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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 25

KT is walking along the road.Four guys surround her on bikes.
"Hi cutie.."One guy calls her.
She is nervous.
Another guy:Are you coming with us?
Another guy:We will have fun.
KT loses her control:Stop it.
The other guy holds her hand:What?Don't shout.
KT:Leave my hand.
Suddenly someone removes his hand from her's.They all look at him.He is Manthan.
M:Don't touch her.
That guy:Who are you to say this?
Manthan has no answer.
He:Tell...
M:She is my fiancee.
KT is shocked.Those guys go away without saying anything.
KT:What did you say Manthan?You will never change.
M:Stop it.I lied to save you.Then also you are blaming me?
KT:You hate me.Right?Then why did you save me?
Manthan does'nt know that.
He thinks:Why did i save her?
KT:Tell Manthan.
Manthan goes away without saying anything.
KT keeps looking at him with a smile.When she turns back he looks at her.Then he walks away.
Their heart sings:
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal paye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
kutch bhi kaha na
kutch bhi suna na
phir bhi
bechain dil hai humara
behke kadam hai
mushkil main hum hai
dekho
sambhle bhala kaise yaara
chahe bina bhi
nazdeek hum chale aaye
shayad yahi toh pyaar hai..{Lucky}.

Ganga tastes a dish.
G:What a horrible dish!
Mohini feels insulted:I cook for you with effort.Then also you are insulting me.
G:I'm open.That's why.
M:Don't eat it if you did'nt like.I can't cook again for you.Horrible girl.
Ganga loses her control:What did you say?
She puts the vessel down.
All are shocked.
M:Hey...what did you do?Are you mad?
Mohini raises her hand to slap her.She holds Mohini's hand:I'm not Prachi Bhabhi.
Ganga looks at Ronit:Ronit...let us leave this house.I can't tolerate her anymore.She always irritates me.She imposes her rules and regulations on me.Wear this.Eat this.Don't go out.I'm fed up.
R:But Ganga..
G:Or should i leave alone?
R:Ok..cool down.
Ronit looks at Mohini:All daughter in laws can't tolerate you like Prachi bhabhi.
Mohini looks at Ganga:Prachi was better than you.

Ronit and Ganga leave the house.

After a few days...
Mohini goes near Milind:Milind..Are you thinking of Prachi?
Milind does'nt open his mouth.He looks upset.
M:Then bring her back.
Milind is shocked:What?Any new game?
M:No.Now i understand how nice was Prachi.Ganga taught me a good lesson.Try to get her back.I will pray for you.
Milind smiles.

Parvati opens the door hearing the calling bell's ring.She is shocked to see Milind.
Om and others also come.They are also shocked.
O:Milind?
MILIND:I want to see Prachi.I want her.
Bhoomi:Why don't you leave her alone?You destroyed her life and now again you want to...
MILIND:You all know how much i love her.
B:Then how did Ayesha enter your house?
MILIND:My mom did that.I have no role to play.I love only Prachi.Please believe me.
All are confused.
Prachi overhears it.She is shocked.
She thinks:How did they all know what Milind feels for me?I did'nt tell anyone about Milind's behaviour with me in the rain.Then how?Milind loves me?Why my family is reacting like this?I can't understand anything.
She comes forward.
MILIND:Prachi!I came to take you back.
P:What?
Suddenly Milind remembers the doctor's words that reminding Prachi of the past is dangerous.
MILIND:Nothing.Without his knowledge his purse falls down.A photo falls down from his purse.
Prachi takes it.She is shocked,because it is Milind and Prachi's wedding photo.
She looks at others with tears.All are tensed.
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was a great one dear, so the story is moving forward good to see some progress is prachi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanx Jass 🤗
I luved dis part 😉 Atlast sumbody put Mohini straight 😛
I luv Ganga n Ronit..
Now dat Mohini has learnt her lesson n Prachi also saw her wedding pic hope now every thing gets settled soon 😳
Plzz cont. want to knw hw Chi is going to react

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Posted: 14 years ago
Brilliant update Jasmine..
Plz cont soon.
thanx for the update.
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Posted: 14 years ago


Pt 26

Prachi:What is this?Please tell...i can't live like this.
Prachi's tears flow like a river.Parvati goes near her.
P:Don't be upset.I will tell you everything.
Parvati tells her everything.Prachi is shocked.
Pra:No....
She looks at Milind's face.She remembers his behaviour in the rain.She can't bear it anymore.She runs to her room.
Milind's eyes are also full of tears.
Om:Milind...now you go.We will make her understand.It will be difficult for her to digest it.
MILIND:I understand uncle.

Om,Parvati,Bhoomi and Manthan are with Prachi in her room.
P:Prachi...we know that it's not easy for you to accept the truth.But please try to...
Pra:Mom..please...i can't..
O:Prachi..Milind loves you very much.You will not get a better partner.You think.

