koi paap nahi per tum itni sari larkiyoon k sath dance ker rahey o!bhool gayye hamary baray main??itni jaldi bhool gayye mujhe aur hamary pyaar ko?
d:nahi saachi ji!me tou nahi bhool per ap bhool gayye k ap ne e tou meray ko bola tha k mujhe bhool jao...buss wohi ker raha hoon...
DV said that with relaxed face...his signature dv smile was back as he was as naughty as before...
d: Mein jee raha hoon ,inn sab beautiful ladies ki saath..jo mujhse bohat pyaar kerti hain and apki terha mujhe daanti b nae hain...
s:dv tum bhi na!pagal o gayye o??yeh sab tumhari fans hain aur mein tumhara love..how dare you do this to me??
d:i dared because you threw me outta ur life...
s:errr...
and she came forward,held dv by his collar and crushed her lips into his,giving us nd dv the biggest shock of their life..at first dv was shocked but slowly he gav himself in for the moment and reciprocated the kiss with full enthusiasm...all the kiss lovers were on 7th sky watching this live in front of their eyes...
after sometimes they parted to get in some fresh air..everyone of us clapped and congragulated them for getting back again...
tina..i.e. me who disappeared from the scene after witnessing her most favourite scene came with a very beautiful chocolate fudge cake baked exclusively by herself for dv,and asked saruv to cut it...both of them were elated with her expression..
dv:saachi ji!meet all my crazy fans...(nd he introduced us all one by one..boys and girls)
dv:i was touched by their expressions...and the way they write FFs,SSs and OSs on us and upon their request,i m going to make an IF id 4 them and i ll be reading and commenting on their works for sure...
we(in unison):yay!!!love u dv!!!
then they cut the cake and fed each other nd then dv gave a bite 2 all of us from his own hands...then sama comes up with the starters but before that preity showers saruv with rose petals and vinee comes up with party poppers...prodipto shows fireworks written we love u saruv!!!nancy made a special HALWA 😉 for this special occassion!!😆
then we all surround them and the dinner table come down from the the up, roof, with special futuristic foods and orchestra/ Bithoven... Now it is time to enjoy the meal. and we all dance together..then saruv bid audieu to us.thanked for our contribution in bringing them together and left for panchgani in our helicopter escorted by tina and samaa...

Here we actually played cupid...IF Gals and Boys as Cupid in DV/ Saachi's love story...


so guys!how is it??hope you like it..errors omissions excepted...all type of feedback is welcome..please write your respective part with your full imagination..
didnt get time to cross check..ll correct the mistakes later...
please hit like and comment if our effort is worth while...
thats a request..
love❤️
tina and samaa
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Taha0023 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear all, thanks for the comments.. We are loving it. Tina is an expert, but I never wrote an OS and first time participated with her, and feeling very excited. It was really good fun to work quite many hours together, Tina and me. We became friends. Doctor and Architect combo, was really nice. Please give your valuable comments and share your imagination...Fly high with DV and Saachi.

Forum mein Single girl kaun hei, jo DV ke saath special moment plot karna chahti hein...?
uski romantic scene mein plot karna chah ti hoon.. Please response to the post , if you want something matches the real story line of the OS...We will do it for you for free.🤣 But if it is a long que then we will choose some one named first. 😆
Edited by sama0023 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okk...I m really exciting Tina.
naneta thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Muje koi bhi character chalega...bas DV ki behan mat banana. 😆 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: naneta

Muje koi bhi character chalega...bas DV ki behan mat banana. 😆 😉


nahi banati..infact i gave u something u can add for urself ie ur dream dance with dv and dv ka kiss b!!😉
the ball is in ur court now..u can add whatever u like for u nd dv...make sure u do that...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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preity showers saruv with rose petals
Aww really it's touching and I can say "we r connected" 🤗 ❤️ beautiful OS and a brilliant effort girls(Tina, Sama) kudos to you... 😳
Edited by preity_d - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: preity_d

preity showers saruv with rose petals

Aww really it's touching and I can say "we r connected" 🤗 ❤️ beautiful OS and a brilliant effort girls(Tina, Sama) kudos to you... 😳


thnks preity dear!!means a lot...
but ur part is still waiting in the OS...nd it is to be written by you...
so be quick...want creativity 4m ur side 2...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Tina drawing people used to be very busy in weekends, I don't get a minutes fursat... Will try yaar, but how much SOON that will be dunno

But mere story pe me heroine...

hero : 2
Heroine : 2

main lead : DV and Saachi
parallel lead : Ruslan and Preity 🤣 marna mat tune hi bola creative banne ko 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: preity_d

@Tina drawing people used to be very busy in weekends, I don't get a minutes fursat... Will try yaar, but how much SOON that will be dunno

But mere story pe me heroine...

hero : 2
Heroine : 2

main lead : DV and Saachi
parallel lead : Ruslan and Preity 🤣 marna mat tune hi bola creative banne ko 🤣


dear preity!feel free 2 write nd add anythng about urself...again i repeat URSELF😆
u cn add ruslaan too if u want but dv nd ruslaan 2gether??wont it feel unreal???😳
dont kill me...we cn make another story about u nd ruslaan bt am sure the mods r gonna ban it...😆cx writing fiction work about real life characters isnt allowed on IF,thou we used 2 write in my previous forum..dunno here..bt we cn still ask the mod...
bt here i want ur character for this OS...plx...
it d b highly appreciated as i plan 2 get the link or whole os tweeted 2 ruslaan so he may know we love him nd his character a lot...plz cooperate..⭐️
tinatartari thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nd if u still want ruslaan in the OS plx specify here in comments how do u want it???nd i ll giv it a try...
hw ll ruslaan enter??lyk dr jekyll nd mr hyde???lolx...

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