Originally posted by: optimist
I am back after finishing my kitchen duties which given my aversion to cooking is quite a pain. If it had'nt been for my son and my niece, I wouldn't have bothered with cooking at all.
Now to your FF, While this part was good and the Neesha part was defiiitely way better than what you PMed me earlier, Well i only edited what you told me to.😃 I somehow got lost mid way. I may have forgotten it but why is Prachi anscious that Anjali should be back before PL returns? Does Anjali know Prachi has left Mishra House? No it was because PL doesn't know that Anjali went to Shimla again. It was for Anjali's sake...and for PL's. PL would be mighty angry to know that Anjali not only disobeyed and went there but had been there before for a good couple of months without telling her.
Alaap is still an enigma. Has the guy really changed of the good? Looks like he did not have any real feelings for Suki since he is willing to marry for money to save his company. Would he have pursued Suki if it had not been a fact that she is loaded, thanks to her brother? His guilt for messing up Prachi's life has not stopped him from now going ahead with this marriage of convenience. Suki is better off without him. His part will be better explained in the next update, I won't say more. Like one of the dialogs said by Prachi...maybe Alaap and Suki were just not meant to be.
Prachi's reactions to his decision have ot been dealt. Is she upset or has she taken it in her stride? Whatever she told Suki about how she felt about his marriage needs to be weighed against her need to hide the truth and let Suki think the worst of her. So I dot strictly buy her argument. Yes what she told Suki was to get Suki angry. And that is not her real reaction to Alaap's marriage. I'll deal with it next part.
Looks like you are planning to hook up Suki with Vishal later. A good thing too since the baby will get a mother and Suki can have the satisfaction of taking care a child who is in as much in need as Ritwik was although she was ot there for him. From the point of view of the two adults, both Vishal and Suki have suffered in life in their own way and will sure understand each other better. So their union should be good for both of them. Yup thats what i thought too...and so its going that way. I'll get to them only later tho..my current focus is Michi.
Coming to Ritwik's ailment. This is where I was confused and had to check back on your previous chapter. You had mentioned that Prachi and Alaap had visited a neuroligist regarding Ritwik, which suki happened to note. Now you are saying that Ritwik has a nephrological problem. Does he have a neurological problem as well? no...you are not confused and glad you noted it...so i guess this is why everyone though Ritwik had some mental issues...Prachi did take him to the neurologist...and thats where Suki saw her...but the nephrology problem is a separate problem. So far Suki only knows about the nephrology issue. Why Prachi took him to neurology will be revealed much later.
As to the kidney donation I guess Prachi is not in a position to donate it right away because he is still a kid. I am presuming that adult's kidney cannot be transplanted to a child. Actually they can. If Ritwik was in need for a kidney today the adult kidney could be transplanted and actually would be prefered over a child's kidney. but the only reason he is not getting a transplant is because its not absolutely necessary. His kidneys still function enough for him to live pretty healthily without having the transplant. All he needs to do is take his meds and eat a proper diet. A transplant is a big operation and there is always the chance of the organ being rejected so unless absolutely necessary to save his life...they won't do the transplant.
If this is linked to the reason why she wants to leave Milsi, then can she not have the **** (I am not spelling it out here since you want to maintain the suspense) before the time comes for donation, which in any case is not going to be anytime soon? no she can't...and this though is linked in a way to her reasons...its not the actual reason.
All in all although this part seems inconsequential I think it holds an important clue to things which are to unfold in future. Will wait to see where this is headed. yes yes...thanx.