a fanfic of NP jodi!(2nd part)

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our fav couple NP is in the brink of getting separated now but in our hearts they are inseparable n wil always b together. so in order to keep the jodi alive with us i wrote a fanfic in neev&prachi fan club. its just a scenerio of how NP gets together.

here it goes.its quite lengthy so who ever reads this pls bear with me 😳 more often than not my imagination runs ahead of me 😆 (especially wen it comes to NP jodi 😉 )
it takes a lot of time to write in hindi so some of them wil b in english

"neev is in the sangeeth ceremony wen he gets a phone call.he gets surprised by the caller n goes out to recieve it.the call is from swati.
swati: mujhe thumse milna hai
neev: swati . ithni dhino ke baadh? kya baath hai?
swati: phone par nehi bathaa sakthi. thum mujhe hotel seagull me milo.sangeeth ke baadh. 11 bajey. mey thumara inthizaar karongee.
the phone gets disconnected b4 neev can say anything. he wonders what swati wants to say after a long time.
after the usual dances in sangeeth is over neev tries to go unnoticed but niharika asks him.
niharika: kahaa jhaarahee ho?
neev: ek dhosth ka phone aayaahey. thodha pareyshaan hai. bas une milne jhaaraheehoon
niharika: abhi? yey dhoosroan ke bhaareyme sochna bandh karo.apni zindhagee key bhaareyme soch. thume aaj ayesha ke paas rehena chahiye.
neev gives her an unbelievable look and leaves without a comment.
prachi who is seen outside takin a breather sees neev leaving n wonders where he's goin alone
when neev goes to the hotel room swati opens the door. seein swati after a long time triggers flashback of their accidental meetings in neev's mind. swati tells him to enter.
swati: kaisi ho
neev: teek hun. kya baath karnai hai?
swati: pathaanehi yey baath thumse kaise kahun....
neev: thum mujhe baroasa karsakh thi hoon. (then he realises what he said)
neev: meyra mathlab hey...
swati: reheneydho...aghar mujhe thumpar baroasa nehi hotha tho me thume yahaan bulaathaa nehi..
neev: pls swati jho bee hai kehedhaalo
swati: mujhe thumaari madhath ki zaroorath hei
neev: konsi madhath?
swati: kuch loag meri peechey padhee huveehey. jhahaabee jaaoon vo loag peecha karthee hey
neev: kon hai yeh log?
swati: varun ki gaathileyn
neev gets shocked
neev: what! kab kaise?
swati: varun ne prachi se shaadhi isliye kar raheethee ki usen kisine paise diyaatha.
neev: kisne?
swati: pathaa nahin. lekin woh inder shah ka kuch kareebee aadhmee hai. usne meyre varun ko maardaalaa. (swati starts crying)
neev tries to take this all in. he's stil shocked about the turn of events.
neev: kisne maara varun koh?
swati: pathaa nehi. prachi ki haadhiso ki baadh meyne varun se rishtha thodh kar london gayeethi. woh waha meyre peechey aayee. maafee maangkar dhubara rishta jhodhnaa chaha. kai koshishey ke baath mey apni dil ko rokh na saka. koi apne pyar ko ithna thadap they huvey kaise dheyksakthey hai (upon hearin this neev thinks about prachi n how she decieved him)
swati continues: aakhir me meyne use maaf kardhiya. mujhe aaj bhi voh dhin ainey ki tharaa saaf dhikai dheythi hai. kithni hush thi hum dhono. varun mujhse milne aaraheethi. ek nayee zindagee banaaney. saarey gam or giley shikvey bulaakar. lekin kismath ko kuch aur manzoorthi. rastheyme uski ghaadhi kaa accident hogayee. bohoth zahamee thee vo. jhab me hospital pohochaa tho vo apni aakhri saas leyrahee thee. marthey marthey varun sirf ek baath dhohoraheethee , ke vo aadhmi ab thume nehin choalheynga. woh mujhse us aadmi ka naam bathana chaatheethi lekin kehenehi paayaa. police report me likaa tha ki varun ki moath ek accident tha. koi witness ya accident karne waala nahin mila. lekin me jhaanthi thi ke woh kisiki ek saazish thi. varun ki jaane ki dho meheneybaath phone calls aana shroo hoagayee. ek aawaaz. anjaanee si. vo mujhe dhamkiyaa dheyrahee thi. mey dhar gayee aur ghar badhal dhiya. sheher bhi badla. lekin woh phone calls hameysha mujhe peecha karthey pohonch paathee hai.
neev: police...?
