Socha na tha-ff 4 Neev-Prachi

PART-1....Neev is
a middle class guy who is
crazy about music.his gr8est
ambition is 2 become a gud
playback singer.his friends r
Alaap&purvi.Purvi is the
daughter of a famous
music director Anandji.Neev's plan is 2 get
a chance from him 2 sing 4 a
movie.P has given him
hopes.he stays in the outhouse
of a rich family.a smart
old lady called Arundathi
stays there with her
grandchildren prachi{19yrs old} &
shamit{11yrs old}.her son
Inder & wife Amrita r in
america.One day in the
morning,Neev hears a sweet
female voice :dadi,i'm going 2
college. N was eager
2 see her.he looks thru the
window.he sees a girl going
out on a bike.he cud see only
her back.short
top-jeans...silky hair.after a
few days,shamit comes 2
see ronit with a request:can u
do 1 favour? N:yes
sure. shamit:she told 2 take
the book thats kept on the
top of the cupboard. N:who is
this 'she'? shamit:my
luvly sister prachi.N
smiles.he remembers seeing her
back 1day .he wants 2 see her
face. he goes there &
takes the book from the top of
the cupboard.the shy
girl{prachi} extends her arms
from the room 2 reach the
book. N smiles:cum out of
room. she cumes out
slowly.N was shocked 2 see
her .bcoz she was looking
horrible.she was in a pink
salwar.she hs worn a big
black framed spectacle.her
teeth were that horrible...as
if its going 2 cum out of the
mouth.N gives her the
book. p smiles:thanku..
N goes out
immediately.he was feeling
awkward remembering her
horrible smile. p & shamit
in the room.shamit
laughs:that poor fellow ran
away with his life.he got
scared. p laughs. she
removes her spectacle & the
duplicate teeth she had worn 2
fool N. shamit:didi,u
wear it always.u look better
in it. p becomes
angry:u naughty boy.....they
dance 2 the song...its the
time 2 disco...suddenly
hearing dadi's voice they stop
the music & pretend 2 be
studying. dadi cumes:gud,u both
r studying.every1 knows that
u'l study well with gud
culture if ppl stay with me.
p-shamit felt funny.
dadi:ur dad is online..they
become so happy that they
rush 2 take the Ph. shamit
talks.p takes the
reciever from him:hello
daddy,how r u?i'm fine...N
passes by...he looks at her
thru the window with a weird
feeling.he cud'nt see her face
.suddenly p turns
back.N was surprised 2 see
p's normal
appearance. p did'nt see
him.she continues talking:u
hav a surprise 4 me?whats
that?its a suspense? u'l bring
it when u cum here next
time?o!daddy,u r so
sweet.....N
whispers:prachi,u r also beautiful....

gud work yaar.
bt pls cont soon.

hey can u write it all together plzzz..
its irritating readin in the way u hav wrtn...
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..write it in a simple way...
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priya

plz continue itz very good, but i agree wid pri cud u pls put it 2getther in a simple way instead of doin it in a column

PART-2...Neev:prachi u r also sweet like ur dad....the next day when p goes near
her bike,N was seen b4 her.she gets shy,bcoz her
identity is out now.
N:so.. were playing a
drama...P:what drama?what
did i do? N:why did u fool me?
P:u got fooled
easily bcoz u r foolish.what can i do 4 that? N
becomes angry.but he controls.he becomes sweet purposefully:why did u hide ur
pretty face? p gets impressed by that statement.
she laughs:bcoz i wanted 2 tease u? ronit smiles:but why?
she:simply...she takes her bike & goes away with a
smile on her face. N tells himself:i'm going
crazy...is it luv?or simply an attraction? he sings & dances around in that spirit:dil to paagal
hai..
Purvi:neev,who is in ur mind?
N:music. P:no 1 else? he:who
else can take that
place? P:i can't believe it seeing u singing &
dancing like a mad person.   ;   ; N becomes embarrased.
Alaap laughs.
N:anyways,2morow,there is a song recording.u cum with us.the super singer Rocky is the male singer.and the 1 &
only purvi is the female
singer.
N:u r so lucky purvi
P::1 day that
luck will cum 2 u neev.
hesmiles. he also goes 2 see the recording.he sees the song recording & enjoys.he
dreams -...N singing in
the place of rocky. P
intoduces him 2 Anandji. P:plz
giv me a chance 2 sing 4 a movie . A:i
can't tell u yes
immediately.1st let me hear ur
song.
N gets tensed.so his voice does'nt
cum out properly.he was very weak in singing. inderji
becomes angry:this is ur song?& u r so prowd.u want 2 sing in my movie?rubbish.
he does'nt even listen 2 P's
words. P:neev,why r u getting tensed?u were so energetic. he:i dunno how it
happened. she:anyways,u hav 2 take practise. he:ok...
N goes 2 see Anandji's
house.he becomes angry:why r
u here again?i told u no,u can't sing,so no chance 4 u.
he becomes sad.but he does'nt
show that. he:no problem sir.plz giv me sum other
job.i've financial problems.
A:can u do cooking?
N was confused. Purvi
shows action 2 tell yes from a small distance. so N
shakes his head. A:u no
cooking? N:yes sir.
A:so 2day onwards u can do cooking here. he:ok
sir. A goes.Pcumes.
N:purvi,i dunno
cooking at all. P:its
ok,i'll help u.neev,its a gud chance 2 get close 2 my dad.u'll get a chance 2 prove ur talent. N
smiles:thats my hope. N
serves food.he was tensed
about A's reaction.
A tastes it:u r a gud
cook. N:thanku sir.i'm
also a singer. A teases:that i no.that day i had
heard ur song no.
N:sir...thats bcoz of my tension.
A does'nt mind it.he
feels funny. P consoles
him. N goes back.he sees
prachi's bike.he goes &
touches it smoothly.he kisses
it.he hears a laughter.it was shamit's.N gets
embarassed:full of dust.i was
cleaning it.. shamit smiles & goes out with his cricket
bat. p brings a plate full
of galebies & ladoos
without others' knowledge & keeps it on N's table
thru the window.she hoped that seeing this he will
search 4 her.p hides
herself 2 see N's reaction
seeing it. N had seen it,but hid himself from
p.he cud guess p's
plan.so he pretends 2 be crazy about these sweets.he
does'nt look 4 her,instead of that he eats it fast as if he was starving 4 1 week.p becomes angry &
goes away.seeing it,N laughs.he felt funny.p
keeps a paper piece on N's table thru the window
& goes.N sees the paper,takes it & reads.."fool,bloody fool...." N becomes angry.

