FF: Ek Paal... (MP) Prt15 pg28 8/15 - Page 20

Oh Hunny...that was awesome...just Brilliant...I really want to applaud you for handling this situation perfectly. I felt as though it was real and true and certainly not melodramatic.

Now Neev is a character on the show I adore but here I consider him flith, now the credit for bringing out his character so well in this goes to your writing. 😊

I also love your use of song and both were apt and went well with the writing...I especially loved the first song...absolutely beautiful.

Milind is as usual as we expect him to be, strong and depenedant but Prachi in this is something to commend. She has suffered so much and yet she is so dignified and strong herself. I love her and absolutely feel for her. Whatever she has been through has bought the two closer and shows Milind's compassion and love for her. Prachi is in no way any less then she ever was and I am so glad, they've both expressed their feelings.

Thank you for the update hun... 😊
👏 Rima.

brilliant part Jaz, im so glad milsi got the opportunity to beat the hell out of neev, he deserved it and im glad the security gaurds feigned ignorance at milsi's threat 😆 i hope the divorce goes through soon and that michi get married, they derve some happiness 😳

thanx for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: candyfloss

prachs is completely ruined n used. 😕
cudnt feel michi chemistry.

im sorry but didnt you say you stopped reading this ff a while back...you thought it was a NP ff and not MP...anyway...that is your opinion...and its fine...but not everything in real life is all happy and perfect...that is why i wrote this ff...people have pasts they need to deal with...not everything can be love @ first sight and just easy going from there...

Originally posted by: kim02

finally......prachi is free! and milind is there for her now. hope neev gives her divorce soon so milind and prachi can get married and live happily ever after 😊

yaar...happily ever after for sure...just give me time to get there 😆😆😆...but she is free...or will be soon...milind hai naa 😉

Originally posted by: wande

coming back but still thank u 👏

he he...haven't checked the other pg yet...hopefully you came back 😆

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Loved it Jaz!
Very well written!
Thank God Neev got all that he deserved..! He should be SHOT!
Awesome update!
Really enjoyed reading it!!

thanks yaar 😊😊...glad u liked it...he should be shot hun...you wanna do the honors...im sure everyone will consider you a hero...doing a good deed for man kind...at least for michi fans 😉😉...

Originally posted by: Charmed...

Lovely Jaz! I'm glad Prachi's free of Neev and he got what he deserved. Beautifully written hun! Loved the bit with the security guards and nurses 😆 Thanks for the update!

😆😆...i had to add the part about the nurses and guards in there...couldnt resist...i personally wanted to run neev into the wall face first...but alas...couldnt really do it...next time 😉...thanks for the compliment yaar...really appreciate it...😳😳

Originally posted by: sethigurleen

very well written
it was a good update.
😊 😊 😊
hope neev would divorce prachi

aare yaar...neev kaise divorce nahin karega...milind will kill him he doesnt...just wait as see 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: KC294

i loved it jazzy...
brilliant...
i hope the divorce goes smoothly...
but knowing you...
there's prolly more drama to come
pls continue soon

VP thanks yaar...ahem ahem...i do love drama but dont u think this ff has had enough drama...😕😕...i was thinking some romance, i owe it to you all...nahin chahiyeh toh bata doh 😉😉...

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great Part! 👏
Yayy!!! Millind saved Prachi.
Loved the security guards and the nurses bit. 😆😆
Hope the divorce goes smoothly, but by the looks of it I dont think so.
Anyway Please try to updat sooner. 😳

Anjali 😊

yup...of course he saved his Pari...who else would...😳😳...😆😆😆...im i so bad...everyone thinks that the divorce will be hell...come one guys...have some faith 😉

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Jaz it was a long wait but worth it I'm happy Prachi is gonna be free of that idiot Neev. Hope Milind rushes on with the divorce and it is finalized soon. Do update soon darling. 😊

glad that the wait paid off...i cant say sorry enough for the delay......i see u are thinking on the correct track...milind rushing...just wait and watch 😛

