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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#881

thnx for the another two Epilogue part darling😃

so u have broken your promise👏 ........... thnx a ton for this sweetie😳

neev is a healthy guy now😆 .......... & married to a girl & having three children .......... wow😲 ........... good to see an understanding & love bond between neev & neha😊 .......... ishan "katerina kaif" part was really superb😉 ....... finally michi have decidd to tell sahan about her biological dad😕 ............ hope prachi will not suffer plus the milsi-sahana relation also don't get affect

plz do continue soon😛

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
yay opti i am so happy there is more to this ff . cant wait to see how sahana will react to the news of milind not bein her biological farther gr8 part cont soon

Thanks jyothi. Lets see how she takes it and more importantly how the readers take it.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
thnx for the another two Epilogue part darling😃

so u have broken your promise👏 ........... thnx a ton for this sweetie😳

Well, the last update is farily complex so I am buying time!

neev is a healthy guy now😆 .......... & married to a girl & having three children .......... wow😲 ........... good to see an understanding & love bond between neev & neha😊 Neev has finally found his soul mate

.......... ishan "katerina kaif" part was really superb😉 ....... finally michi have decidd to tell sahan about her biological dad😕 ............ hope prachi will not suffer plus the milsi-sahana relation also don't get affectLet's see what happens.

plz do continue soon😛

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mehanandita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#884

loved this part, nice to see neev had found his partner, i like her too,
can't guess wht will happen wen sahana come to know abt her father,
hope everything ends well,
continue soon dear

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Niki

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Posted: 16 years ago

#885

Opti Iloved all the tree epilogues that you have written and I liked the way that you divided the epilogue into sections, the first one portraying MICHI's happy familiy life - Sahana has grown to be quite a bombshell, and Milind's best friend. Wonderful how he gently coaxed her to wear dignified clothes, if only all parents could handle their teenage children in this manner - life would be alot easier. Ishan and Sahana seem to be a typical quarrelling brother and sister who deep down care for each other so much. Your second part highlighted Neev's well deserved happiness in his life - with his Katrina Kaif lookalike wife and children. It seems that Neev got himself a gorgeous beauty who loves and understands him deeply. I like the way you linked his finding his wife through aquaintances that Milind had introduced to Neev. Milind kept his promise to keep him in touch with his daughter, and aptly invited him to her 16th.

The union of both families was written out very well Opti in your third part epilogue. Neev's reaction to his beautiful daughter was pretty emotional. I'm looking forward to reading the next part where Sahana will find out the truth about her biological father. I'm sure and hope, with the manner that Milind and Prachi have brought up their daughter with so much love and care she will understand the situation and accept the truth, and also appreciate even more what Milind has done for her and her mother. Don't know what to think will happen if this is not the case - that will probably be a whole new FF in itself!!

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#886

Originally posted by: mehanandita
loved this part, nice to see neev had found his partner, i like her too,
can't guess wht will happen wen sahana come to know abt her father,
hope everything ends well,
continue soon dear

Thanks Meha. Yes, Neev has found a life partner. Lets see what happens next.

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 16 years ago

#887

Still holding my breath Opti....dying to see Shahana's reaction to the news!!

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: AKANargis
Still holding my breath Opti....dying to see Shahana's reaction to the news!!

I am holding my breath too Nargis. As it is I am facing quite a lot of flak for this FF from the beginning. Don't want to be thrashed at the end too!

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 16 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: Opti

I am holding my breath too Nargis. As it is I am facing quite a lot of flak for this FF from the beginning. Don't want to be thrashed at the end too!

Don't worry about how it will be received by everyone....you can never please everyone...especially with a touchy subject like this. I, myself have mixed feelings...i understand both perspectives...but I am taking this as a fictional story...and reading it for sheer enjoyment. So please continue...looking forward to the next part!!

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Don't worry about how it will be received by everyone....you can never please everyone...especially with a touchy subject like this. I, myself have mixed feelings...i understand both perspectives...but I am taking this as a fictional story...and reading it for sheer enjoyment. So please continue...looking forward to the next part!!

I knew this is a controversial subject, the reason I took it up in the first place. There is not much fun walking the beaten path always. With DC I took a totally rosy path of FF writing. So I wanted to walk the thorny path with this one. I take this as a challenge to see how far I can narrate this story convincingly. It is not whether one accepts my view but whether one understands it.

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