Prachi prays to Lord Krishna.
P:Krishna..i have always shared everything with you.Is it true that you gave me a good husband like you?Is it true that you gave me a good baby like you?What should i do lord?
Her tear drops fall down.

Prachi is sleeping.
She dreams..
The guy whose face is unveiled comes towards her:Come to me.
She looks at him deeply.It is Milind.
P:Milind!
She is surprised.
Prachi wakes up from her sleep.

The next morning..
All are in the dining room to have breakfast.
Prachi enters the room.
P:Mom..dad...i have taken a decision.I have decided to accept the truth.I'm willing to go back to my husband's house.
All are surprised.They smile.
O:I will tell this happy news to Milind.
Om phones up Milind:Milind...Prachi is willing to stay with you.Come and collect her.
Milind is surprised:Really?I will come now itself.
O:This is a new beginning.Shall we conduct your wedding with Prachi again?
Milind is surprised:What?

Bhoomi to Manthan:I'm scared Manthan.Prachi was happy here.Will she have to suffer again?
M:I don't know.But one thing is sure.God made her go back to Milind jeeju.That means jeeju is her life partner.

Parvati baths Prachi with malai.Prachi's mind is filled up with pain.Parvati ties her hair.Parvati dresses her nicely for the wedding.
Milind and Prachi exchange garlands.Prachi feels strange when Milind puts sindoor.His eyes are shining with happiness.His eyes blossom with his love for Prachi.She does'nt look at him.
Shiv goes near them and gives them a boquet.

S:You won Milind.I failed.But i'm happy for you.Wish you a happy married life.
Milind smiles.
P:Thank you Sir.
Anirudh goes near them:I feel very happy for both of you.I regret for misunderstanding Prachi.
Milind smiles.Prachi smiles with pain.

Milind and Prachi reach Milind's house.Mohini receives them with aarthi.
Mohini brings MayanMilind:This is your baby Prachi.
P:I don't know how to look after babies.
Prachi is tensed.
M:Don't worry..your maternal feelings will come automatically when you carry him.
Mohini gives Mayank to her.When Prachi takes him in her arms he smiles:Maa..Maa...
Seeing Mayank's dimpled smile Prachi becomes happy.
P:So cute...
She kisses him.
Milind is happy.
Ayesha was watching it from behind.Milind sees her.
MILIND:What are you looking at Ayesha?Why are you staying here?Now it's time for you to leave this house.
Ayesha is hurt.Her eyes become red with tears.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

great update jasmine...plz update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic, very nice loved it.

Part 24 Part 25 & Part 26 all are great i really liked them, now waiting for Makank & Prachi's interaction.
Edited by 111priyan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
pt 27

Ayesha can't speak anything.
A:Mohini aunty..you brought me here by giving me false promises.But...
M:I brought you here sincerely.But i realized that i'm wrong.Nobody can separate Milind from Prachi.God chose Prachi as his life partner.It can't be changed.I'm sorry.
A:How can you say that easily?You destroyed my life.
She cries loudly.Others don't know what to do.Slowly Prachi moves forward.
P:Ayesha!
Ayesha pushes her down.Milind helps Prachi to get up from the floor.
Milind shouts:Ayesha!How dare you?
Rakesh comes:Ayesha!
A:Dad..
R:I told you when you chose the wrong path.But you did'nt listen to me.Now see the condition.
Ayesha cries:Dad....
R:Now you have no place here.Let us go from here.
A:Dad...
R:Come..
Ayesha goes slowly to Rakesh.
Rakesh looks at Prachi:I don't deserve a good daughter like you since i dumped you when you were small.I envy Om for getting a good daughter like you.But i bless you.You will have a good married life with Milind.
Prachi is numb.
Rakesh takes Ayesha away.

Prachi pampers Mayank.
Milind watches it with a smile.
MILIND:You know Mayank missed you a lot.
Mayank falls asleep.She places him on the bed.
MILIND:Shall i tell you something?You look very beautiful in the wedding costume.
P:I will change my dress and come.
She goes and changes her dress.She is in a saree now.

Prachi sits on the bed which is decorated with rose petals.Milind sits close to Prachi and looks deeply into her eyes.He holds her hand.She feels uncomfortable.Milind goes closer to her and touches her face.She bursts into tears.
Milind is shocked:What happened Prachi?
Prachi moves away from him.
P:I can't remember anything.I can't be a wife.
Milind feels pain.
He stammers:Pra..Pra...Prachi..
P:I can't...sorry...
MILIND:Don't worry...i will not desturb you.You sleep on the bed.I will sleep on the sofa.
His eyes are wet.
He goes and pretends to sleep on the sofa.Prachi wipes her tears.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update Jasmine.
plz cont soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it , very nice continue soon im sure Milind will make her fall in love with him all over again.

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