neev prachi fanfic..part:2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi , im back vt d continuation of my NP fanfic.

Ok d first part was dat of haldi ceremony n now my second part is abt sangeet ceremony - d day after d haldi ceremony

SANGEET CEREMONY:

(prachi,dadi,premlata,sowmya,mami n naintara

r sitting in prachi's room n selecting a dress

4 prachi)

DADI: prachi kal maine tumhe jo jewellery dee thi

na uspar yeh dress bohot suit karega

shaam ko yehi pahenna

PRACHI:ji dadi

PREMLATA: betiyaan kitni jaldi badi hojati hai

na ma aisa lagta hai ki kal ki hi baat

hai humari choti si prachi jo

gudiyon se khela karti thi aaj uski

shaadi hone waali hai

DADI:haan premlata aur main bohot khush hoon

ki prachi ko neev jaisa jeevansaathi mila hai

jo use bohot khush rakhega

PREMLATA: aap theek keh rahi hai ma

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(EVENING)

( all d ladies r 1 side n d mens r on d other..)

( neev goes 2wards d hall, dadi comes n tells him)

DADI: neev tum yahan kahan aarahe ho

yeh sirf ladies function hai

tum yahan nahi aa sakte

jaao wahan sabke saath baetho

NEEV: dadi pls aisa mat kahiye

mujhe andar aane deejiye i promise ki main

chupchap ekjaga baeth jaunga

DADI:neev tum nahi aasakte (she closes d door)

( neev dresses himself as girl - he wears

salwar kameez,places a wig on his head n

applies makeup (looks really cute as a girl)

n comes n sits near d ladies..)

(function begins)

(naintara,sowmya n purvi r dancing on d

song mere haathon mein nao nao......)

( prachi is sitting in d middle-looking

gorgeous in a purple lehenga

neev is constantly staring at prachi..)

( sum ladies come near neev n sits beside him

de catch neev's hand n says..)

LADIES: arey wah kitni sundar ho tum

tumhara naam kya hai beti?/😉

NEEV: neev!

LADIES: kya yeh kaisa naam hai?

NEEV:i mean neevi.. actually mera naam nivedita

hai to sab mujhe pyaar se neevi bulate hai

aap chahe to mujhe neev bhi bula sakte hai😊

LADIES: neev, yeh to usi ladke ka naam hai na

jiski shaadi prachi se hone waali hai😳

NEEV: really , what a coincidence!😊

( he tells himself-kahan phas gaya yaar)

LADIES:main apne bete ke liye tumhari tarha hi ek

sundar susheel aur hatti katti ladki

chahti hoon agar tum haan karo to

main baat chalaun..😆

NEEV:( kya solid cheez hai yaar insaan hai ya

machine chalti hi jarahi hai rukti hi nahi

ji aunty uske liye aapko mere mummy papa se

baat karni hogi..

LADIES:wah! kya sanskkar hai ab to main tumhe

hi apne ghar ki bahu banaungi

NEEV:(patli gali se nikalle neev

he gets up frm der n ...)

(prachi sees 2 neev n he sees 2 prachi..)

kisi ne nazar se nazar jab miladi

meri zindagi jhoomkar muskuradi

zubaan se to hum kuch na bol sake

magar nigahon ne dil ki kahani sunadi

PRACHI: main kuch samjhi nahi

NEEV:tum aaj tak kuch nahi samjhi

to ab kya samjhogi...

PRACHI:aapne kuch kaha..

NEEV:haan main keh raha tha ki...

i mean keh rahi thi ki

(premlata comes)

PREMLATA:prachi tumhe dadi bula rahi hai

(prachi leaves)

NEEV:aunty aap bohot khoobsurat hai

PREMLATA: nahi nahi tum to zyada sundar ho

waise maine tumhe pehchaana nahi

tumhara naam kya hai?

NEEV:main mr. n mrs. Batliwala ki beti hoon

aur mera naam nivedeeta hai

PREMLATA:acha main yaheen hoon

agar kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho to

mujhe bulalena

NEEV:so sweet of u aunty!

(after d dance performances der is a mimicry

de enact neev n prachi-sowmya as prachi

n purvi as neev-de do d usual tom n jerry

run around n all dat neev n prachi usually does

ven de meet...-neev n prachi seems 2 b very

impressed by d mimicry)

(after all d naach gaana n ched chaad all d girls n

d ladies form a round n begins 2 dance, neev 2

joins dem-he bcums energetic n uncontrollable

while dancing dat his wig suddenly falls down

every1 stops dancing n sees himn r shocked

but he is unknown abt all dis n is continuously

dancing..)

(dadi n premlata comes near neev)

(every1 shouts neev!!!)

DADI:neev tumhe ladkiyon mein ghusne ka bohot

shauk hai na to ab dekhti hoon tum

kaise bachoge... ladkiyon...😕

(all d ladies comes 2wards neev vt sandals in

der hands 2 beat him...)

(neev starts flirting vt d oldies..)

durakht ke paymane pe chilman-E-husn

ka furkat se sharmana

durakht ke paymane pe chilman-E- husn

ka furkat se sharmaana

yeh line samajh mein aaye to mujhe batana😆

(next he turns 2wards a gul-

gives him a paper n says...)

dekho mujhe hai kitna pyaar tumse

ab to haan karo...

agar ab bhi hain inkaar

to yeh letter aage pass karo😃

(all d oldies n d guls start beating neev)

(neev catches d gul's hand n says...)

woh ladki kitni pyaari thi

jisko aankh maari thi

woh sandal kitni bhaari thi

jo usne sar par maari thi😆😆😆

( he quickly runs away from der)

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xox.iloveyou thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
😆 😆 neev as a girl..lol loved it continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
neev as a girl wid make up n all........ 🤣 🤣 ........nevedita ki shaaadi 😆 😆 😆 .........amazing fatima its awesum.cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
thanx mages
well shud i continue it???
Mages thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just continue it yaar...yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok lela thanx ill continue it

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