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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ShubS

I really hope your lecturer doesn't have this flu, it's pretty bad!!

im sure he doesnt! they were just makin fun of his absence that day as the very same morning swine flu was in the news...😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: layla44

Shubs, ''yes, definitely '' is muchmuch muuuuuch nice to read..😆

hehee.. will post later today! :D

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Part 2:

Ayesha and Soumya had brought Prachi back to the party after a while. Prachi had apologized to the rest of the guests, who were mostly her former classmates. The party had moved on and later, by midnight, people started leaving one by one. Soumya was one of the firsts to leave, as her fianc was waiting to talk to her over the phone, a routine she had got into since her engagement. After everyone left, Ayesha and Neev too had taken Prachi's leave. Prachi had wanted to ask either Ayesha or Soumya to stay with her for the night, for she still felt terrible after what had happened in the party. But since she knew Neev was to take Ayesha to his village to get her meet his parents the next morning, she decided against asking Ayesha to stay.

"Don't you think Prachi overreacted? Ranveer isn't a bad guy. From what he was telling me yesterday, it seemed like he really liked Prachi and was looking forward to a long term relationship" Neev had commented as he drove towards Ayesha's little house to drop her there.

"I don't think she was interested in Ranveer at all. She only agreed to go out with him for our sake. But don't you know our Prachi? I am not surprised at her impulsive behaviour. This is not the first time she has done something like this. But let's get over it. I know it would be difficult for you to face Ranveer. But I am sure Prachi herself will apologize to him after a while." Ayesha spoke about her friend with confidence.

"Anyways, I really wonder if any man can impress this girl." Neev had sighed.

"Don't worry Neev. Everyone has someone specially made for him or her. It's just a matter of time, before you meet that person", Ayesha said smiling.

"Okay, darling. See you tomorrow at 6 am. Wear a nice saree for tomorrow. My parents are orthodox you see." said Neev stopping the car in front of Ayesha's place. Agreeing to what he said, Ayesha got ready to get out of the car, but Neev had stopped her by pulling her hand and smiled naughtily at her. Knowing what was in her boyfriend's mind, Ayesha had kissed him quickly on his cheek ran out of the car blushing.

Meanwhile, Ramu Kaaka, the house helper of the Shah mansion had started cleaning the living room where the party had taken place. Seeing the old man clearing things, Prachi had joined him too while he politely refused her help. However, Prachi insisted and collected the glasses and took them to the kitchen. Ramu Kaama had commented she would never change no matter how tall she grew. Prachi had smiled in agreement. Retiring to her bed that night, Prachi had found herself vulnerable and scared. She had shivered at the thought that this could be one of those dreadful sleepless nights she often went through. She thought of calling her Maamaji, but since he was in the US on a business trip, she knew it would be afternoon for him and he would be busy in one of his meetings. She opened her laptop and played some music, browsed websites randomly, but nothing got her interested. Giving up all activities, she went to the bed and curled inside her comforter. She had closed her eyes in the hope of some sleep, but her undefined feeling of loneliness was waking her up, as much as she wanted to run away from it. It was only by the early morning, she was able to sleep.

The same night in his new house, Milind had noticed his father, whom he lovingly called Baaba, unpacking his suitcase in his room. In order to help his father out, he started taking the clothes out and arranging them in the wardrobe. His sight fell on a photo frame that was amidst of the clothes, while his father tried to take it in his hand and hide it. Milind didn't need to see the photograph to realize what that might have been. He knew his father enough to understand that he was trying to hide from him his photograph with his sister Sukruti. Not wanting to resurface the old wounds, Milind enacted as if he didn't see the photograph at all and carried on with emptying the suitcase. Baaba had quickly put the photo frame in the drawer, knowing it would upset his son. Familiarizing his father with the air-conditioning, the shower and the lights in the room, Milind left to his own room.

