Dostana-Three part ff-Part-3-4/4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: mehanandita

fine dear, will try to update this week end, actually u see ia m not too gud in writing so lots of confusion and try to put the lines properly, thnks a lot dear, i am very glad u like it,

Okay dea i understand........Yea i really like ur ff i was glad to know u had taken it from a novel n m really eager to know how things progress in their relationship.

ahem bids? wats this? dostana as in abi-john? OMG this is much better than that dostana!! 🤣LMAO!! both michi and neesha are so in love with each other and hidin to each other?!! OMG!! this is so so cute!! the last para's had me in a state of shock wit excitement!!☺️ hehe...omg i want an update for this asap! u are so bad😒..u mad me so selfish😉!!
love u anyway❤️! plz continue soon...btw briliant briliant start!! very interestin🤗

Lovely start Bid

nice to see another ff from u bidnai, i liked part one. michi and neesha are cute.

Very nioce start

hahahah

Hey bid really nice update 😕😕😕why cant they tell each other about there love

Originally posted by: siya..

ahem bids? wats this? dostana as in abi-john? OMG this is much better than that dostana!! 🤣LMAO!! both michi and neesha are so in love with each other and hidin to each other?!! OMG!! this is so so cute!! the last para's had me in a state of shock wit excitement!!☺️ hehe...omg i want an update for this asap! u are so bad😒..u mad me so selfish😉!!
love u anyway❤️! plz continue soon...btw briliant briliant start!! very interestin🤗

😆😆😆Seriously never thought tht😆😆..........Aww thanks alot dea...........Yes dea very much......Aww thanx alot dea.........Glad u felt so dea............😆😆😆I can understand and i m happy makin u so selfish😉..........Awww thanx alot sweety luv u tooo🤗🤗🤗.........Do it soon dea.........Thanx dea so glad u liked it 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: may268

Lovely start Bid

for a minute looking at the title I thought it would be Neev-Milind..🤣

Love Michi

They are so cute

Of course Neesha even more cuter

Update soon

Thanx alot dea.......😆😆😆I understand completely.........Thanx dea.......I m u liked them........I m glad u liked them too............Do it soon😉

Originally posted by: Shabz.

nice to see another ff from u bidnai, i liked part one. michi and neesha are cute.

Thanx dea............I m so glad u did dea..........So true dea😃😃