FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 51

Originally posted by: panache

Muneeza....I am going to read the entire FF once more and then comment!!! 😳

Ofcourse I'm waiting for you Sareeta and Ryka to comment take your time.

Muneeza, I forgot to ask will you be starting a new FF on MICHI soon?😳 Ok please don't mind my greediness, you write soo soo beautifully and you write keeping the characters in mind which is commendable that I will miss your great writing😭

hi blindhorizon, finally managed to read the epilogue of till death do us part and it was brilliant, to be honest i read the same part 3 times because i absolutely loved it 😊 everything was perfect, right from manish throwing a tantrum for a sister, naming his sister preeti, milind joining in and teasing prachi, michi deciding on having another child, milind promising manish a sister by his next birthday right to everyone sitting at the dinner table. it was equally nice to see neev move on in life with somya and the highlight of the episode has to be saket,milind and neev sitting together and having a laugh, i hope they show a scene like this in kayamath in the near future, because if they had the chance i think milind and neev would be good friends.

now u have finished this fanfic off, im going to follow sweet ema and request another fanfic from you!,i wasnt able to comment on all ur parts individually because i joined the kayamth forum late but i hope to rectify that and coment on all the parts of ur next fanfic (providing u write one 😊, please say u will, please dont deprive us of ur creative writing skills)

once again, thank you for writing such a lovely fanfic, you gave us what the kayamath creative didnt, which is MICH being happy 👏 👏

Muneeza darling.....👏

To a fantastic, excellent, mindblowing FF coming t a beautiful end...👏

Aww....a most fitting end to the story....you took us through......

Aww..love my litle Manish...his likeness to Milliand and his oh so innocent questions...😆

It was so good to see...Neev so happy...along with Milliand , Saket and him all on ht ebest of terms and good friends.....👏

Suk and Prachi...doing what they do best..😆 They were truly long lost friends or sisters..😆

Hope to see you come up with another Michi FF soon dear....😉😃

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Muneeza, I forgot to ask will you be starting a new FF on MICHI soon?😳 Ok please don't mind my greediness, you write soo soo beautifully and you write keeping the characters in mind which is commendable that I will miss your great writing😭

Hey Yasmin well as soon as I see another cliffhanger I might just get inspired and start writing another ff , oh hun I don't mind you at all asking for another one I understand what it feels to end a good book and think "Oh that's the end then!"

Originally posted by: shabzc1

hi blindhorizon, finally managed to read the epilogue of till death do us part and it was brilliant, to be honest i read the same part 3 times because i absolutely loved it 😊 everything was perfect, right from manish throwing a tantrum for a sister, naming his sister preeti, milind joining in and teasing prachi, michi deciding on having another child, milind promising manish a sister by his next birthday right to everyone sitting at the dinner table. it was equally nice to see neev move on in life with somya and the highlight of the episode has to be saket,milind and neev sitting together and having a laugh, i hope they show a scene like this in kayamath in the near future, because if they had the chance i think milind and neev would be good friends.

now u have finished this fanfic off, im going to follow sweet ema and request another fanfic from you!,i wasnt able to comment on all ur parts individually because i joined the kayamth forum late but i hope to rectify that and coment on all the parts of ur next fanfic (providing u write one 😊, please say u will, please dont deprive us of ur creative writing skills)

once again, thank you for writing such a lovely fanfic, you gave us what the kayamath creative didnt, which is MICH being happy 👏 👏

Thank you Shabz for such a detailed comment it really leaves me very satisfied to read as to what appealed to the reader and what did not, thanks again for describing it so beautifully. 😊 Hun it doesn't matter that you started reading late what matters is that you took the time to read and furthermore comment on it.Mehnat safal ho gayi meri.😊 Sure hun I'll try to write another one as soon as I see the potential to or a glich in the story that needs redemption.😊

Originally posted by: kubare

Muneeza darling.....👏

To a fantastic, excellent, mindblowing FF coming t a beautiful end...👏

Aww....a most fitting end to the story....you took us through......

