**Bidaai -P 9 pg14-Milind - Prachi talk** - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part – II

Recap – Alaap asked his mother to make him something to eat while Prachi prayed to Lord Krishna about her version she saw last night.

"Where is Bhaiyya?"

"Hi Sukriti"

"Hi Tina,

How are you?

"Good,

What about you?"

"I am absolutely fine and where have you been for past few days"

"Actually I was at my cousin's place for few weeks and I need a big flavour from you."

"What kind of favour?"

"Well I need to borrow your History notes and chemistry notes"

"I could give you my history notes right know, but…"

"But, what's the problem?"

"The problem is that my chemistry notebook is at home so I can give it to you tomorrow class."

"Okay thanks!

But, who are you waiting for?"

"I am waiting for my Bhaiyya."

"I never knew that you had a Bhaiyya"

"Yes, I have one brother and he is the world's best brother."

"Umm… that's nice but tell me how dose he looks"

"Well what can I say about him but he has long black hair (A person riding his motorbike), round face with huge muscle, and top to bottom his anger stays in his nose. (Stopping two people arguing on the road by yelling at them)"

"Do you have a picture?"

"You don't need a picture to see him because there he his"

"Where?"

Sukriti points at her brother driving the motorbike.

"Man you are lucky to have a brother like him…so strong, smart and nice."

"Thanks,

Bye know,

See you tomorrow in class"

"Bye Sukriti and don't forget to bring the note"

"Okay"

Soon as Sukriti sat behind her brother see started yelling at him for coming late, but her brother came up with a good story that her sister felt sorry about yelling at him.

"What's the matter Sukriti?"

"Bhaiyya, I am very sorry for yelling at you."

"Sukriti, it's okay"

"I mean it"

"I know so relax my cute sister"

Three hours later Prachi arrived at her friend's house soon as she stepped in the building and whole bunch of flowers fell on her.

Sorry if the part is kind of short but I promise the next part will be much longer. Anyways thank you so much for liking it!

Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow that was a great start...
I liked the first part..And the pics you included was very awesome..😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_eijaz_anita

Wow that was a great start...
I liked the first part..And the pics you included was very awesome..😳

Well thank you
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great Job! Kashish! Very interesting! So, I assume that the guy who gave the mobile to prachi was milind!! interesting! I like your style..your's has much more dialogues rather which i enjoyed a lot! Great work! keep it up! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: panache

Great Job! Kashish! Very interesting! So, I assume that the guy who gave the mobile to prachi was milind!! interesting! I like your style..your's has much more dialogues rather which i enjoyed a lot! Great work! keep it up! 👏 👏

Thank you so much my friend😛 (Is it okay to call you as my friend?)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jai-Bani_Kasamh

Thank you so much my friend😛 (Is it okay to call you as my friend?)

You sure can call me as your friend!! 😊. you can call me Pana or Pana di or sangeeta or any other name you would like.... LOL

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: panache

You sure can call me as your friend!! 😊. you can call me Pana or Pana di or sangeeta or any other name you would like.... LOL

Thanks Sangeeta

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I missed the first part 😭 .. but now read the two parts together 😊

Gr8 part kashish.. if I may call you so.. I loved the pictures that u included in the first part.. it gives a different feel..

Please continue soon.. looking forward to read the next parts 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jai-Bani_Kasamh

- Well thank you Muneeza, I thougnht I was pretty bad at my start but thanks a million for making my day. Anyways my name is Kashish and it was nice meeting you.

Hey just read Part 2 Kashish....very very good part though you could've highlighted Milind more bas bike per aaya or gaya...😕 not fair na....hope there's lots of Milly darling in the future.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shananubis

I missed the first part 😭 .. but now read the two parts together 😊

Gr8 part kashish.. if I may call you so.. I loved the pictures that u included in the first part.. it gives a different feel..

Please continue soon.. looking forward to read the next parts 😊

Yeah totally its alright if you call me Kashish. Thanks for liking the picture idea. 😆

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