swati: woh meri baathon ko serious li nahi leythi. mujhe paagal aur mentally unstable kehethey hai. kahaasey yey calls aathey the wo loag pathaa nehi kar payee. bohoth soch ne ke baath mene socha india vaapas aakar us insaan ko dhoondhgi jisne prachi se shaadhi karneyke liye varun ko paise dhiyatha. meri varun koh useeeney hi maara hoaga.
neev is in tears now.
neev: thum mujhse kya chaatheeho?
swati: jab me yahaa aai tho patha chala ke inder shah bi ek accident me margaee. shaayadh woh accident me namara balki maar dhi gayeehey..varun ki tharaa..
neev is thunderstruck n dumbfounded
swati: me chaatheehu ke thum is gaathil ko pakalh ney me mera saath dho...meri madhath karo. thumarey siva yahaa mera aur koi dost ya hamdhard bi nahin hai..
wen neev didnt say anything.
swati: agar mere liye naasahi tho kumse kan prachi ke liye..
neev: (in anger) uska naam bhi mathlo. prachi jaise bewafao ke liyen mere dhilme koi jagaa nahin hai.
swati: prachi ne thumse koi bewafai nehin ki hey.
she tells him how she saw sanjay n prachi in the hotel. wen neev stil looked dubious she shows him the sanjay-prachi vid that alaap recorded (dont ask me how she got hold of it 😉 )
swati: abh thume yakeen hogaya ki prachi ne koi bewafai nahin ki hain.
neev: samajhme nahin aathaa ki kya karoon. mujhe is maamleyme soch na hai.
he turns to leav but stops n tells swati
neev: mey thumaraa saath zaroor dhoongi. pathaa nahin kiyun lekin mujhe eysa lagthi hai ki meri vajai se hi thumaari hushi chaleyngai...me kabeebi thume choat pohochaana nahi chaathi thi.
he then exits leaving swati in tears.
wen neev comes home niharika, purvi n ayesha are with the panditji discussin the marriage date. panditji says that there's a mohurath for tomorow n if it doesnt happen tom then the next one is two months away. neev tells that he wants to get married as soon as possible. this gives quite a shocker to all present. he even further adds that he wants to get married in the shah houae (ayesha is seen with a thinkin expression).
prachi enters her room where suddenly she hears her voice tellin sanjay her plan of gettin neev-ayesha married. a shocked prachi wonders aloud who got hold of the cd.
she hears neev's voice from the back.shocked prachi turns.
neev: achchi drama racha hai thumne (he's very sarcastic). gurbaani. pyar ke liye balidhaan dheyna. meri hushee ke liye hamaari pyar ko qurbaan karna.
he's so angry that he grips prachi's shoulder
neev: thume pyar ki balidhaan dheyneyme bohoth khushi milthey hai na prachi. mere zindagee ki saath kheyl ne ka bohoth shoakh hai na thume. abh is khel ko uski anjaam me dhoongi. kal raath aat bajey mera aur ayesha ki shaadhi hai ( prachi gets shocked) aur saath me thumara aur sanjay ka bhi..
prachi: lekin neev...
neev: mujhe kuch nahin sunna. agar thum mujhe kisi aur se shaadhi karthey huvey dheyk sakthi ho tho ..mereliye kisi dhoosre se shaadhi bi karsakthey ho.
prachi: nahin me aisa nahin karsakthi.
neev: karna tho thume padegi. aur woh b eykhi mandap me saath saath. agar thumne shaadhi nahin ki tho me thumaari pyari behenaako baree mandap me akeylaa cholhdhoogi. aur aisa karne me mujhe koi rokh nahin sakthe. thumbi nahin prachi. thumaare paas choabees gantey hai soch ne ki liye. kya karni hai. thum sanjay se shaadhi karongi ya phir naa karkey apni behen ki izzath bari mehefil me ujaalhoagi.
neev turns to go but stops n says without lookin at prachi.
neev: aur ek baath. dhono shaadhiya isi gharme hoangi. ek saath. thume chinthaa karne ki koi zaroorath nahi hai. sab intizaam me kar dhoongi. shaadhi ka jolhaa kal subha pohonch jaigi.
he then leaves without looking back. prachi is faced with a dilemma. how can she marry sanjay wen she loves neev so much. in the other hand if she doesnt marry sanjay neev wil not get married to ayesha. if she has come this far can she b able to pull this off two. she got engaged to sanjay. wil she b able to marry him too .
( i thought of writing the prachi crying bit after neev leaves but thought v hav seen her crying enuf now. she must hav spent a bucket full of them now 😆 )