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very gud work
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pls post summore

gud going yaar.
simply rocking part. 👏
plssssssss cont asap.......

Part-3....Prachi & sukriti were cuming back from the

college. S:how was
2day's class? P:oh,boring

yaar...i was not at all
listening. Neev with tuff
face

stands b4 them. p
whispers 2 S:this is that

fellow..S laughs.N
cud'nt stand them teasing.

N:prachi,i want 2 talk 2
u.plz cum 2 the park.i'll

wait 4 u. P:i'll think about
it{with

headweight}..N waits 4
p at the park.she does'nt

cum.he gets really irritated.
but after sumtime she

cumes. N was angry:why did
u becum late? P:i was

not late..accoding 2 me..i cum
only when i feel like..

N:ok..he takes out the piece
of paper p had kept
on
his table:whats this?
she:can't u see?its a

paper.very funny..R:i no
that.but whats written

here? she:can't u read
english? he:yes,thats why i
asked
u.
she:i've written that u r a
fool,bloody fool! N

loses his control:stop it.in
the beginning itself i new

that u r naughty.but i took it
as a funny thing.but now
u
r crossing ur limit.u don't
no who i am.u no,when i

was in the college,i've done
many notorious things.

p laughs:so u r
adventerous.let me hear ur

adventures.tell me...tell
me....N:i won't tell u.but

i'll show. he keeps her
tightly close 2 his chest &

kisses her. p screams at
him:u brute!how cud u do

this 2 me?this is the way u
hav 2 behave 2 a girl? N

becomes upset:i'm sorry..i did
this 4 fun. she:this is

how u shud hav fun?i'll tell
this 2 dadi...& 2

every1...she runs away.N
becumes upset & goes 2 see

allap-purvi. he:i did a
blunder. N:what did u

do? N tells
everything.they were shocked.

A:neev,this is not a silly
thing.u hav insulted a

girl in a public place.if she
files a sexual harassment

case,u'll be put into the
jail. N gets tensed:then

what can i do? A:go there
during the nite.u take

all ur things & escape without
their knowledge. 3of them go
there.only N gets
inside.he

goes 2 his room & takes all
his things.suddenly he was

shocked 2 see p standing
b4 him. N gets

embarrased. P:so,u r
planning 2 escape from here.

N:no,i was arranging
everything. P:u

can't escape now.i've called
every1 here 2morrow.let

them cum & giv u punishment.
N:its my request.plz

don't spoil my future.
she:this u had 2 think b4.
he:i

did that,bcoz u made me angry.
P:so when u bicum

angry,u kiss others?
N:no,i kiss only u.bcoz i

thot u...P:what did u think
about me?u thot i luv u?

N:leave it plz..u can giv me
any punishments.but

don't insult me b4 others.
she:u're willing 2 accept any

punishment that i giv u?
he:yes. she:then u extend ur

right arm. N extends his
right arm after closing his

eyes.p felt funny seeing
his tensed face. she kisses

his arm.N opens his eyes
with surprise.he cud'nt

believe it. p was
shy.rN kisses her arm.then
they

hug each other. Pur:where is
this neev?i doubt

whether he is caught by them.
N:let me go & see.

she goes..she was shocked 2
see both of them hugging

each other.she smiles & goes
back 2 A:don't expect

him now.he won't cum.bcoz they
r n luv. A was

surprised. p runs away
from N with shyness.N

smiles at her.

omg!!!!!!!!!!!tooooooooooo gudddddddd yaarrrrrrr.
brilliant part.
this fic is really very very interesting.
can't w8 plzzzzzzzzzzzzz post next part soon. 👏