MP FF:Jab They Met Pg271 Chap 57 31/5 - Page 18

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Posted: 17 years ago
Wonderful update 👏. I just love the light conversation between Prachi and friends. I too love Geet..i am imagining kareena kapoor as Geet when i read this ff😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Charmed...

I love Geet. 😆 I love the way your ff is going. Can't wait for more. 👏 👏 👏



Thanks charmed.. glad you liked this part..!

will update really soon..!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

hey Shweta,

I finally got a chance to read Part-5. It was...well...it was different(That's the word i was looking for!)not in a bad way but in a very good way... 😳 Glad it was different in a good way and the other way.. lol..!

I love the concept of friendship btw Geet, Mru and Prachi..Sometimes, it reminds me of my friends and how we reacted to each other in any kind of situation... 😳 Well my friends and and i are the same.. most of the interactions are drawn from my own life.. 😃

The storyline is progressing in the absolute right direction. Especially, as you are slowly building the relationships and the introduction of characters..

don't worry..you are doing an excellent job! Everyone has a different style of writing and yours is awesome. 👏 .Keep up the good work... 😳
Aaaww thank you..!

Shweta..you are a wonderful writer..So keep up the good work.....I think this milind is too cool a dude...Like him this way too......😉. He's an absolute sweetheart..!

I think Prachi is very a strong character that you have penned out..I love women who are that way..Who can stand up for themselves at any point of time..Will wait to read what happens next..

Exactly.. She's an educated woman of today..! and she knows that she has kick ass friends..! lol..!


will update really soon..!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Wonderful update 👏. I just love the light conversation between Prachi and friends. I too love Geet..i am imagining kareena kapoor as Geet when i read this ff😆



Hey deepa..

so happy you liked the chapter..

and Karrena Kappor as Geet.. lol.. i'm not a big fan.. but loved her in JWM..! lol..!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey my faithful readers...

thank you so much for the great comments..

and the next part will be up in a couple of hours..! 😃

your great comments are motivating me to write faster and faster...!

Shwetha
Edited by critically-sane - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey guys..

well.. this is a short part as well..

hope you all like it..!

Chapter 6

Prachi got home and apprised her mother about the details of the day. Her mother was horrified at first but Prachi managed to calm her down. Her siblings of course had one question, were they still going to be able to afford their lifestyles? She of course set their minds at ease that they were still rich. Her stepsister Ayesha however seemed to gloat that Prachi had effectively run their business into the ground. She even had the gall to tell Prachi that maybe she should take over management at Shah's and Prachi could stay home and take care of the house. After all Milind Mishra was her friend and he would definitely listen to her if they wanted the company back. Ayesha made sure that Prachi knew that she was indeed "good friends" with Milind. Prachi would have loved to put the obnoxious woman in her place but today she didn't have the energy.

She walked up to her bedroom and got ready for bed. She sent a quick email to her friend Neev about the events of the day. Neev was her childhood friend who was now working for an investment firm on Wall Street. They were close but staying on the opposite sides of the planet made keeping up with each other's lives difficult, but they were making it work. She didn't want him hearing of the take over from another source. Knowing Neev it would offend and hurt him and she really didn't want to do that.

Her cell phone rang and it was Geet who quickly "conferenced" Mrudula. Her friends obviously thought she was on the verge of a nervous break down or else they wouldn't be smothering her like this.

"So Prachi was the big bad wolf cute? You never answered that question!" Geet asked.

"Geet! I don't want to talk about him and for the love of god don't want to know more about your patients. I love you hun but I don't have the stomach for some of your stories." Prachi countered, all the while thinking that if Geet had scene the Greek god in her office she would have probably fainted.

"Guys, we still have to plan for the concert. We are still going right?" It was Mru the music freak. Missing this concert would break her heart because of the music she'd miss while Geet would be heart broken that she couldn't see Adam Levine in person and Prachi would be heartbroken that she missed an opportunity to hang out with her friends.

"We are definitely going Mru. How about we all take the day off and waste it? Lunch, movie and then go to the concert. I really need a girl's day. Geet hun you think you can take a day off? I mean you were with me the whole day." Prachi asked

"Nah. I was off today after pulling the night shift. So technically I wasted my day on your drama woman! And you don't even tell me if the ogre was cute. You owe me big time." Geet laughed.

"Oh My God Geet! Yes the man was hot! Are you happy now you maniac?" Prachi said laughing along with her.

" Its ok hun. Well it was going just fine till Mru decided to take away my phone privileges like I was a 6 year old." Geet complained.


"Hey! You were falling asleep. I thought you need the rest! I'm sorry for thinking about you." Mru declared.

"Ok I forgive you." Geet offered graciously.

"Geet I really didn't mean…" Mru started to say something but never got the chance to finish.

"Its ok Mru I know you feel bad" Geet teased, "So Prachi, what did the resident wicked witch of the west say? I'm still all for having a house dropped on her!" Geet and Mru weren't big fans of her new stepsister. In all fairness, they had tried to give Ayesha a fair chance inviting her to lunches, dinners and movies. Geet had even gone a step further and asked Ayesha if she'd like a job at one of her fathers companies. But Ayesha had not only turned all their invitations down, she had also insulted them more than once.

"Girls please I need to get some sleep. It's been a very very long day. Lets call it a night and talk in the morning." Prachi guessed that her not answering the question about her sister's behavior was all answer the other two needed.

The three women said their good nights and went to bed. While the other two slept peacefully Prachi kept having dreams of the handsome ogre in her office. She woke up in a sweat and cursed Geet. Obviously her best friend's near obsession with the opposite sex was wearing off on her.
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Posted: 17 years ago
luved this part too doc 😊 😊 i luv the friendship the three frnds share and prachi dreaming abt millsi. 😲 she says he is hot. wooowww prachi. i soooo wanna see how she reacts when she see the greek god next time
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chituku

luved this part too doc 😊 😊 i luv the friendship the three frnds share and prachi dreaming abt millsi. 😲 she says he is hot. wooowww prachi. i soooo wanna see how she reacts when she see the greek god next time



Shweta my sweetheart.. you are always among the first to read and comment on my chapters..! i luv ya..!

And i'm so glad that you like this part as well hun..!

And why wouldn't Prachi think Milind was hot..! lol..! she is human after all..!

And who knows what will happen the next time these two meet..!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Doc...now, i know why you consider yourself as Mrs. Shabbir Ahluwalia... 😆 😆 😆

Seems to me that you have been dreaming about him at night... too much..it seems.... 😆 🤣

Beautiful friendships...i truly loved that aspect..its like sharing all your deeper thoughts about men and everything else...i love that...i am becoming to nostalgic thinking about my friends... 😳

Beautiful once again..now..let's see what happens when they really fall totally for each other.. 😳
Edited by panache - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
❤️

The friendship between them is lovely...I'm glad your Prachi actually as a life and friends! Great Job!

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