FF:Freaky story!Last Part:Pg 33(20/08/09) - Page 6

Originally posted by: siya..

😲 one page and font size 12?! noo it shud be 4-6 pages with font isize 10

Minu This is your belated Birthday gift. I dedicate this part to Aritha mama,Shree aunty,Sam,Sia,Shravu,Mehanandita,Neelam and asmi.

Hope you enjoy this part

I made it longer than usual

Enjoy!!!!

Part 4

At 4 am,Mayuri woke up and found everyone sleeping.She looked at of the window and it was raining heavily She slowly made her way downstairsShe entered the kitchen she took the secret item from the freezer. Shabir woke up,He turned around and Mayuri was missing he looked around and found Sara sleeping uncomfortably on the couch.

He planted a kiss on her forehead and carried her to the bed. Sara woke up all of a sudden and smiled at shabir. "What are you doing?" She asked. "You looked uncomfortable sleeping on the couch so I thought you will feel better if you sleep on the bed"he replied.Sara looked around the room. "Where is my baby? "She asked. "No Idea"He replied.They both went downstairs and found. Shabir looked out of the window and noticed that it was raining heavily. "Sara,I know where she is"

He said smiling to himself.They both went to the terrace and found Mayuri dancing and eating her ice-cream.Mayuri then sat down on the swing and put the ice-cream on her mouth and started rubbing it as if she was applying lipstick.Then she licked the ice-cream on her mouth and repeated the process.Sara quickly went to get a towel while Shabir stood there watching his daughter. Mayuri spotted her father and smiled. "Curly Hair Dude!" She yelled at him. Shabir went and sat next to her.

He took the Ice-cream off her and started eating. "It's my ice-cream,give it back to me" Cried Mayuri.Shabir gave the Ice-cream back immediately. Sara came and stood near the door. "Both of you come inside"Sara yelled. Both father and daughter refused.After a while Sara went to sleep thinking there was no use in persuading them to come. "Your life story is interesting" Said Mayuri while munching on her ice-cream. "I tought you fell asleep" asked Shabir. "I fell asleep when you were saying that you found hitler"She replied. Shabir laughed.

"Why do you call your mom Hitler?" He asked. "You ask too many question Curly Hair dude but I will answer them, I call mama Hitler because this house is like a dictatorship everything goes according to the dictator and the dictator of the house is mama so I call her Hitler.If you don't like me calling her Hitler then I will call her Moussolini.He was a the Italian dicator. If you don't like that either then I will call her Stalin." "The russian dictator, I don't mind you calling her Hitler now."He interruped. "Why do you call me Curly Hair dude(CHD)?"He asked. "Well I call you Curly Hair Dude because you got Curly Hair"She replied.

" My turn to ask you quetions,Have you ever had a stalker?" She asked curiously. "Yes I did, Her name was Lizzy, she was pretty but as usual it didn't work out well" He laughed. "Anyone else you didn't mention?" Mayuri asked angrily. "I forgot to mention Safina, She was funny but as usual it didn't work out."He laughed again.

"How didn't it work out?" Mayuri asked. "Well it might sound silly but I always believed that when I kiss my soulmate it will sparkle."he said dreamily. "So you kissed all of them but it didn't sparkle"Mayuri asked rather shocked. "Well I liked kissing all of them specially Minu,she was the best sadly it didn't sparkle." He said with dissapointment.

"Did it Sparkle when you kissed Hiler?She asked. Shabir nodded. Mayuri bursted out laughing."Oh my god papa,you're so crazy" She said as she laughed. "So are you,now go to sleep"he ordered. They both went downstairs and entered Mayuri's room and found Sara asleep. Trying not to wake her up.Shabir went to his room to change into new pairs of pyjamas while and Mayuri did the same.Shabir made Mayuri sleep in the middle as she was the lightest out of all of them suddenly

Sara put her her arms around Mayuri. "Teddy bear give me a kiss"She said in her sleep.Shabir went red and Mayuri made faces. "Not now sweetheart" Shabir replied. Sara got angry and kicked Mayuri. "I want one now or I won't let you sleep"

Sara said. Shabir closed Mayuri's eyes and quckly kissed her and Sara fell asleep and stopped sleep talking. All three of them slept peacefully.

The Morning

Everyone gathered near the Dining table for breakfast. Minu entered the house and headed towards the dining room. She went up to Shabir and pulled him by his collar. Everyone were shocked execpt Mayuri. "How can you forget my birthday?"She yelled. Shabir kissed her on the cheek and apologised. Everyone smiled at their childish act while Sara didn't seem to enjoy the scene. Mayuri could clearly see that her mother was jealous. "I got a surprise for you"he said.Minu got really excited and asked "What is it".He took her hand and l went to the living room.

She spotted a basket. She went to take a look and found a cute puppy in it. "The puppy is so adorable,Thank you"She said and gave him a hug. Back in the dining room Sara got impatient and made her way to the living room. Saw Minu playing with the puppy. "Where is Shabir?" Sara asked. Minu who was too busy playing with the puppy didn't hear Sara. Sara saw Shabir reading a book on the stairs.

Later on she went to give Mayuri her Rose milk.She entered the room and put the rose milk on the table. She was about to exit when Mayuri called out "Mum". Sara turned around. She sat next to her daughter. "Maa, Papa said that it sparkled when he kissed you, Can I know how it happened?" Mayuri asked. Sara looked down guiltily. "I got someone to put sparkle over us, I loved your dad a lot, I didn't want to lose him" Sara said in a haste. Shabir heard her confession.

Sara saw him and walked upto him. "I am sorry" She said. Shabir smiled and hugged her."Well if you didn't do that I would have never got married" He laughed.Vasu and Shravu came and saw the love birds hugging while Mayuri was too busy on the computer. They both laughed out loud making the couple jerk.

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In my opinion this part is quite lame...I tried to make it longer...Hope you like it The story is going nowhere but don't worry I will fix everything😆

wow daughter and fathers relationship is so unique...lol..nice update

awwwweee so shweet of u mayuri🤗will read da part and comment soon :) :)

Originally posted by: siya..

wow daughter and fathers relationship is so unique...lol..nice update

Originally posted by: MiNaKsHiii

awwwweee so shweet of u mayuri🤗will read da part and comment soon :) :)

thanks Mayu.😊

nice part
loved shabbir and mayuri scene in rain😛
like their interaction,and bed room scenes with sara.
wicked sara hired someone to sparkle😉
continue soon

it was awesome.

Originally posted by: _ishaara_

thanks Mayu.😊

now i like thsi one. (esp the sparkle bit!😆) even if i am no where to be seen. 😡 and yes i hate your Sara!