Aww..love my litle Manish...his likeness to Milliand and his oh so innocent questions...😆

It was so good to see...Neev so happy...along with Milliand , Saket and him all on ht ebest of terms and good friends.....👏

Suk and Prachi...doing what they do best..😆 They were truly long lost friends or sisters..😆

Hope to see you come up with another Michi FF soon dear....😉😃

Love

Krishna

Krishi darling you and your pink dil khush kitta sii...😊 thankyou so much hun for being such a loyal reader and ofcourse the moral support your words offered was very inspiring. I must admit I wrote part 15 just for you and Yasmin and someone else who requested it because I was like I think they're right it's high time they did it! 😆😆 You liked the end well I wondered how you ppl would deal with Ayesha out of the picture but it went well and I'm genuinely glad that it came out as I wanted it to be.Love you all for being such wonderful friends.😊

Hi Muneeza dear...I'm late again yaar .Finally read your epilogue, it was absolutaly amazing, stunningly marvellous part ...you gathered the whole family toghether in the Shah pariwar in this last chapter...Wow!! showing everbody is happy ...it was a remarkably a happy ending 👏 ... I think it was a fantastic idea ...Prachi and Milind s sharing a wonderful chemistry...prachi s guilt conscience killing her inside and feeling responsible for Ayesha s death until she gives birth to Manish 👏 ...you portrayed each and every character very nicely 😊 ...baby Manish turns out to be exact like his daddy...cute baby 😳 . Words cannot express how much I loved this fan fiction . Every part was so different ...I must say it again you are absolutaly a brilliant writer 👏 ....Thank you for this memorable FF and please do continue writing. 😊

Originally posted by: gulrani

Hi Muneeza dear...I'm late again yaar .Finally read your epilogue, it was absolutaly amazing, stunningly marvellous part ...you gathered the whole family toghether in the Shah pariwar in this last chapter...Wow!! showing everbody is happy ...it was a remarkably a happy ending 👏 ... I think it was a fantastic idea ...Prachi and Milind s sharing a wonderful chemistry...prachi s guilt conscience killing her inside and feeling responsible for Ayesha s death until she gives birth to Manish 👏 ...you portrayed each and every character very nicely 😊 ...baby Manish turns out to be exact like his daddy...cute baby 😳 . Words cannot express how much I loved this fan fiction . Every part was so different ...I must say it again you are absolutaly a brilliant writer 👏 ....Thank you for this memorable FF and please do continue writing. 😊

Aw hun you finally read it well as the saying goes "Der aaye durust aaye" what more could I ask after such wonderful comments from you all, thankyou so much for appreciating my work so beautifully. I'm sure I'll write soon.😊

Muneeza,
finally i read enuf to write something. 😆 I know i am such a lazy bum...I got up to Part 12 (whoot whoot!!!) Newayz, i don't need to repeat about your tremendous writing. I think i told you that after reading just the first part. But i really love your pace. The story is not absolutely predictable..and has some nice twists when you don't expect it. My favorite scn so far is the part there Prachi's hair gets stuck on Milsi's kurta. 😳 Nicely written, i could imagine it. Only one complaint...but you can't blame me because i am one of those curious readers who loves to jump to the next twist in the story...its only that i find Milind's introspections a bit lenghty. 🤔 I feel like skipping them (ok don't kill me plz) but i do make myself read cause i know it important to know what the character is feeling. But thats just me. Will let you know about the rest after i read it.

Let me tell this tho...by the time i got up to Part 12 i got excited that my throat went dry. Will read further after having my juice. 😆

Part 13 and 14: 😭 The hospital scn when Milu kissed her 😭😭😭 rula diya yaar. I could feel his anguish at the thought of loosing her. Its been a while since any piece of writing made me cry. So i hope i don't need to complement you in words. I want to give you a whack for making me cry but then I love you because you resolve their misunderstandings so soon. 😃 Can't wait to see what Prachi has planned for him. But gotta go to work now...will read later.

JC