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey jaz
gr8 part...
cont.sooon

thanks 😃

Originally posted by: Pori

wow Jaz
me is speechless
it was wonderful as ever
I hope Neev gets out of Prachi's liifee soon

haila...nahin i dont like speechless...i want to see the words 😆😆😆...neev is as good as out 😉...just a little more patience 😛

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Oh Hunny...that was awesome...just Brilliant...I really want to applaud you for handling this situation perfectly. I felt as though it was real and true and certainly not melodramatic. wow...yaar...thanks for the compliment...i really appreciate it and i am glad that you liked it 😳😳

Now Neev is a character on the show I adore but here I consider him flith, now the credit for bringing out his character so well in this goes to your writing. 😊 yeah...neev is awesome on the show but i needed a bali ka bakhra...sadly he was it...thanks again for liking my writing...it means a lot to see these comments...😃😃😃

I also love your use of song and both were apt and went well with the writing...I especially loved the first song...absolutely beautiful. woo hoo...someone noticed my songs...its really had to come up with them...they have to be just perfect or else im not satisfied... 😉😉...the first song is an old fav of mine 😃

Milind is as usual as we expect him to be, strong and depenedant but Prachi in this is something to commend. She has suffered so much and yet she is so dignified and strong herself. I love her and absolutely feel for her. Whatever she has been through has bought the two closer and shows Milind's compassion and love for her. Prachi is in no way any less then she ever was and I am so glad, they've both expressed their feelings. milind is milind...no doubt about that...our knight in shining armor...😉😉...yes prachi is one strong woman...i applaude women all over the world who are in situations like this because sadly, this is a reality...😭😭😭...pyaar hua ikraar hua hai 😛😛...aaga aage dekho hota hai kya 😊

Thank you for the update hun... 😊
👏 Rima.

glad that you liked it yaar...thanks for the comment 😃

Originally posted by: shabzc1

brilliant part Jaz, im so glad milsi got the opportunity to beat the hell out of neev, he deserved it and im glad the security gaurds feigned ignorance at milsi's threat 😆 i hope the divorce goes through soon and that michi get married, they derve some happiness 😳

thanx for the pm 😊

thanks yaar...milind couldnt let that oppertunity just pass him now could he...we all would have done it for him if he had let neev go 😉😉😉...as they say...ignorance is bliss...right 😆😆😆...i agree with u...MP is due for some happiness..ill see what i can do 😉

JAZ

hey all my readers...hope you haven't forgotten about me...😃😃😃...sorry for delay but got caught up in school and other ff's...but i am not neglecting you all...

work for the next update has already began...i plan to finish it in my philosophy class today and post by the evening...😃😃😃

hope you all are still interested...

a big thanks to you all for your comments and support...i really appreciate it 🤗
JAZ

hi JAZ, I have been reading, but I have not got a chance to comment, put it down to me being a lazy bum these days

Looking forward to the next update. 😊

hey jazzy u updating, will be waiting.
btw the last part was awesome.

hi Jaz,how r u? im looking forward to ur update 😊

Hun your last update was lovely

Waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

hi JAZ, I have been reading, but I have not got a chance to comment, put it down to me being a lazy bum these days

Looking forward to the next update. 😊

good to see you comment yaar...i thought i had lost another reader...😭😭😭...but good to know that you are still here...lazy bum sydrome huh...i am the queen of that...😉😉...join to club 😆😆

Originally posted by: alveera

hey jazzy u updating, will be waiting.
btw the last part was awesome.

yaar...you...i have missed you...havent seen comments and i got worried...thought you lost interest...😕😕...i remember at the beginning you were one of the readers who really motivated me to keep this ff going 😳😳...so thank u 😃

Originally posted by: shabzc1

hi Jaz,how r u? im looking forward to ur update 😊

aare yaar...poocho maat...😭😭im tired, busy and hungry...all i do is go to school, then hospital for clinical or to work...when i am home its homework and study......but finals are coming up so then i get one week off...chuti! 😃

Originally posted by: Anuskha

Hun your last update was lovely

Waiting for your next update

thanks yaar...i think this is the first time you are commenting...😕...i think...but good to see you...update is next 😃
JAZ