Milind couldn't help recollecting the past and lamenting over it though he tried not to. His father, his sister and him were a happy family though his mother had died when he was a little boy. His Baaba had played the role of the mother too while he earned bread for them working as a clerk in a government office in Delhi. He had made sure his children got good education and even sold his property to pay their fees.

Milind and Sukruti had studied in the same college. Milind was 2 years senior to Sukruti in studies and also by age. Milind was a born leader and it had showed in his college life too where he was the president of the student society. With his sharp wits and his intolerance to injustice, he had earned a lot of followers in the college but a few enemies too, who didn't want to accept his popularity. One of them was Aalaap Mehta, who spent more time in showing off his machismo and money, than studying. The contradiction was that Milind's own sister Sukruti was fatally attracted to Aalaap, who was also her classmate, though she would be scared to take his name in front of her brother. Though Aalaap also had an immense liking for Milind's beautiful sister, he had taken pride that his enemy's sister was attracted to him.

Milind had once caught Aalaap trading narcotic drugs in the campus and wanted to get him suspended from the college. Aalaap had tried to use his influences and money, to make Milind not let the higher authorities in the college know of the drug business. But Milind wasn't the one to fall prey to Aalaap's tactics. Milind had gone a step ahead and exposed the whole drug supply gang in the college. This has led to Aalaap's suspension from the college, but with his father's influence he had gotten back after a few months. However, with the whole fiasco, he had lost his parents' faith and support for him. Sukruti had gotten closer to him as she was there for him during his bad times. But she had taken great care to hide it all from her brother who would have never allowed her to be friends with someone like Aalaap. Back in the college, Aalaap had kept away from Milind. With Sukruti's persistent pleadings, and his own conscience bothering him, he had slowly got out of his old gang, which had drawn him into drug dealing business.

After Milind left the college and joined a company as a web designer, Sukruti and Aalaap's love saga had taken off crossing all boundaries. After Sukruti finished her studies and started looking for a job, Raman Sharma, an old friend of her father, had brought a marriage proposal for her with his son Saket Sharma. Milind and Baaba were very happy with the proposal and had consulted Sukruti in the same matter. Sukruti had tried to adjourn the marriage giving the reasons of her wanting to find a job or studying further, but the since she was assured that she could do all that she wants to being the daughter in law of the Sharma family too, she was left with no reasons to deny this marriage proposal. She had gone through an emotional battle not able to decide what she should be doing, but one day her father had confided in her how contended he would be if he could see her as the Sharma daughter in law. That moment she had agreed to marry Saket and all the wedding preparations had been done with Milind taking charge. Sukruti had convinced Aalaap that she would never be able to marry him for she prefers sacrificing her love for her brother and her father. Aalaap had felt heartbroken for the first time in life, but he couldn't change Sukruti's decision.

But the day before her wedding, Sukruti had found out she was pregnant with Aalaap's child and hell had broken for her. She soon had called Aalaap and when he came to know about the news, he suggested that they should get married and raise their kid. Sukruti could never imagine killing her baby, when she wanted to consider an abortion, and the night before the wedding, she had eloped with Aalaap. They had married in the registrar's office the very next day. At the same time Milind and Baaba had found out that Sukruti had run away from home to marry Aalaap, as she had left a letter behind.

The shock and the shame had given Baaba a heart attack. Though the doctors had saved him from death, his health had suddenly deteriorated. Sukruti and Aalaap had taken refuge in Nagpur in one of Aalaap's friends' house. Sukruti had called her home after a few days and informed Milind that she was married now, but Milind had refused to speak to her and asked her to never call back. Sukruti had thought once her child is born, her father and brother would be fine, but to her misfortune in the third month of her pregnancy, she had a miscarriage. She had become depressed after that and Aalaap had taken her to Dubai, where he had found a job. Aalaap's parents had accepted his marriage to Sukruti though they were upset initially. Living in Dubai, Sukruti had made attempts to contact her brother but Milind had still been not able to come to terms that his darling sister not only had married Aalaap but also brought shame to him and his father, by running away the night before her arranged wedding.

