FF:Andaaz Pt 33&Epilogue/Pg193&204 (22/6)

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 17 years ago

#171

I read part five too Rima it's very nicely written I could not understand Prachi's elevated irritance towards Milind true he's passive and appears aloof but the real truth is different I think Prachi should not be fooled by appearances.So she gave him tit for tat her balloons for his icecream fiesty girl! Nice twist with Krish being the brother though adoption does seem late and out of the blue but I'm sure you'll be covering up that nicely too. 😉

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Rima

@PourQuoi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: blind horizon
I read part five too Rima it's very nicely written I could not understand Prachi's elevated irritance towards Milind true he's passive and appears aloof but the real truth is different I think Prachi should not be fooled by appearances.She is judging him unfairly I'll admit that but it will change...when Milind changes and he is trying to believe me...I'll do a part on him soon tooSo she gave him tit for tat her balloons for his icecream fiesty girl! Nice twist with Krish being the brother though adoption does seem late and out of the blue but I'm sure you'll be covering up that nicely too.Yes I have a plan for that but wont reveal it just yet... 😉

Thank you hun!

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#173

Hey i am so glad you updated 2 parts so soon. Luv ya. And love the parts.

I have a feeling there is more behind Krish's adoption. Could it be that he really is Prachi's son and her parents adopted him to protect her.

I enjoyed the scn between Neev and Prachi (surprised considering i don't like to see my doll with anyone else). wanting to know more..but reveal it in your time because i also want to see the interaction between Michi.

Angry Prachi...lolz...don't get to see that. 😆 I wonder what Milind thinks of Prachi. Though you have mentioned that he is quite amused by her behavior and almost doesn't care..but he notices her.😳

Hey you promised me Shreya and Prachi bonding. Where is it. I know it must be next part. 😃

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jessi

@Jessuu

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#174

Wow how did i miss both the last parts!!
sorry for not commenting earlier!!!
Omg Rima..This FF is soo good..im loving how the story is progressing too..
Prachi is NOT krish's MOM?! wow..could have never guessed that!!
Milind is such a hottie..😆..love the way he talks to prachi in the rain..!!
and prachi showing much attitude..i can just imagine both of them!
Yay! Cant wait for these 2 to fall in love😍😍
Thanks Rima..keep updating and making our day!😍
Love you,
Jessu<3

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Monu-SunNaa

@Monu-SunNaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#175

Hey Rima, read the last two parts..very curious to know what went wrong in btw NP seeing as Neev is no longer a part of Prachi's life...like how u related the past rain incident..and Krish is Prachi's brother...interesting.

Thanks.

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canadianbeauty

@canadianbeauty

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#176

Very interesting FF.....i am waiting eagerly for the next part :)

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jennie

@*rankan*

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#177

just caught up with this fan fiction it is wonderful continue soon

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-Deepa-

@-Deepa-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#178

Read the last 2 parts. Very interesting.
Part 5 was really a suprise. I never thought Krish might be Prachi's brother. What a twist!!

Prachi is so angry with Milind's behaviour. I wonder why she doesnt have any sympathy for him as she knows his side of the story from Sukriti. Yeah, but he is not good with Shreya..poor kid.

So Neev is the person in Prachi's past. I wonder where he is now..is he dead too?

Very well-written parts, Rima.

Waiting for the next part 😊.

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tweety_me14

@tweety_me14

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#179

Hi rima! This part was intense...Loved the way you portrayed both the rain scenes- past and present...Wonder what happened between Neev and Prachi...
And Milind and his attitude! [Had I been in Prachi's place I would have fallen for him flat! 😉 ]...But our Prachi is also no less! They'll make a great couple! Waiting for them to bond!
Oh but before that- Im waiting for your next update!! lol...

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Rima

@PourQuoi

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: jinc118
Hey i am so glad you updated 2 parts so soon. Luv ya. And love the parts.

I have a feeling there is more behind Krish's adoption. Could it be that he really is Prachi's son and her parents adopted him to protect her.

I enjoyed the scn between Neev and Prachi (surprised considering i don't like to see my doll with anyone else). wanting to know more..but reveal it in your time because i also want to see the interaction between Michi.

Angry Prachi...lolz...don't get to see that. 😆 I wonder what Milind thinks of Prachi. Though you have mentioned that he is quite amused by her behavior and almost doesn't care..but he notices her.😳

Hey you promised me Shreya and Prachi bonding. Where is it. I know it must be next part. 😃

As promised, their bonding will be in the next part, it will be mostly Michi and Prachi and the children.

I'll explain Milind Prachi thoughts in next part too...

glad you liked Neev Prachi too...thought people would trottle me for it...but they seem to have liked it....

Soon there will be increased Michi interaction

Thanks JC! 😊

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