wat happens next will b comin soon 😛 . ill take a break now. hav been writing for more than an hour now. wat do u guys think about the scenerio. sorry eijoo fans. didnt want to kill varun but couldnt c how he would fit into the picture now. if any1 else wants to continue u r more than welcome 😳

do pls tel wether u guys liked this or not. this is my first attempt at such a thing. if i hav wrongly written any hindi lines its cox im not from india n doesnt no the hindi grammar well 😛 if u guys like it then ill post the next part soon 😊

the continuation part is also there in the fan club now. if u wish to read it u can go to fanclub section n read it. ill post the next part soon 😳

pls do comment on this 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey! I was waiting for this to be posted over here!
Its Awesome......though I have already read it at the club......But still I enjoyed reading it again ........Especially as I know what is going to happen next.......

Will be waiting for more.......

Its really gr888888888!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey its awesum yaar
i really liked it 👏
pls continue it 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome fanfic! really great
pls cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey its awesome!!!!!!!!u definitely''need diz 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like the story i think ekta wiil take this idea from u
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys heres's the continuation of the NP scenerio's 😳

when neev leaves in anger prachi breaksdown. she thinks herself how can i marry some1 else other than neev. then she gets flashbacks of ayesha tellin how she wil snatch neev away from her, niharika yellin at prachi that she's the cause of all bad happenings in neev's life.
prachi tells herself that if she has to sacrifice herself for neev's happiness then so be it. ill do anything for him ( why dont u get married to him instead his happiness is you😡 ).
next morning shah house is seen decorated beautifully. prachi is starin into inder's photo wen a face falls into it. she turns to find ayesha. ayesha taunts prachi.
ayesha: mene sochatha ki thumari pyari haathoso shaadi ke liye sajoon gi. lekin afsoas . heir cholho. neev ne thumarey liye kuch bejahei...
ayesha steps aside. prachi sees two women holdin shaadi ki jolhaa n other jewelleries.
ayesha goes n takes the jolhaa , comes n drapes it on prachi's forehead.
ayesha: abh sirf ek chees bakhi hai.sanjay key haathsey bari huvee maang me sindoor. lekin dont worry. uska bhi intizaam hogayi hi. mene ..i mean humne sanjay ki ghar sab saamaan beyj diya hai. woh time pe pohonch jayegi. dont worry behena. isbaaru shaadhi me koi rukaavat nehi ayegi. trust me. pichli baar ki thara sindoor se pehele shaadhi nehi rukeyngi. thume pathaa hai neev se thumari shaadhi kiyu nehi huvi. woh isliye ki neev ki haathonse sindoor sirf ek insaan ki maang me baregi aur woh hu me.
ayesha turns to inders photo n says.
ayesha: aaj inder shah apni dhono betiyon ki shaadhi dek kar bohoth hush hoangey na. zindagi mei koi hushiya ine naseeb thu huvee nehi. kamsekam aaj thode hushi mile ussey ( she's very sarcastic) ayesha leaves.
prachi is seen gettin ready for the marriage. neev is seen in his room thinkin. dadi enters prachi's room.
dhadhi: kya thume pathaa hai ke thum kya kar rahe ho?
prachi just stares into dadi unable to speak
dhadhi: math karo ye sab kuch prachi. me jaanthey hoon ki thum ye shaadhi apne marzi se nehi kar raheho. jho rishta pyar se naabandha balki samjothey sey bandhaa ho tho ve kabi zindagi me rang nehi barengi. is shaadhi se thume dhuk ke siva aur kuch nahi milengi.
prachi is silent n doesnt utter a single word. a frustrated dhadhi gets angry.
dhadhi : aaj thumari harkatho sey mujhey thumari pitha yaadh aathee hey.
prachi gives a look.
dhadhi continues : aaj se baais saal pehele thumare pithane bhi ek pheysla liya tha. apne pyar ko chodkar, bulaakar kisi dhoosre ki saath zindagi guzaar neka. me maan thi hu ki meyne kuch hadh thak is pheysle leyney ko inder ko majhboor kiya tha. aur ye phesla uski zindagi ka sabse galath phesla huvaatha. woh kabibi zindagi me hush nehi rehepaya. aur anthme uni phesle ne uski saaseybi cheenli. thum woh galthi dhubaaraa dhohoraa rahi ho prachi. apni pithaaki galthiya dhohoraa rahi ho. na woh sabke saath insaaf kar sake aur nathum insaaf kar paoge. neev se dhoor jaakar thum use hushi nehi. balki zindhaagi bar ke liye dhardh aur aasoo dhogi. thum apni poori zindagi apni pyar ke liye thadh pogi. thumari baap ki thara. abhibhi waqth he. roklo is aaney vaali than hayi aur thoofan ko. warne isbaar yey thoofan ham sabh ko thabaa kardegi. aur jeene keliye kuch nehi bachega. kuch bhi nehi.