Milind had taken his father to Mumbai to get him away from the snooping neighbours. Initially he had taken a job in Mumbai, but soon decided to start his own advertising agency. In about two years time, his company had grown into a position where he headed a team of 15 people. He had good profits, which allowed him to buy a new apartment of his own, to which he had moved with his father. It was his dream to present his father a house of his own, ever since he knew his father had sold their ancestral house, to pay for his and his sister's fees.

Dragging himself out of the memory lane, Milind had wondered if Sukruti was doing fine. He hated the prick he felt in his heart whenever he thought about his sister. If only things had been different, had wondered Milind, before he granted his tired body some sleep.

Edited by ShubS - 16 years ago

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Monu-SunNaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Thanks Shubs..great part, toh yeh baat hain, Sukriti is the estranged daughter and sister, Baba must still dote on his daughter seeing as he has kept her photograph. Milind was quite the model student. in his days.. :) I hope Milind will come to make peace with Sukku, time is great healer.

Continue soon :))

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Well, a lot had happened in this update. As usual nicely written. So there is a fissure in Milind-Suki relationship. Would Prachi help to bridge it once Michi get together, which I am presuming they would?

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Saima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Good to see a different Prachi!! hehe, i wonder why Neev didn't get mad/upset at Ranveer since he misbheaved with her with the whole pinching bit :S oh well, the story is progressing really well!! Thanx for the new FF! :DD

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Niki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

A great update Shubs and so well written. I kind of feel for Prachi a little she seems to be quite lonely and even though her friends mean well- they seem to have set her up with dates that are completely incompatible to her way of thinking and behaving.

I like the regard and understanding that Prachi shares with Ramu Kakka.

Looks like someone else is having a sleepless night too!! I really like this Milind, he comes across as an inteligent and responsible brother and son who is determined and focused - a man of principals. The story that you narrated Shubs regarding Sukruti and Alaap was quite an unfortunate one. It seems that everyone concerned suffered hugely as a direct consequence of Sukruti's attraction for Alaap. Although Baba and Milind have been unsuccessful in wiping out Sukruti's existence from their hearts, they still haven't spoken to her for so long. Really hope that time will have helped Milind to forgive and forget his sister's mistakes.

Lookinfg forward to the next part - Thanks

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Delena

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

beautiful shubs...milind and sukriti's relationships was very unfortunate...and prachi...m glad she ddn give an inch to that ranvir...wat is wit neev? true he's frends wit ranveer but y dont he find any fault in ranveer's behavior and want prachi and him to patch up???!!!
cant wait for the next...a truly an awsome update...continue soon..cant wait for michi to meet and fill up their sleepless nights

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layla44

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

nice update...prachi's gonna apologize to ranveer???? hmm...waiting to know...shes got only ramu kaka in the house??poor girl...she wants someone to talk to..

alaap turned out to be nice than expected...giving up on drug dealing and marrying sukriti..

well sukriti did accept her father's decision [like a gud girl] to marry saket till she came to know about the baby...but i guess she had no choice wen she came to know about her pregnancy..she had to marry alaap if she wanted a father for her baby...gosh, a difficult decision..hope her family come to know why she took the decision against them, soon....feel sad for her..lucky she got accepted by alaap's family...

ok, well her bro and baba are atleast thinking about her even thou they do not talk about her...thats nice..

do continue sooooon...

Edited by layla44 - 16 years ago

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

Thanks Shubs for a great update again....love the way the story is progressing. Poor Prachi is really lonely...no one to really call her own. On the flip side, Millind seems like avery responsible son, trying to keep his father happy and comfortable....but it seems that he hasn't come to terms with Suki's mistake and forgive her. I have a feeling that Prachi will help bridge this gap between brother and sister and daughter and father. Looking forward to MICHI meeting.

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