FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 164

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Thanks RIMZ🤗 luv you.
ahhh I'm getting shiveriessssss😃 and that too from the first sentence...could be because I'm super excited and also because I truly missed Neev and Ayesha...so I'm going to thank you in advance for doing this for me!🤗Love you for it. now you know you don't gotta do that...we both love Neesha just the same. But you'r welcome anyway.😆😆

Neev's concern for her just gets me...ahh🤗what a cutiepie...and I just love the conversation between the two...abhi thak madam ka gussa mere cutiepie ke saath reh kar bhi thanda nahin hua?😆...But I like it...the contradiction in their personalities are bought out perfectly when they're together. well i don't feel that being in love and being dedicated to one another means you forget yourself in that relationship. To me Neesha are as close to ideal as they can be...and that involves them retaining their individual prespectives.

She just wanted to run into his arms but he was standing speechless. 'Neev..' she called him and their eyes met. But suddenly he turned away. Ayesha didn't understand and she walked up in front of him and saw him wiping his tears quickly.

That is like my absolute favourite bit...😍 OMG...Why? why do you do this to me? Make me an emotional mush! And I'm actually feeling teary thinking they could have had this in the show...but It'll just make me angry so I'm gonna push that thought aside...😭 I'll repeat myself yaar...no point in fretting...it aint happening.😔but lets look at it this way...now we can imagine Neesha to be how we wanted them to be instead of leaving them at the creatives mercy.😳😆😆

Another bit I really liked was,
He raised her face to look into her eyes 'Our baby will never crave for love like we did because this baby has us for parents.' Ayesha smiled imagining her small family. 'I'll be a good mother right?' she asked softly after a few moments.

That was perfectly put and I felt that for both of them it was like that but with Ayesha it was obviously to a greater degree, but they're both kindred spirits. ya to Ayesha just a little bit more...i had various ways of bringing that out...i thought of all the different dialogs...but seriously it turned out so cheesy.🤢 And i also wanted to keep this part consise as possible. That gets hard to do with dialogs.

Back with more in a sec😉 Aaj Muu khola hain tu mujhe chup nahin karva sakoge aap log😆 i don't mind...i like to hear what you have to say.

**Shockingly I kinda feel for Alaap and though if he tried harder I'm sure he could have found other ways to save the company but I feel as though he thinks he has no other option and since people already think that he's a jerk, ya thats pretty much his reasoning...and as i'll explain in the next update he really didn't have the luxury of time...so he grabbed the first solution that came his way. he cant sink further so he might as well save the company.Kinda feel sorry for the guy... He is not bad...afterall i miss Bharat terribly so i won't make him a villian anymore.

Have I ever asked you whether you're going to get Sukriti and Vishal together?😕 Because I have been thinking it , perhaps I haven't voiced that particular thought but I get a feeling when I read the scenes...i don't know if you asked but yes thats the intention...probably. Vishal is such a inspiration! Love that guy for his attitude I'm so glad he's fighting for his daughter and he is just going to be amazing with her. Please for the love of god dont let anything happen to saaya (beautiful beautiful name btw!) lets c about Saayah and yes Vishal is going to be wonderful...but the name is actually suggested by my best friend. She wants to name her daughter that. I think its a gorgeous name too.😃 I wanted to steal it for my cousin's daughter but my friend blackmailed me.😆

How could Prachi be so clinical when it would have been tearing her up inside...the woman has tremendous strength and I applaud her for it, I would never be able to do what she does. Kinda pissed me off when Sukriti took the pictures too😡GRRR...I can understand why she's pissed but I'm so mad at her right now! I know...i want to cry so badly for her😭 SHe does have trrrrrrrrrrrrrremendous strength..yes ...but she's at her breaking point...or will get there soon. Don't be mad at Suki...her anger is of ignorance...but now that she knows things...she'll make it up to Prachi.

OMG!!OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG😲😲😲I knew IT!! You told me he was okay!JCCCCCCCCCCCCC....😡😡😡 OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG...Prachi's the donor? I thought it might be alaap's chance for repentence but 😭😭😭omg!...Prachi...lolz...there is still more to know Rimz..so will take your complaints and remain quiet. There is a reason for why its Prachi and not Alaap...besides Alaap didn't know about Ritwik's condition till Prachi told hiim recently.

JC, I was in a way both expecting and not expecting that...but the update was very well written and I thought the scene with the doctor and sukriti was very well explained, if a little lenghty but I'm not compaining, lolz..it was a bit more lengthy with a better explaination but then i thought it wasn't needed. I can understand the need for detail in that bit. Thank you sooooooo much for the update...can I ask whether the title to this chapter is a reference to a film? I feel as though I remember it in a song or something? wow Rimz..your memory is awesome. But its not a film...and the reason i used that title will be in the next and last part of this chapter.😃

😊

p.s...What do you think of my Anandi siggy😃... Rims...she's looking like a doll...gorgeous.

Originally posted by: chituku

ok i can't analyze like everyone it will be short

girl is it fun for u to make me cry...it's an emotional part... iam cried for real... my hubby is like gosh stop crying...even my kids are asking my kids are asking mom y r u crying while u r reading.. they thought iam reading a mail and something 's wrong ..my poor babies..the emotional fool iam what can i say to tem. .....awwwwwww i feel for prachi..my poor baby....hun u need to reveal y she is doing all this making millsi ,suki hate her pllzzz i can't see my baby's pain..it's toooooo much for me... anyhow gr8 part hun ...i only comment abt prachi coz u know me...so i don't think i hav to explain.. ritwik go bac to prachi mama... i soooo hate suki..that lil twitt forgot everything prachi did to here

Originally posted by: blind horizon

JC get your butt in here and update.

Originally posted by: KillSandy

No Comments....as No update....JC how come u forget ur own FF. 😕