dhadhi leaves. prachi looks into inder's photo.
the shaadhi scene starts rolling. people are milling about. two mandaps are made side by side. prachi is ready n staring into space wen someone shouts " dhono hi bhaaraath aagayi"
again prachi recalls dhadhi's words.
neev and sanjay is met in the door by dhadhi n premlatha. both of them hav tears in their eyes. after goin inside sanjay asks neev
sanjay: ye ham kiya kar rahe he?
neev: hum us ladki ki dil ki huwaish puri kar rahe hai jisey hum dhono pyar karthey hai(this is a very fav line of mine taken from mujhse dhosti karogi...couldnt help myself 😛 . had to include it here 😳 )
sanjay gets confused by this statement. he doesnt love prachi n has no idea neev knows abt his deal with prachi. b4 sanjay can ask neev wat he meant niharika comes and tel neev to sit in the mandap. mohorath's time is running out( this niharika always comes in the most crucial time 😡 )
prachi n ayesha is seen comin down with some sahelis .
both of them comes and wen ayesha goes to sit neev stops her. he turns to the sanjay-prachi mandap n tells that first prachi n sanjay wil get married. every1 present is surprised. niharika tries to say something but ayesha seconds neev's statement.
now the table is turned. instead of NA marriage PS one wil happen first. neev tells panditji to start the marriage. neev gives prachi a calculatin n speculatin look.
PS shaadhi starts. after the pooja n all, the pandit tells them to stand up for pheres. when prachi stands up she's flooded by memories of NP moments, childhood as well as recent ones. then she recalls her father's words on the day of her marriage to varun ( inder tells her dat she cant get any1 better than neev as her life partner) then prachi recalls again her fathers words just b4 her marriage to neev ( where inder talks abt broken promises n how it haunts u ur whole life).. during the pheres prachi's mind swirls with all these plus dhadhi's words. neev-ayesha is seein throwin flowers at PS.
after the phere's its time for mangalsoothra n sindoor. wen sanjay lifts the hand to put sindoor prachi's eyes collides with neev. gettin a panicky feelin prachi stops sanjay from puttin the sindoor. every1 gets shocked 😲 .prachi tells sanjay that she cant marry him. she's in tears.
niharika couldnt believe it. she taunts prachi.
niharika: wah wah. ye theesri bhaar he ke thum shaadhi ki mandap se waapas jaarahey ho. thumare liye shaadhi ek khel hoasaktha hei lekin hamaari liye nahin.
she turns towards neev and tels him to marry ayesha. neev looks towards prachi n then to ayesha. then quite suddenly he takes ayesha's hands and take her to the mandap, n tels the pandit to start the shaadhi.
prachi couldnt believe it. neev has vowed that she wont marry ayesha if PS doesnt get married. y has neev changed his mind? again the second attempt at marriage starts. this time neev with ayesha. once again durin the sindoor time prachi recalls ayesha's words on how she would get to hav sindoor put on by neev. prachi shouts STOP! neev, ayesha, dhadhi, niharika n the entire household is shocked. for the second time that night every1 is rendered speechless. the audience waits eagerly to c how the drama would unfold now.

( wil neev put sindoor on ayesha's forehead? wat wil niharika do? how does prachi convince neev not to marry ayesha? wil ayesha let go of her plan of splittin NP without a fight? wat would she do? n most importantly is NP finally goin to get married? 😳 )

all the marriages seems to stop b4 the sindoor guess v should call this drama "sindoor" now 😆
ok guys thats all for now 😳

wil post the next part soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: prettyzinta

i like the story i think ekta wiil take this idea from u



im hopin she wil include me in the kayamath creative team 😉 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow it's grt please continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow it's grt please continue

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